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By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Danya on January 14, 2007
    Hey great story!! Can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he finds out Naruto isn't on the team anymore.
    Keep up the good work!
    Update soon!
    -Danya
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  • From Fourthiv on January 14, 2007
    Hmm, very good indeed. I cant wait for more updates
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  • From ANON - Damp on January 13, 2007
    If you made this into a MPreg story it would seem VERY off. So please don't turn this into a MPreg! I like the way this is going. I'm the type of person who loves detail, and loves to make sure the story is going nice and slow. Not super fast. Keep up the good work...and if you don't update soon, you better have a damn good reason for not updating soon.


    So it was real, she went to see him every singly fucking day,.... did you mean single or did you mean it like that??
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  • From ANON - kiba1350 on January 13, 2007
    Hey I really like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - colonelhavoc on January 13, 2007
    luv it luv it luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From marquesgue1 on January 13, 2007
    I was so glad when I saw the update for this!!! You're just roping everyone in aren't you? Can't wait for the next update!!! Good chapter, nice to have Sasuke's POV.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - MidnightYaoi001 on January 13, 2007
    wow just...WOW! this story is awesome! great plot, you describe very well (even tho i have no idea wut it is most of the time >
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    I'm so glad Sasuke did something right. He finally told Sakura off. Someone needs to set her straight and Ino should be the one to do since no one other than Sasuke will do it. I'm also glad that Naruto has true friends now. He's so much happier and more open with Neji, Shika, and Lee. At least they show that they really do care about Naruto. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Zrina on January 13, 2007
    I like how you are slowly building things up. Makes it more realistic and enjoyable that way! I like that Sasuke finally woke up and smelled the proverbial coffee here. Can't wait to see what he has to do to finally win back Naruto's trust.
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on January 13, 2007
    mpreg? dunno, its your shot..
    I loved it... it was a great update...hope you keep it sasunaru...nyan... :)
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 13, 2007
    YAY! An update! Wow, so Sasuke is really feeling the guilt...well i gotta say, he deserves it. He's got a battle ahead of him because the danage he's done is considerable, and when he finds out Naruto left Team 7...Well i'm sticking around for that. Anyway, it was good and once again it's heart warming to know that Neji, Shika, and Lee are prepared to be such good friends to Naruto. He really needs that. About the mpreg business, i don't particularly care, i think if there's good writing behind it it can be passed as believable and could be good. I've seen it done succesfully a few times. If not, there are other stories. Good job. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on January 13, 2007
    Mmm.. I'm actually quite liking the change in teams, I always did feel that even though Naruto treated his team like his family, the others didn't really. They always seemed a little detached and closed off from each other. Ah, but with this team, it seems like Naruto will be well... can I say 'looked after'? Neji especially seems really caring, and Lee, as usual is just too hilariously cute. And Sakura, is she really necessary at all in any fanfiction =_=''. I loved Sasuke's reaction to her *heart heart*. I'm actually looking forward to hearing more from Sasuke's view ^^.

    Anyway, awesome story, chapter. It's all loved ^^.
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on January 13, 2007
    Gnargh..no m-preg.. that's not really good for this kind of story.. nuh-uh.. I don't get it why people would like to convert a really good deep story into m-preg-stuff. I think m-preg should be the main-subject in the story..and not a "woah naru's pregnant because kyuubi and naruto love sasuke and the bad-ass demon would give naruto a little piece of happiness in his poor-poor life." yeah.. uh-huh.. really.. erm.. sorry i'm rambling ^.^

    Anyway i love your story (and all your other stories..*g*) and it's not the everyday plot-thingie! So there.. Please keep it that way =3
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  • From ANON - Gina on January 13, 2007
    Oh, My!! *0*/
    I think this is one of the BEST fan fictions I ever read! I like the way you write the story and that your not going to fast forward. And even if I like the fact that it’s going to be a sasunaru story, I’m glad that you didn’t make Naruto, that weeping uke that all are so very fond of to right him. He is a strong person, even stronger than Sasuke - and it’s good that you have portrayed him I that way. I’m looking forward to see hoe things develop in the future for all the characters in the story…and I’m really looking forward to the first meeting with Sasuke and Naruto.

    And about the Mpreg thing - As much as I like the fact that it would be cute to have a little mini- naru running around in the story I don’t really think you should write it.
    MY opinion is that you don’t write it… I don’t really thing that fits in in this story… this have some well… it match the timeline (in some sense) of the Anime/manga - and Mpreg would just ruin, the feeling in it. Again - this is just MY personal opinion… if you decide that you will write it then I bet it will be really good!^^

    Again - This is a really good story!
    Keep up the good work!^^

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  • From ANON - yumemi on December 05, 2006
    I swear i totally love ALL your fics!!! and i wont mind yuri in it (fellow lover of yuri and yaoi) ^__^
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