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Reviews for The Bastard

By : Midnightstorm
  • From BishounenKrazed on June 06, 2007
    i don't know how i missed all these updates, but i did, and i'm sorry. but i finally caught up, and it's so, so good. i'm so loving it, and i can't wait to read what the story is behind naruto's father. and how sasuke is planning to take down orochimaru. i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From LuthienWildglen on June 05, 2007
    I think you might want to take a look at chapters 11 and 12 because they appear to be the same exact chapter. In short I think you may have loaded chapter 11 for 12 as well and I would really like to read the real 12. My best wishes for you and your writing.
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  • From hisoka on June 05, 2007
    i wonder if as a women sasuke will ever bitch slap sakura for making moves on his "fiance"
    updates?
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  • From hisoka on May 04, 2007
    i like this i wonder what happens next please update soon
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  • From conquerorsstar on February 10, 2007
    what, what, what? No! *hyperventalates* why did you only get 23 reviews? that is preposterous haha. i really want to draw you fan art.. but i draw like a three-year old lol. so it would be better for both of us if i didn't.


    i love you so freaking much!! ^_^ its about bloody TIME someone wrote a story like this.. *sigh, i am so in love with this particular time period in england. can you reccomend a good book about it please, please? what.. wait, don't walk away!! *crawls on hands and knees and desperately claws at your clothes. come back come back!! hahah XD

    gawds i also adored dealing with love. you are amashing. and now time to read your other stories!

    Ja.
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  • From ANON - Ritz--> on December 04, 2006
    OOH!!! I love your story, I Can't wait for the next chappy!!!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 30, 2006
    Wow, you write just like a professional. I love the old english talk! You rock! I need more! SasukexNaruto forever!
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 29, 2006
    ne, this was very good. If I do say so myself. But what really got to me was the many chances for them to kiss! Every time I was like, "Come on........coooommmmee onnnnnnn!" Then something happned and I said, "NOOOOOOOOO!.....damn." lol. So, yea. That`s kindda my way of sayin` that I liked it and to plz update as soon as u can.
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  • From ANON - seraphym on November 27, 2006
    chapter 6 wasa hysterical! I love sasuke as a girl! Please let them get married and be a lovely lovely couple, as either gay or faux-straight!
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  • From ANON - KojiHiwatari on November 27, 2006
    Undate... Peaz. It's funny and sad and I want them to kiss.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 27, 2006
    oh, this is my favorite chapter by far!! for one thing, it was quite long. and the development of emotions between the two! wonderful! i can't wait for the next chapter. oooo, and a kiss. i want them to at least kiss!! or have they already? i can't remember. so when you do write it, make it *memorable*.

    update soon!
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  • From Trollmia on November 27, 2006
    *laughing my little ass off here*
    Such a good ending to a really good chapter. You really made my day :) Now I can continue with a smile on my lips. *thumbs up* Of course men never can understand women... that would be just too.... weird if they did.
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  • From ANON - dut on November 18, 2006
    My God! I love the story... Naruto and Sasuke in here is so cute in their banters.. Sasuke is getting Jealous.. i like that.. haha... hope you will update soon ne? Please do!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on November 13, 2006
    I like this story a lot, and I especially like that I thought you were going to take this fic in one direction, and then you completely surprised me by taking it in another. I also have to say that the direction you actually took it in is much more interesting then the one I thought it was going to be. Your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto are amazing. I hope you plan on making this a Naru/Sasu fic because based on the characters you have developed that seems most natural.

    However, it seems like at times you are more focused on trying to keep the language authentic of the period, and therefore it is causing the actual fic to suffer. Details are becoming muddled; inaccuracies are taking place, etc. This is not to say that your fic is horrible, far from it in fact. However, I would rather see the story itself take more of your focus as opposed to the language itself. However, do with it what you will. As I have already said, I like this story and I plan to vote for it as well. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Meow on November 13, 2006
    Your story makes meow so happy! Especially how fast you up date!!! Please up date often! It's so good. Meow wishes that next scene will be with Naruto killing someone - cos Sasuke needs to see the other side of Naruto - the Fox. That would be great.
    Enyway, meow waits for up date!
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