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Reviews for Jesus what the hell was that !?

By : vanessaclarke
  • From MidnightsKeeper on July 07, 2007
    i'm always up for more. this story is so cute and i want to hear more about sasuke and kyuubi too.
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on July 06, 2007
    This is a great story! Oh, I feel so happy for Naruto and Itachi, and it makes me wonder what you have in store for Kyuubi and Sasuke. This is excellent and well written. The sex is nice, too. I guess Itachi 'would' outdo anyone in the field of love-making. lmao.

    so... please keep continuing this!

    and to the plot: keep on sneaking!!
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  • From serenagold on July 06, 2007
    Hell yeah you should keep going! This particular story is smutastically delicious! (plus I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^)
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on July 06, 2007
    Thank you for updating...i totally agree that you should keep going. I loved seeing the 'softer, sweeter' side of Itachi as he was proposing to his Naruto. And i am dying to know how Kyuubi and Sasuke end up. I'm hoping they fall in love like their brothers did.
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  • From BleedingGlitter on July 06, 2007
    That was soo adorable. X3 But Sasuke and Kyuubi seem to always get the short end of the stick(figuratively speaking, of course). Setting the fact that I absolutely adore ItaNaru, KyuSasu seems to have grown on me. Plus Sasuke makes one hell of an uke. XD

    You're doing a great job and I really enjoy your writing style. Keep up the good work, mmkay?
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  • From Marlek on July 06, 2007
    Keep going!!!=)
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  • From gaara89 on July 06, 2007
    so cute! keep up the good work!! Please! :)
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  • From Haowek on July 05, 2007
    You absolutely can't just end it here! I mean, yeah, we know that Itachi and Naruto end up together, but what about Sasuke and Kyuubi? You can't just leave it hanging like this! And Neji too! He's seen them all together and realized he's gay, but it'd be nice to know how things end with him as well. But seriously, Sasuke and Kyuubi are important to this story as they're one of the main couples. I would just about cry not being able to know what happens to everyone. How does Itachi and Sasuke's parents feel about Itachi's upcoming nuptials? Does Sasuke fall in love with Kyuubi, vice versa? Please, please, a writer can't end it off here! Keep going with the story, tie off all the lose ends and let us know how things go with the two couples. Please! Sorry for sounding so pushy, but a great story needs a great ending.
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  • From ANON - InHumanLover on July 05, 2007
    this story is so cute i want my own fearie tale now put up the next chapter i so must knw what happens

    True Love Only Exist in Fearie Tales
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  • From Rosebud on July 05, 2007
    OMG this chapter rocked!!!!
    That was sooooo sweet of Itachi. I like how he got all worried there for a second lol.
    Oh, please do write more, I'd like to know Sasuke and Kyuubi's reaction.
    But if you don't continue that's ok too. I really enjoyed reading this story and I hope that you'll write more Itachi/Naruto in the future. ^^
    Update?
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  • From ANON - Squrlie on July 05, 2007
    kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppp! GGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From VRon8899 on July 05, 2007
    oooooh no u must contiunue!!! Ah gods I love this story!!!! Sasuke and Kyuubi's reactions would be very fun to see, oh pleasepleaseplease don't stop!!!! ^_^;
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on July 04, 2007
    Wooo this story is awesome! I'm loving every bit of it..cant wait to read more. Great job! Many kudos to you :D
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  • From ANON - ras on June 28, 2007
    aah sorry too lazy to sign in. i'm not usually one for a story with kyuubi as a sort of OC, but this story is really fun to read. i had no idea what the pairings were when i read it, i figured it would be an itanaru, sasunaru thing, but it's not really. well, sort of, but not what i thought. the second chapter was hot btw. but i just read the fifth and it was so amusing, but still hot... the parts with neji just made me snort all over the place. the 'it's fate' and the 'destiny is telling me i'm gay'. oh gosh, when it's mocking neji so clearly it just kills me. poor neji. and i really enjoy a possessive itachi. naruto's pretty ooc, but ah well, what can ya do in an au. anyway, great story. really enjoyable. funny, hot, and i think it's rather well written XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2007
    Holy. Shit. I just read chapter 2. And that was so......... good I just wanted to say. Damn. I thought I wasn't that interested in smut anymore, but I have a severe weakness for SasuNaru and ItaNaru in the same story. And... GAH. HOT!!! Itachi's so smexy. That whole scene was just incredible. I can't even... I'll go reread it. Heh.
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