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By : brook13baby13
  • From tawanawelch on November 13, 2008
    OMG!!!!! Yuki is still ALIVE????!!!! This is GREAT!!!! Now Naruto and Sasuke will be alright and Sasuke and the Counselors will see how evil Yuki really is!!! I'm so glad you updated this story I've been waiting for this for a very long time. Thanks to that fan that asked you to continue this.XD
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  • From Dragon7 on August 21, 2008
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Aliana on August 13, 2008
    this is such a great story please do finish I always see great stories never finished please don't let this be one
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    Chapter 11: Heh. He doesn’t remember the guy’s name.
    Heh. Sasuke’s embarrassed. . . . “Don’t think that. I deserve to be here. The stuff I put you through.” Oh, brother.

    Err . . . that ending . . . was totally . . . random. I mean, what happened? .__.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2008
    Chapter 10: Pssh. Well, THAT figures that Yuki’s dad would be a council member. (*snort*)
    A week? What the hell caused that to happen?! õ_ô

    I told you he should’ve taken care of the body. u_u
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2008
    Chapter 9: I’ll have to look at those pictures soon.
    Oh, it’s Yuki who’s his partner! Should’ve guessed! ^_^ . . . . (*snicker*) Naruto’s proud that he’s taller than Yuki. Cute.
    “This Yuki was awful [. . .]” Why? What did Yuki do?
    Ahhhh, jealous. Cool.
    Oh no, don’t tell me Yuki’s playing Wronged Lover. . . . Yikes. That’s gotta be awkward. I wonder if Sasuke’s going to learn about Naruto killing one of the guys he screwed. . . . Bad move, Naruto, leaving the body like that. You gotta get rid of the body, so enemies don’t learn secrets from it.
    Alias, eh?
    Crap. I was hoping that it had been a dream.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2008
    Chapter 8: Oh good, he’s a guy again. (*whew*) So why’d he wake up so fast? Bad dream or gooood dream? . . . . “a fever some say, but an Uchiha having one was unheard of.” (*snort*) Yeah, right.
    (*giggle*) “Hi.” XD Naruto’s response to Kanami was funny. . . . So has Naruto been around too? Not a virgin, I mean. He just met Kanami that day, and already it’s “Wanna have sex?” Yeesh. . . . (*shifts uncomfortably*) Dude, I was hoping for some yaoi in this story. (*blush*) . . . . (*blinks*) Oh, it was a dream. Daaaaang, that was vivid. (*dazed*) . . . . Ooooooh – ! X3 That was a good cliffhanger.

    No idea, I can’t imagine.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2008
    Chapter 7: (*giggles at the chapter title*)
    Huh? Where’d he go? . . . . Oh.
    “After hearing her name Kiba whispered it through his head, rolling his eyes [. . .]” What? What’s wrong with the name? õ_ô
    Ohhh, I see what’s going on. Hehehe. Doggy-boy’s drooling over her. . . . Does Kiba have some dog instincts or something? He can’t see that the girl’s with Naruto? . . . . Heh, and people call Naruto slow. Kiba took the cake. ^^ . . . . She fell asleep as a girl? How long has she been in that form, I wonder?

    Oy, don’t use the fic as a bribe. Nurse the poor baby, encourage it to grow, otherwise it could come out half-assed, and that won’t be fun.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2008
    Chapter 6: “Girl or guy, he’d take either one.” I wonder if Sasuke plans to stay a girl if it means winning Naruto. Or if he’s just planning to ease Naruto into the male-Sasuke version. . . . So Kanami bites her lips a lot. I wonder if Sasuke ever did that, or if he somehow gained the habit with the form. . . . Dancing on water. Cute.

    Do I know what’s going to happen next? Well, the obvious answer would be kissy time! . . . But maybe the answer won’t be obvious. In which case, I have no idea.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    Chapter 5: Interesting title.
    “Kanami.” That’s pretty. But “Thanks to her quick thinking . . .” Where the hell was that “quick thinking” when you were practicing the jutsu, Kanami? Hm? It took a genius like you seven months to do it. I doubt it took Naruto that long to invent and perfect it.
    Well, we know that Sasuke made that name up on the spot, so naturally no one would know who that was. Then again, if Naruto had asked, “Who’s that babe outside?” I wonder what the answer would’ve been.
    (*snort*) Now Naruto’s questioning his sexuality. But this answers my question: No one (or not many people, anyway) have seen Sasuke in that form. . . . And Naruto doesn’t ask how she knows who he is? He just says yes?
    So now Naruto knows or at least suspects who Kanami really is.
    That scene was cute. But . . . does Naruto know or not?

    Oh, I’m sorry about your guinea-pig.
    This story is a little erratic, but it’s cute.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    Chapter 4: (*reads the title*) Oh my . . . that’s a must-see. *__*
    For three months? Wow. Dedicated. But then again, I’m not that surprised. After all, Sasuke spent years going after Itachi, hadn’t he? . . . . You should’ve had a different title. Just call it “The Plan” or something. Cuz now, there’s no suspense; we all know what Sasuke’s practicing at. . . . “After the seven months he FINALLY got the hang of it [. . .]” It took him that long? (*boggles*) Slow, isn’t he?
    How many people have seen Sasuke in that form, I wonder?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    Chapter 3: (*snort*) He recommends the poster, then burns it. Make up your mind, Sasuke!
    At the bar again. . . .
    Wait. Did Sasuke get the time mixed up or something? It said earlier that he left his home around 5:21 “even though the party didn’t start for a few more hours.” Now it’s just a little over a half-hour later, and the party’s starting without him. What the heck. õ.ô
    Uh-oh. What’s going on? . . . . Oh, I see. (*sigh*) ‘Scuse the criticism, but it was a little too coincidental if you ask me. Sorry.
    How badly did Sasuke hurt those guys? . . . . I wonder if Naruto’s just overwhelmed and he can’t think too much about it right now, or if he just doesn’t feel that way towards Sasuke?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    Chapter 2: So this continues right after the first chapter? . . . . O.O Naruto knows that Sasuke goes to the gay bar from time to time! That’s interesting. This is the first fic I’ve read where I’ve seen something like that. . . . Really. So that’s how Sasuke came out of the closet (or leapt out, I should say). I’d like to see that scene sometime. =D . . . . I liked Sasuke’s thought: “Maybe I should tell him . . . o-or maybe tomorrow. Yeah, or this weekend. . . .” Makes sense. . . . Teehee, Naruto’s just waiting outside the gay bar? (*giggles*) That must be a little awkward. ^^ . . . . Is Yuki going to put in another appearance later? It’d be interesting if he got a crush on Sasuke. . . . Soooo, Naruto took the job? I’m a little confused here. . . . Heh. Sasuke forgot about telling Naruto that he liked him.

    Lemme guess: Yuki tells Naruto. Second guess is Shikamaru.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Chapter 1: Cool set-up. I can kind of see that image.
    I wonder who he’s doing. . . . Blond, huh? Hmm. . . . I wonder why the teen is so concerned. . . . “You should see the last guy who asked to be seme!” ô_ô What happened?
    Cool.

    I liked that chapter! It was short, but it said so much. It set the stage. I liked. =D
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  • From Sinslayer on December 09, 2007
    weird ending to this chappie, but me likie ^^
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