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Reviews for Flutter

By : Rosebud
  • From DarkClaw on June 30, 2007
    omg i almost cried, that was good.
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  • From ANON - S_R on June 30, 2007
    ;___; It's so sad but sweet.

    I felt really sad for Sasuke and Naruto at the end of the story. Sasuke finally said the words Naruto wanted to hear, only he didn't hear them.

    Please write a second part/sequel. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I really want to see Naruto wake up and for them to get together again.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 29, 2007
    This was so sad!!!! I loved the lemon and also how Sasuke told Naruto he loved him and begged him to come back. I also love how he wouldn't leave Naruto alone and wouldn't allow them to pull the plugs on him. I hope at the end that Naruto was waking up!! If that is true, it would be wonderful if you could post one more chapter to show him waking up and for Sasuke to tell him he loves him and will give up Itachi for him, while Naruto is awake and can hear it. Wonderful story!! :)
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  • From ANON - Kool_Ayame on June 29, 2007
    That was cruel the way you ended it I was all hanging on to you every word then you stopped laughing very sadisticly. Wright more prewty Plewes. Smiles KA
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  • From Keyblyder on June 29, 2007
    I noticed in the description that you might be thinking of making this a two-shot..... All I have to say about that is...... IF YOU DON'T I THINK I JUST MIGHT DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! The story is SO SAD and you kinda left a cliffe with Naruto's heart fluttering and Sasuke looking up and thinking "Dobe....". So ya that is complete torture. Other than that your fic a very good one. Though now I am going to go through the whole day rather depressed.
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  • From ANON - toolazyagain on June 29, 2007
    I meant no offense whatsoever, like I said, you did a pretty good job at writing the story out. And I'm no spelling goddess, so I really can't blame you for spelling errors(like you said, no beta). If I wasn't so....well, chickenshit for sad stories I would have probably read it more thoroughly, but....ugh whatever. I just can't read these sad type of stories.....but if you managed to remind me of the doujin with your writing, then that most certainly means that your writing skills far exceed mine. So I'm just gunna say that you did a splendid job. You definitely put a lot of feeling into it. I was almost moved to tears....

    Here's a present for you: http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9664/sasunarulostbutterflypark0.jpg

    It got translated. :D

    Sorry for the bother....and I'll just shut-up now.
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  • From Rosebud on June 29, 2007
    In regards to: Tolazytosignin

    First off, I don’t think that you’re a b***** lol.

    Secondly, I did say that there were probably some mistakes in the story. I don’t have a BETA after all.

    And third, Yes. I was somewhat (picture) inspired by a Doujinshi that I looked at a while back. I can’t read Japanese fluently though --only names and greetings and really easy words-- so I didn’t know what was going on for the most part. (cluless o.O) I got the impression that Sasuke some how hurt his eyes and then he was mad at Naruto for something...

    And not that I need to explain myself, but when I sat down to write this story, my inspiration was to produce something really depressing and my idea’s came from a lot of different places, not just one. Some of them were from things that I’d written in the past (published and personal) and others were inspired from outside influences, but nothing so significant that I would need to give credit for it. The theme for this story was that Naruto loved Sasuke so much, that he would do anything for him; even if what he did unintentional hurt Sasuke in the end. (because Naruto has a big heart, but he doesn’t always think things through) And I like to make my stories realistic, so yeah, they lived together (not uncommon for best friends) they were in ANBU (it makes sense why Sasuke overused his Sharingan) Naruto loves Sasuke (the point of the story) Naruto tries to blind Sasuke because he was tired of watching Sasuke slowly kill himself (twisted love and Naruto’s impulsive need to help other people) Naruto jumps off the building (because he thinks it’s the only way to save Sasuke)

    If there is a dounjishi out there like this, then WOW, that’s just weird…

    Still, I can post a disclaimer if you think that I’ve taken someone else story. I don’t think I have. But whatever...

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  • From ANON - kyu00 on June 29, 2007
    well, sasuke and naruto got at it quick...like they were keepin respective space and then 5 minutes later thier having a party in the bed ;)
    but man, that was a ...Terrific story! well, it was a sad one to a point i nearly cried, but awsome none the less. there has to be more! you cna't leave something like that at a cliffy and expect us not to beg for more!! well, n-eways it was a great read keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - tolazytosignin on June 28, 2007
    I'm pretty darn sure this is from a doujin I've read, you did a pretty good job of writing it out, but you should still give credit where it's due. I'm pretty sure I have the doujin saved in my pc, and I could give you the name of the site were it could be found, I don't mean to be rude, but there, I have proof. O_o

    Oh, and you have a few spelling mistakes.....I must seem like a b**** to you now. =_=
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on June 28, 2007
    make a second chapter, or a sequel, he needs to wake up!
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  • From ANON - Dobe on June 28, 2007
    oh dear
    that was amazing
    so much depth wow
    i was shedding tears near the end
    truly unique in many ways
    nice work
    i hope to see some more
    oneshots from you =]
    x
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  • From DarkRainFiend on June 28, 2007
    Oh this ended so sadly! I wanted Naruto to wake up. *pouts*

    It was beautiful though. I can see Naruto doing something like that for Sasuke too but I wish he'd wake up so he could see what it did to him.
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  • From ANON - Sakiya on June 28, 2007
    Noooooooooo! Don't do this to me! Make it a two-shot, please! It was so good! T.T Seriously! It should be some years later, and Naruto wakes up, and...and...YEAH! PLEASE! T.T
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