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Reviews for The Bad Boy and the Baby

By : Midnightstorm
  • From Sabriel20 on February 15, 2008
    Sry, about your boyfriend, but honestly you deserve better. You don't want to be with a guy who doesn't respect your feelings and degrades you. Thats totally wrong. Don't worry. I'm sure you'll find a man that will make you very happy and you'll be super compatible, so don't lose hope. I love this chapter, btw. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does.
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  • From UzumakiLover on February 15, 2008
    Great job Taka-chan! I love the ending! its like sasuke doesn't even care about naruto. so he needs a good shock to his stsyem! yay taka-chan!
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  • From sweetciel on February 15, 2008
    Awww..*offers comforting hug* I thought that the new chapter was excellent. I think this entire fic is excellent! You are an amazing writer and i hope that you feel better soon ^_^
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on February 15, 2008
    here u go girl all the luv i could muster via review *gives great big hug and kiss on cheek* he dont deserve a sweet individual such as urself ^_~. anyway this chapter was so full of unspoken emotions and then at the end to hav ran confess his love AND kiss naruto while sasuke saw it...i must say next chapter all hell will definitely break lose if not then then soon just hope naruto wont get the brunt of it. keep those chapters coming and remember u got me as a faithful reader to lean on ^^
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  • From MoveThemHands on February 15, 2008
    *hugs* Sorry you had such a breakup, I hope everything goes well for you and you can find the one for you!

    Well~ YAY!! Ran gets Naruto? Maybe *starry eyed at the dreams* Your OC is the only freaking one I can like...no love! He is so great @_@ DEATH TO SASUKE?! Well anyway you do it I will enjoy it!

    This chapter was great, very very enjoyable and even with your 'lack' of emotions this chapter was indeed loaded with enough to make me CRAVE more!

    Update whenever you can, I don't wanta force greatest to hurry!
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  • From roro237 on February 15, 2008
    This is my favorite chapter:) The emotion was showing threw! I'm sorry for your break up:( I think you vented all those emotion in this chapter and ~wow~ it was good! I defiantly want to read what happens next?! ^_^
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  • From DragonsDancers on February 15, 2008
    cant wait for the next ch
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  • From Deandraquin on February 15, 2008
    Hey Taka, sorry to hear you had a bad couple of weeks. I think that you did a great job with this chapter. Oh and the rest of the story is great too of course. Hope you will start feeling better soon.
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  • From MoveThemHands on January 07, 2008
    Oh god, this whole time I've been falling for Takeshi but now after this chapter I love him even more! *laughs* I find myself hoping Sasuke will die and Takeshi can have Naruto XD

    Another great chapter! I look forward to more!!
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  • From pooh on January 07, 2008
    wow...a review! it's been ages since i last wrote one!
    anyway, about uchitake:

    i sooo do like him! normally i'd agree with you saying OC’s are annoying, but i really want sasuke to become jealous and so on.
    wouldn't even mind, if in the end he's the one heartbroken. just nothing too sappy.

    and somethin’ else. you recently asked, which stories you should continue.
    my favourites are “The Guardian“ and this story here.

    pretty please keep on writing them
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  • From mls on January 07, 2008
    love this story!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on December 30, 2007
    no hiatus no hiatus NO HIATUS! u cannot and will not abandon this fic its getting too good to leave be. i hav to find out wat happens, will naru leave sasuke, will arashi kick sasu's ass, will takeshi finally get the uchiha and wats up wit mirai i hav to find out! so u cant abandon ok. if u need help email me and i will gladly giv my assistance ^_^
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  • From xtaleenmethane on December 28, 2007
    I like this story. I mean, if I could, I usually veer away from Mpreg fics... But alas, some authors are just too damn good with their craft that I end up reading their work anyway.

    And you are one of then. Coming from a nobody like me, that may not mean anything... But hey, just pretend that it's a bribe for you to update 5 more chapters in one day.

    Yeeeep. I am an inconsiderate bitch. Lolz. Just kidding. I just love this story. You've somehow managed to keep it as Naruto-ish as possible even with your two cents worth added in it. Quiet frankly, I can do away with all the Itachi-hatin't and the way you portrayed him here is awesome. It's just nice to read how you are able to weave the anime/manga facts with your own creative ideas to form one cohesive story.

    Wow. That was long. Now, if only I could remember everything I just said so I can spread the love to all writers... That are as good as you.

    And yes, that was another, umm, bribe.:3 Btw, the Mirai-character you are talking about, would she happen to be Haku. I know that Haku's a boy... Bah.. Whatever. Anyway, he is still my guess.

    Happy writing!

    Rage Niikura~~ (email: x_taleen_methane @ yahoo. Com - minus the spaces of course XP)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 26, 2007
    Happy Holidays!! Thanks for the new chapter!! Glad to see that Naruto found evidence of Sasuke's betrayal. I sure hope that Sasuke doesn't find an excuse for it and Naruto believes him. Sasuke deserves punishment for his selfishness!!!
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  • From Gwyllion on December 25, 2007
    Omg WaaaaaHHH!!! Thank you so much for continuing this fic! I love it so very much. Naruto is so adorable here that I just want to kidnap him and snuggle him to death. I can't believe Sasuke will betray our cute Naru-chan! *gasps* Well...hope everything all will go well for him. He'll be so devastated when he finds out. Sasuke will def have to be punished! D:
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