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Reviews for Normality

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2007
    I'm glad Ino has decided to be Naruto's friend. He's need more of them. When will sakura and Sasuke fing out about the next arrangement? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Damp on February 10, 2007
    Chapter not needed?? If this chapter was not needed then why'd you put it up?? I'll admit, it was a tad bit boring, but I'm sure this chapter had some sort of roll in the fic. Right??
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on February 10, 2007
    Not a dull chapter at all! It was really sweet how everyone (except two certain people) are helping out Naruto. Stiil, I can't wait to read the reaction of Sasuke and Sakura when they learn their team is no more. Great story.
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  • From darktoy on February 10, 2007
    I don't think this chappie was dull. I mean, this kind of stories have to develop slowly so the change is taken more... kindly.

    I do love this story, so I'll be waiting for the next chapter crawling up the walls!
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  • From midnightphoenix on February 10, 2007
    I like how you're taking the storyline. I've liked this story since the first chapter. You're taking it nice and easy, which helps to build the storyline at a good rate. I look forward to future chapters to see where you'll be taking the plot. Keep up the good work!
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  • From marquesgue1 on February 10, 2007
    I liked that Chapter and I think Ino rocks!!! Anyway, I won't say 'update soon' but I will say... update when you can, ne? LOL, this is a really interesting fic.

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Moon221 on February 08, 2007
    Hey, this is a great story that I have been following for some time! I can't wait for you to continue it. Also, I just found your story Poisoned Lullaby... I am looking forward to reading the new chapter next week or whenever you get a chance to put it up. Keep up the great original work!
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  • From ANON - Tedabug on February 06, 2007
    Update soon, please! The suspense is killing me. Also I can't wait for Sasuke to find out Naruto has left the team and want to see how he tries to win him back. Great story.
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  • From ktaztrofee on February 06, 2007
    Hi there. I just wanted to say that I really really love this fic you have here. I've been following it for a while now, but I only got around now to getting an account here d=. Anyway, I think it's a great story with so much potential. I love reading stories that actually have substance to it and this is definitely one of them. Anyway, I do hope you continue with it...I'm was so excited with the 4th chapter! I can't wait for what's next [=. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - shan on January 29, 2007
    I like the story, it's definitely not the normal. It makes the story more worth while that you don't rush into things, you're allowing us to get a feel for the characters and their positions in the story. The only problem I have is that the grammar needs a great deal of fine tuning; what you want to say is there, but it's put in an odd order. My mind doesn't seem to be stumped by the arrangement, instead it just passes over it arranging them correctly without much thought or both. Do you have a proof reader? If not perhaps you could invest in one. I know that some writers aren't too keen on proof readers, but a piece of writing being easy to read is important, readers will often abandon a story that's hard to read (I've done it myself), and it would be such a shame with such a wonderful story as this.

    I LOVE THIS STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON! :D
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  • From ANON - Zannie on January 21, 2007
    Hurry and finish it! I wanna see Team 7 reaction when they realise they now have Ino instead of Naruto. Maybe Ino should make a comment on how Naruto is growing up, and Sakura isn't, and maybe Ino should save Kakashi explaining it by saying shes there to help Sakura improve. Gotta love Ino, shes so catty, actually no, shes just mean but she cares. Loving it, please continue! And let the fires of youth propell us into glorious destiny! (waggles bushy eyebrows)
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  • From ANON - Random fan-girl on January 20, 2007
    eeeeek, if u do m-preg later on it damned well better be sasUKE...other than that i love this story, i never usually review but you're worth it!!! ;P....-glomp-!!!
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  • From roely on January 16, 2007
    i like ur fic! realy i do! i hope to read more!
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  • From ANON - dawn on January 14, 2007
    Yay! A new chapter!
    I loved Lee and Naruto, they were so cute and sweet together.
    It seems they would make each other excellent friends!
    Poor Sasuke having to be kept cooped up for a whole month with no one but dippy Sakura to come visit him. Boy, is he going to hit the roof when he finds out that Naruto is gone!
    Oh, just my own personal opinion, but please say no to m-preg. It never, ever ends well.
    Gah! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From darktoy on January 14, 2007
    OMG! ME HAPPY! *squeals*
    anyway, yeah, this chapter was needed. specially, since here the begginings of the change have started to show. (And I love to think that Sakura got a reality check... *growls*)
    Finally!!! Lee Will not be as green as before!!! and Naruto will get a little more camuflaged!!!
    LOVELY!!!!!
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