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Reviews for Jesus what the hell was that !?

By : vanessaclarke
  • From ursweetheartless on June 03, 2007
    OMG that was better than a threesome... i love sasuke in pain, and sexual tension, because he's so damn emo its just fun. i was kinda hoping this would get a sequel or something because that ending on the first part had so much promise for more, only i honestly thought it would be more of a Sasuke-jerks-off-outside-the-door kind of thing. this worked well though, and the ending here has promise for another one, but it also feels much more resolved than it did

    good show ^.^
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  • From PieldeLava on June 02, 2007
    Three words for you Wow. That was so good. Great job. Going to go take a cold shower now. hahaha Look forward to reading your future works. Take care and god bless. Now off to my shower.
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  • From ANON - DismalAbstraction on June 02, 2007
    Love you!! Love that you made it more than a 2 shot! Can't wait for more! Love Ita/Naru! Also like how you portrayed him in this chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Kylie on June 02, 2007
    I'm so glad you didn't do a threesome. I would have hated that. Its nice that Itachi only payed attention to Naruto & that Sasuke also only payed attention to Naruto. I thought that was so hot how possessive Itachi got at the end. Any chance you could write another chapter to this or write another Ita/Naru story. I love exhibitionism, so if you could add that to the mix I would just love it.
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  • From Rosebud on June 02, 2007
    OMG! This has to be the best Itachi/Naruto fic EVER! I kept thinking that you were going to make it a threesome, but you didn't and I'm SO HAPPY for that! It think that it would have taken something away from the story... I don't know (shrugs). I'm just glad that you wrote it the way that you did. (laughs) I'm rambling now...
    So WOW...yeah, this story was FUCKING HOT all the way around! Awesome Job! XD
    Will you be writing more??? PLEASE say yes!!!!
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  • From Carola on May 04, 2007
    This. Is. Love.
    Short, funny AND sexy! Nice job!
    I nearly died when Itachi went 'I'm going paintballing actually'
    Me: "NO WAAAAY!" xD
    First ItaNaru I've actually read and liked! ^___^
    Can I dare hope for a second chappie?
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  • From Nekoastrid on May 04, 2007
    oh that was funny lol. the things you learn when you spy your hot brother paying homage to the almost equaly hot blond boy which you secretly think is cute. awww poor sasuke just found out he can get it up over boys lol. great fic love your stuff.

    ja ne!
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  • From lilliandragon on May 04, 2007
    HAHA! That was great!
    Me likes it a lot.
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  • From on April 16, 2007
    Loed it! It was funny.
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  • From ursweetheartless on April 16, 2007
    OMG YES!! ^.^ I have a clinically diagnossable obsession with the holy freaking trinity of Itachi Sasuke and Naruto, and I have to say that was an awesome use of said three. Itachi always has what Sasuke wants, ne? mmm, I can smell the hot boysmex and SoloM coming on the wind. ^.^ *dies of blood loss*
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  • From yeagerbomb on April 15, 2007
    ...that was pretty good. it was funny and hot. great job. i like funny and i love hot. way to go!~
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