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By : Cepheus

From ANON - Damp on July 01, 2007
Forgot to give my e-mail...it�s my cuzin�s cuz I�m living with them for a while and I can�t access my other E-mail for some reason...
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From ANON - Hallie on July 01, 2007
Hey Cepheus, man what a freaking good story. This chapter had my heart in my throat, especially at the end. So, team 7 finally knows about Naruto. The interaction was better than I envisioned it to be and my heart is still racing. I love your story and all your others too. Your a great writer, and you have my full respect, there's not many people who can keep me enterained, but you have, and I thank you for that.

Anyway, grat update and I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Bye bye for now.
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From ANON - Damp on July 01, 2007
Finished chapie!!

WHOOT!!! It�s about time Naruto and Team Seven interacted!! I thought that encounter would have been just a little more...I don�t know. Sane? More subtle? Less painful? It�s your story, do what you want with it.

Although, I�m kind of worried with Sasuke�s reaction. I have confidence in what your going to do with him and such...but he still worries me because characters have a tendency of writing the story themselves...

-Damp *IT�S TRUE!!!*

P.S. I agree with Sasuke as well...I wished Naruto would have turned around and at least waved good bye at them...I almost started crying when I read that bit...
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From ANON - Damp on July 01, 2007
I�m willing to beta read for you...I haven�t read the fic yet cuz I just wanted to offer that beta read first before someone else could offer ^^.

-Damp *Goes to read the fic*
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From ANON - puchu on July 01, 2007
noooo~~!! how could you stop right where it's getting interesting!?!??! such cruelty!!!! anyways, great fic!! I like how it's fairly slow-paced; nothing's rushed. There are quite a few grammatical errors, but nothing a good beta won't fix! ^___^ Which I see you're looking for(I'd love to do it, but with the amount of time I work every week, I honestly don't think I have the energy for it....)

There are sometimes I feel some of the characters are a bit OOC, but this is nicely enough written that I can ignore it, for the sake of the story. So keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to reading the continuation of this.
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From MellyLa on July 01, 2007
If you still need that bet I'd be willing to do it for you. Awesome chapter by the way. I've been dying to know how Sasuke and Sakura would react to Naruto leaving team 7.
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From ANON - dima amaya on July 01, 2007
ha! i was so happy to see that you updated this. this and so many of your other stories are just wonderfully written. and as to you needing a beta, i might be able to help. i've never really done anything like that but i'm an english major so maybe that helps. anyway, email if you're up for it.
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From ANON - hina88 on July 01, 2007
Thanks for updating this story!!! an that chapter left an ache in my chest :s it really did - and I elt really angry at Sakura, I'm not a Sakura hater it's just that if she hadn't been selfish and had thought baout her other team mate then she would've known what was going on, it's good that Lee didn't declare himself to her again, he deserves more respect than that. Anyway, thanks for the update!!!

Hina xXxx

p.s. I love Kakashi ^_^
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From akume on July 01, 2007
~grabs Sasuke and Naruto plushie~ Everything going to be alright you two. ~hugs said plushies~ Maa, thanks for the chapter.
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From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2007
this story is soooooo awesome!!!! you should keep on writing it'll make me happy ^_^
the story is really good and the way you made the carecters is perfect for this story.
poor naru-chan he's been through alot but at least he has a chance to be happy for once
keep on with the story

ja ne
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From Keyblyder on May 16, 2007
................................................................................................................*look of pure amazement*
WOW!!!!! This story has SO much potential!!!!!!!!! They way that you have made the characters interact seems perfect. Plus the fact that Naruto left Team 7 and yet is able to find a group that he fits into perfectly is amazing!! I definitly can't wait for morw to come!!!! The way that you have changed the timeline doesn't really seem to show up that much. What I mean by that is that the story seems like this is the way that it should be and it doesn't seem fake at all. All in all the story is wonderful and I think that you are a great writer. O, and I love that you put out nice LONG chapters instead of chapters that take about a minute to read. The story seems much more in depth that way. Can't wait for more!!!! Keep up the good work and good luck!!! Ja ne
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From ANON - Meilin Rose (meilin) on April 24, 2007
I'm sorry it's taken me this long to review. T__T I don't remember if I ever asked you to update soon or not...if I did, then I'm sorry. I understand how you feel, though.

