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Reviews for Secrets and lies

By : brook13baby13
  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 24, 2007
    They kiss. During the kiss Naruto dispells the illusion, but keeps right on kissing letting Sasuke know that he know, and doesn't care!!!!
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  • From ANON - oreo on April 20, 2007
    They are going to dance on top of the water.

    I can't believe naruto knows its sasuke. It would have been nice if he didn't. I would have liked to read about his surprise. That would be a nice shock to their relationship. Now it seems like naruto is the one that's not being truthful.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 20, 2007
    My guess would be that their going to kiss? I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon.
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  • From ANON - mary on April 17, 2007
    this story needs at least one lemon! please i want to see where this going.
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  • From ANON - PandaLover on April 12, 2007
    aahhhh!!! *pulling out hairs* i've been waiting for this story to get to the good part.

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  • From Dragon7 on April 12, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From TellMeImPretty on April 10, 2007
    I'm Gald u got a beta :)...cant wait for more
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  • From Dragon7 on March 22, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon with a longer chapter.
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  • From TellMeImPretty on March 21, 2007
    I LOVE THIs STORY PLZ UPDAT SOON^____^
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  • From Gaarajunkyfreak on March 18, 2007
    very good story, the only thing I would check is spelling, but very good.
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  • From Dragon7 on February 10, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From desolatebutterfly on January 23, 2007
    I'm sorry but I can't understand what you've written at all. You change tenses too often, and sometimes your sentences make no sense. I think a beta reader would really help you.
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  • From ANON - dragon on January 23, 2007
    Grate chapter I am so happy the sasuke is the one that is prego. I can't what to read the next chapter so update soon.
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  • From Dragon7 on January 17, 2007
    Grate start sasuke is such a basted but you have to love him. I cant what to see ween he and Naruto get together I hope that Sasuke is the one that prego. I can't what to reead the next chapter so keep on writing and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on January 13, 2007
    Hello,

    it's a little bit early to say if this is a good story or not. But you really should look for a beta-reader because there are a lot of mistakes in your text and that makes it really difficult to read it fluently.

    So long
    Nathaniel
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