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Reviews for The Bad Boy and the Baby

By : Midnightstorm
  • From ANON - dut on January 11, 2007
    wow.. pregnant already.. ha ha what is Arashi gonna say bout that? Update soon~
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  • From ANON - a person best left anonymous on January 02, 2007
    you live in india? whare? i was born in orissa. my entire family has had arranged marriages. my great grandmother was married when she was NINE and her husband died when she was ELEVEN. my parents have an aranged marriage too... not going so great... but indians won't divorce... hopefully i won't have an arranged marriage... i don't want to get married... what if my fiance' doesn't approve of my sasunaru obsession... well, screw them... i heart sasunaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ... sorry about that... love your story...

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  • From ANON - mE on December 29, 2006
    Oh yeah.. I can't wait for the wedding! And the wedding night.. In some cultures the sheets are checked after the wedding night..for blood.. just wondering if their sheets gonna get checked..for bodily fluids or something ;D Or blood.. because Naruto is inexperienced with everything and I don't know how experienced Sasuke is, but it's quite possible that with Sasukes changing moods, he might hurt Naruto..even if he didn't mean to..but..still..can't wait!! Write faster ;D See ya :)

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  • From ANON - seraphym on December 29, 2006
    I really like the new kind of world you have set up for this story. I would love if this continued past their marriage, because I would love to see Sasuke's problems finally clear up and for him to fall in love with Naruto! Keep up the good work, I can't wait for updates!
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  • From ANON - mE on December 29, 2006
    God!!! This is so good...I'm biting my nails here, thank u very much! I've been waiting a good fic with actualy interesting plot. Please update soon. I'm dying for the good fics such as yours!! seeya thanks!
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  • From ANON - Snow Ahriman on December 29, 2006
    Please update soon. I love how you have them starting to fall in love. I hope you can work really fast and don't let Itachi push you around, you're the writer...make him your play toy.
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  • From ANON - niguara_chic on December 29, 2006
    well i love it. keep updating. oh and i would like to vote for mpreg.please & thank you
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  • From ANON - punkin02 on December 28, 2006
    So far this story is great. I'm anxious to read more, find out Sasuke's goal, and see what happens with the...uh...semi-happy couple.
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on December 28, 2006
    I like this story a lot. Please continue!
    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Amber on December 28, 2006
    Awesome. I lvoe your story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - dut on December 28, 2006
    Sasuke is starting to have feelingS! MOre more!
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on December 28, 2006
    Can sasuke and Naruto learn to love each other? Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - narufan on November 30, 2006
    hey love ur story, very creative. well i think it should be continued still after they get married, it makes it all the cuter. sorry about your keyboard hope u work it out. yayayayay ^^
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on November 30, 2006
    Wow, in regards to your note at the bottom of the chapter, to be perfectly honest I thought that you were going to have Naruto and Sasuke get married in a chapter or two, and then the fic would be all about the problems of an unwanted marriage and how they steadily move towards falling in love with each other (after much angst of course!). I feel a little silly now that I realize that that is not where you were taking the story at all. Actually though, to me at least, I think the story would be loads more interesting if the plotline was about them falling in love while they are married. It's a plotline that not many authors dabble in which I think is such a shame. Personally, I think that you could do a lot more with the storyline if it was focused on what happens after they get married. However, you are the author and therefore the creative license of this story solely belongs to you.

    In regards to the chapter itself, I thought it was rather interesting. You’ve certainly created enough mystery about Sasuke. I completely agreed with Naruto when he said that he wanted to know all about this man of mystery as well.

    I think though that its time to build up a little mystery about Naruto, and add a little suaveness and confidence to his character. I understand that you want Naruto to be light-hearted and open, but I think that if you showed another side of Naruto it would make him an even more interesting character, more interesting to Sasuke as well. I also would say to look over your chapters when you’re done with them because there were a ton of grammatical errors in this chapter. Either that or I suggest a beta reader.

    Regardless though, my best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com

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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 29, 2006
    the marriage and beyond!!!! cuz i love m-preg's there just so cute, keep up the good work
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