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Reviews for Savin' Me {Akatsuki Love Story} Part I

By : FanfictionWriter
  • From ANON - Toolazytologin on November 25, 2012
    HAHAHA! I saw your article on ED, 'It a chickun lover'!
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  • From AquariumEpiphany on November 23, 2008
    Had us fooled? Not for a second, my dear. We never took you seriously, even when you were serious. Did you already forget Quizilla!, and how this story had more than 50 chapters? To say that this wasn't for real would be a lie. :) Oh, and sorry I missed your little holiday. Did your 'Flame Cherish Uchiha Day' find you well? Mine was quite good. Because of you, the 12th of July will always be my favorite day of the year! :D

    Anyway, Before I forget, I must thank you. You proved to us that with plenty of hard work and trolling, we can stop 'authors' like you from ruining the internets with trash like this. :) Of course, you're only one person, but it's a start.

    Keep in touch! We'd love to hear from you~
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  • From ANON - Flaming Ryoko on December 27, 2006
    I smell Mary Sue
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on December 27, 2006
    Well, you're definitely off to a start.

    I'll admit, Cherish does seem to be a bit of a Mary Sue, but it's a tad too early for one to make such asumptions. First, I'd like to ask, is a wolf demon one of the tailed beasts. I know there's the one-tailed tanuki, two-tailed cat, three-tailed turtle/monster thing, and of course the nine-tailed kyuubi. I'm pretty sure the six-tailed is a phoenix of some sort... There could be a wolf in there. If there is, give the readers this knowledge so that they don't think you're making tailed-beasts up to make your OC more powerful.

    I like how Itachi Uchiha is your character's master, however, that might be one of the reasons why people consider Cherish a Mary Sue. Perhaps you should write in a flashback that shows how he became her master, but make sure that the story is believeable and stays true to Itachi's character. That means no overly-nice, lovey-dovey Itachi, not that I think you would write him as such.

    Well, this is all I can think of for now and I hope that I was of some assistance to you. I get sick of reviews that point out someone's flaws without trying to help that person to improve.
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  • From Sephy on December 26, 2006
    I have to agree with the first. I despise Mary Sue's. If you want to daydream, fine, but we don't need to see it.
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  • From ANON - lo on December 26, 2006
    No shitty marysue's
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