I love Team Neji's (I forgot if they had a team name or not. I suck...but Neji seemed a bit leaderish, so I'm just calling it that for the sake of this review) dynamics. I also love the fact that everyone cares so much to help Naruto out; it's just proof of how he's touched each of their lives so much.

The interaction between Ino and Naruto was a nice touch. I think that if they ever spent time together in the series, then they'd probably get along pretty well (they're similar in some ways), so I think you characterized her quite well. Chouji made me smile in the end too.

This was another excellent chapter. Nice job. ^^

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From FrozenAngels on March 31, 2007
um, sorry about not including this before(forgot* i am moron, please excuse my blondeness even tough i'm a brunet) about the mpreg thing: hey , its your fanfic, you can do whatever the hell YOU want!!! i dont mind and if your reviewers(?) really do support you they wont care and support you till the end. and also wont ask that sasuke or naruto be the uke and have one of them have the babies( personally i have a tendecie of drawing naruto kinda femenine but to me his personallity will always be defiant(?) and proud and very boyish. even tough my fave is always SASUNARU, and i dont really, well cant stomach the tought of sasuke-kins as uke( holds herself from puking and dying), this is YOUR fanfic, YOU can do whatever the hell you want you can make them wear thongs if you want too( EWW!) And even if you make this narusau( pukes and almost dies) I will follow you and will support you till the end! No matter what! Cause thats my ninja way!* gets hit with rotten tomatoe* I also love how naruchans new team is so caring!* i always saw neji as an overprotective big bro* LOve the new team lovin'!!

well i will stop talking you death, i bet your all' God damn doesnt this bitch EVER shuts the hell up, damn where the hells my gun?'* laughs*

Love, Tsukiyomi-chan
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From FrozenAngels on March 31, 2007
I am loving this so far, very interesting like your Poison Lullaby too. I love the sasunaru and nejishika too!(cUUUUTe) Me too, i think if sakura would get better if she got rid of her obsession with sasuke, and i would at leat learn to tolerate her, but since its not happening*shrugh* To be honest i loathe her, no offence to anyone who likes her tough. But i really hate her, if only she would seriously start acting like a ninja and learn to grow the hell up, and again no offence to anyone who likes her. But everyone knows that sasusaku is fandom, sasunaru is CANON, you know it, i know it, even George Bush knows it, baby! I'm really looking forward to the next chappie to see how sasu-kins reacts to finding out his uke left him( he kinda desrves it, the asshole) I love the way you writte, every time i read a chapie i feel like i'm reading a novel i bought from a really good bookstore. i love how you are including my fave characters, i love lee-chan( are you gonna pair him up with anyone*coughgaaracough*?) and i love how you are plannig the inotenten! I can see that they would compliment each other very well. Is I tachi-niisan gonna pop out too?( i love him) If you are i hope you wont make him rape naru or something( i hate that, i cant see Itachi-sempai doing that!) I know you are the author and it wont change anything, and if you want you can make it happen, but i'm just hoping. I'm plannig to do some fanart on this( as soon as my sensei finishes explaining to me how to use that damn scanner that my boyfriend bought me* kicks scanner* every time i find a fanfic i love i do some fanart on it, and yours KICKS ASS!!! Email me if you want something especific or i'll just draw whatever floats my brain at the time. Thanks so much for such a wonderful fanfic and now i am off to finish the fanart i'm doing for Shirohane so i can start on yours( and to tell all my friends about this fic, of course)

Love, your faithfull reviewer, Tsukiyomi!( dramatic music)

bertinorlando@sbcglobal.net

P.S. Please uptdate soon and i will love you forever!!!!!!! (who would want that? you'll probably think i;m a stalker* Laughs*)
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From harryhollow on March 29, 2007
I love this can't wait to read more please email me!!
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