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Reviews for The Bastard

By : Midnightstorm
  • From Trollmia on November 12, 2006
    No matter what - a chapter in a good story is always far too short... *lol* And this was short in that sense... But oh so good... I look forward to reading the next part whenever it is due... *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 12, 2006
    oh man, i love period pieces! i'm so glad you updated this one! i was hoping some spaniards would attack the nine tails, and sasuke could see naruto in action, but there's always later in the story, ne? update soon!
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  • From ANON - kenjikitten on October 25, 2006
    this setting is a nice change of pace from all the other stories. i can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Foxy smile 717 on October 25, 2006
    i think the way you're writing this story is wonderful! especially the old world setting, ITS BRILLIENT! i definetly think naruto will take sasuke because he's just so sweet like that ;-)
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  • From ANON - Darling_425 on October 25, 2006
    Kya! Damn you! The cliffy! lol
    Can't wait for more!
    I think Naruto should say yes (after putting a No No fight ;)!
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  • From ANON - Mangagirl D.J. on October 25, 2006
    He has to help Sasuke other wise the story wouldn't go along if he didn't. And I don't want Sasuke to be HANGED:(!
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  • From ANON - Meow on October 25, 2006
    Meow likes this story very much! Don't leave it, please - it's very interesting. And yes, sasuke is a spoile brat!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on October 25, 2006
    this story is so interesting! i can't wait until you update! oh, and not only should naruto take him on, he will take him on. i'm sure of it. now write it! j/k just keep up the good job
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  • From ANON - Stacy on October 18, 2006
    I'm not so sure about this one. It might take another chapter with some lemons in it to help me decide!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 18, 2006
    You seem to have a knack for great story lines. I liked the first chapter in every respect except for the fact that it was too short. You've left me wanting more. I hope you decide to continue this fic because it has great potential. I can't speak for anyone else, but I for one will be reading the next chapter...and probably the chapter after that as well. I await your next update. Until then, my best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Zrina on October 18, 2006
    Very original and interesting :D Pls continue to update!
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  • From ANON - AkaNeko on October 18, 2006
    Well... The speech is a little hard to adjust to, but I think you're doing a really good job. I wouldn't be able to write dialogue for that time period. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Mangagirl D.J. on October 18, 2006
    I like it so far :). This is a very interesting story you got here, what era is this SasuNaru set up in. Please update as soon as possible!
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