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Reviews for A New Life

By : aliakenobi
  • From ANON - Miki on May 22, 2007
    Wow. Flawless descriptions you have there. I found the defensive mechanism funny. :D And padawan? Tagalog speak? Not too sure. -Rubs head- Oh well. I like the story so far, especially Naruto. He's quite the character, thinking he's one hot piece of ass. Hahah. xD Not that he isn't, I assure you.

    Anyway, great job! I look forward to... yeah, well, I look forward to more. ^^

    ...I wonder if Sa-Su-KAY has a permanent bean pole stuck up his delectable arse... xD
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  • From llyoung on May 22, 2007
    Interesting start - looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Reyn on May 22, 2007
    (snickers) Ah, that one line about the plastic surgeon saying she was in the prime of her youth was great. I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - Pamela on May 21, 2007
    sorry my email is ( paw_2001@msn.com )
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  • From ANON - Pamela on May 21, 2007
    Hey!

    If you looking for a beta I would be happy to help
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  • From Dragon7 on May 21, 2007
    Grate start!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Makkura Arashi on May 21, 2007
    I can be your beta! I'm good at correcting other people's work...but a bit careless with my own. If you're still interested then contact me!! Ja ne!
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  • From orbitingjupiter on May 21, 2007
    So far, so good! Everything is well established and well written. Looking forward to the next chapter...and the meeting.
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on May 20, 2007
    interesting new story please update soon:)
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