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Reviews for A Yearning Heart

By : Greenstages
  • From ANON - littleolmee on October 14, 2007
    Great start, this is the way if most of us could chose would want the battle in the Valley of the End to have happened. You did a wonderful job staying with the it happened along with adding this plot. You really showed a lot of emotions in this chapter. Great work.

    littleolmee
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  • From solitare1 on October 14, 2007
    I like it so far... keep it up I'll be checking everyday!!
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  • From lexjamandme on October 14, 2007
    What a great beginning to a story. I'm going to have to keep on eye out for more updates. I lake scene was great!
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on October 14, 2007
    Do htey both like each other, or is it Naruto that likes Sasuke? As I was reading it, I thought it was Sasuke that has feelings for Naruto. Anyway this is really good.

    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Vega on October 14, 2007
    Hey-I really like this story so far! I hope you update it soon.
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  • From LadyRonin on August 22, 2007
    this was such a greaat chapter. i am so glad that sasuke finally told naruto something honest instead of the little trikery games he has been playing on him. but you have to respect naruto for being the first to say i love you. when i read that i was like aww. i can't wait to see how their story unfolds now that they have confessed. is itachi going to be paired with someone or is he going to go after naruto. is naruto the special guest that he was talking about. anyway thanks and can't wait til the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2007
    EEeeeeaaah!!!! Sooo cute!!! I love it! They just make the best couple! How did you come up with this? Your and amazing writer! Ahh Im so excited to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rei-dono on August 22, 2007
    please say that's not the end? you have to keep going! they're so sweet! and cute!! but still totaly guys!
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  • From Sagenwarrior on August 18, 2007
    really cute fic! Hope to see more sooN!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on August 16, 2007
    I think your story is great!!! But I keep wanting to slap the boys, you know, just to get them to 'seeeeee.' But then again, they're male and Naruto is.....Naruto

    Thanks!!!! please add more soon
    Slave
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  • From LadyRonin on August 15, 2007
    i like this chapter. it was kind of interesting to me because now it looks like naruto may be getting the idea that the love he and sasuke share is not only that of friends (yeah) and so he is inch by inch trying to put out more. are you going t be focusing more on their romance during this mission or are you just going to skim it while focusing on developing sasuke and naruto's romance. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From LadyRonin on August 15, 2007
    i like this chapter. it was kind of interesting to me because now it looks like naruto may be getting the idea that the love he and sasuke share is not only that of friends (yeah) and so he is inch by inch trying to put out more. are you going t be focusing more on their romance during this mission or are you just going to skim it while focusing on developing sasuke and naruto's romance. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From akiravadel on August 09, 2007
    AHH!!!! Write more!!! I love how you changed it to Sasuke staying with his blond dobe instead of running off to Urochimaru. I can't wait to see how things progress. I think he should grope him a little more >.< Even though I don't like the fact of Naruto being a woman I still love that it's them together and not SasuSaku >.< Eww.... Keep up the good work!!!

    ~Akira~
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  • From ANON - Momo on June 02, 2007
    Awesome-awesome. More please ^____^!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on June 01, 2007
    Damnit, when is Sasuke just going to tell him he's in love with him, and jump him already?
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