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Reviews for A Yearning Heart

By : Greenstages
  • From hisoka on June 01, 2007
    sweet,response
    updates?
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  • From emp78 on June 01, 2007
    They're both so clueless about the other's real feelings. It's cute, but kinda sad, too. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 31, 2007
    I love that thought of kissing ten times a day just to make sure that they become familer with each, in a sense. That's also so very, very cute ^^, I wish most men were like that...well...not totally. Sasuke's way to confusing, and I don't think most women would be happy to be with him.

    -Damp *But how can you resist him and his sexiness!!*
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  • From renzuite on May 31, 2007
    zomg more plz yes
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  • From hisoka on May 28, 2007
    aww if only naruto could tell he ment it as more than friends
    updates?
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  • From ANON - macy on May 28, 2007
    so, so very cute. i can't wait for more. i like the snowboarding chapter. sakura and ino carrying slimfast shakes cracked me up! (hit a sore spot actually XD)
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  • From ANON - Kati on May 13, 2007
    hi, i just wanted to say that i love your story and I think the way sasuke tricks naruto is really funny!! xx
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2007
    I hope Sasuke and Naruto can pull off being a couple. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 11, 2007
    This last chapter was confusing. Why is Naruto in his Sexy no Jutsu form? The chapter before had him as a male and then this chapter he wakes up female with no explanation. I'm really confused!!
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  • From ANON - dana on April 14, 2007
    i like how you have potrayed sasuke (he seems very in character). the way he called the girl and broke up with her was sweet. i can't wait to see more of this great story.
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  • From roely on April 14, 2007
    cute story!
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  • From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on April 14, 2007
    Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara, Gaara...........GAARA!!!!!!......Please. O and must this be a NaruSasu story? Can't it be a SasuNaru one? Cause personally I think naruto is the 'only', and 'perfect' canident to fill that 'uke' position. (giggle). Plus lately many people have been writing a lot of NaruSasu stories anyway. Huh....Well that my opinion at least.
    Anyway hope to see your update soon. Latter.
    Kisses ^_~
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  • From flameofthenight on April 13, 2007
    ......cars? ski resort? HUH?! I really want to read this, your writing is great and the prologue is fabulous, but you have so many things that are so out of place that you're trying to incorporate into the "real" naruto theme, that I'm finding it impossible. :( I'm sorry, it looks really good. And all the other reviews say it is, so I'm sure it must be. I just wish it was my thing. If you ever write a similar story sans cars and stuff please let me know!
    ~The Flame Reviews~
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  • From ANON - Star on April 13, 2007
    Awsome!!! It was AWSOME!!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 09, 2007
    That was a great chapter!! Poor Sasuke loves Naruto but Naruto is so clueless it's funny! Despite Naruto getting hurt, it was funny that he tried to copy Sasuke's moves with the pipe. :)
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