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Reviews for Normality

By : Cepheus
  • From Keyblyder on July 02, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to bawl my head off!!!!!! that is so sad that the team broke up( I mean I had known about it from other chapters but now that it happened its so SAD!!!!)..... Can't wait for the next update!!!!! LOve your writing by the way!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - allthethingsyourefusetosay on July 02, 2007
    i loved it but i think lee could do so much better than sakura
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  • From serenagold on July 02, 2007
    This story is EXCELLENT.

    I love Naruto's new team. You have a good handle on the characters and I can't wait for your next update. ^^
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  • From ANON - Pastel on July 02, 2007
    Unbelievable chapter. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2007
    oh my! I'm loving this story!:D
    i'm just happy tha you didn't turn Naruto do a hyper active idiot. I'm really liking that story so far... And that Naruto DID not go back to Teem seven, he is a strong guy. And I think it was good for him to change teem - now he will grow more than he ever did in teem seven!:D

    Your doing an awesome work on this - keep it up!:D

    //Gina

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  • From Zigana on July 02, 2007
    Thank you for updating. This was a good chapter. I liked how you played things out. It will be interesting to see how Sasuke reacts to all this. Naruto's new team definetly does care.
    I'm still a bit new at this aff stuff, so please accept my humblest apoligies for my naivety. What exactly is a Beta? If it is a proofreader then that is something I can do and am willing to do.
    Enjoy your summer and I look forward to future updates, just don't push yourself to hard.
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  • From midnightphoenix on July 02, 2007
    I like what you're doing with this! The tension's becoming even more tangible. I can't wait to see what else you do with this. If you're still looking for a beta reader, then just email me at: sesshiesanimegirl@yahoo.com.
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  • From UzumakiLover on July 02, 2007
    that was so worth the wait, oh be strong naruto-kun. the pain he must be going though right now, oh and sasuke...will he be able to handle the shock?! lol though i loved sakura poor fool had no clue what the fuck was going on lol...oh its getting so good!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on July 02, 2007
    Wow. I can't believe I've slacked so bad on reviewing your fics! I really do love them. I was so happy to see Colorless Vanity updated the other day. Actually, I would really like to see Silent Observer updated too but I don't suppose I can be too greedy. At any rate, I love how this fic is moving and how hard Naruto is trying to grow past everything that's been thrown at him...and how ready his new team is to stand beside him.

    On a side note, I could help you out with your Beta-ing if you like.
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  • From ANON - RSlover on July 02, 2007
    whoo man that was intense
    I can't wait to find out what happens between Sasuke and Naruto later on
    I hope it happens soon and I hope it turns out to be a happy ending for those 2
    I just love sasunaru...they're so perfect for eachother (squeals XD)
    ur doing an awesome job on this story
    it's so creative and detailed...I just love it
    I'm officially addicted to this story ^_^
    Keep up the awesome work
    ur doin great =D
    (cookies for you) ^_^
    hope you update soon
    oh and I was wondering if you can send me an update alert each time you update
    so then I know????
    Thank you bunches
    YOU ROCK XD
    Ja'ne ^_^^_^^_^^_^

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  • From ANON - Bella4u on July 02, 2007
    DAMN!!!!! this story is the shyt! awww poor naru-chan damn that sasu! but i want them to end 2gether...yea i kno narusasu fan lol update soon!
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  • From Kurotsuki on July 01, 2007
    A mental picture of Neji with that suspicious glint in his eyes, looking at a pile of orange clothes burning right before him while cackling wildly like a mad man was hillarious! Well, that's how I pictured it. hehe.

    Can't wait for the next update. And I wonder how Sasuke and Naruto will end up together in the future...

    --tsukishiro
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  • From ANON - Sancta on July 01, 2007
    I love all your work, so I can understand you wanting a serious beta... but ouch, you really know how to put your former beta down cruelly. I would like to help you out and be serious about it, but I can't offer you perfection. I don't think anyone can.
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  • From ANON - Rez on July 01, 2007
    Oh wow. Talk about tense moments. I'm almost feeling sorry for Sasuke. He seemed so alone there, almost on the edge of desperation. In fact, I think in the next chapter, he is going to fall into a desperate rut. It will look good on him, I'll admit. Still, the lost little boy inside him sounded like it was about to come out. That, in and of itself, makes me almost feel bad. Almost.

    Poor Naruto though. Not realizing in the least what he walked himself in to. I hope that his team can comfort him. Poor, poor Naruto-kun. He is still os crushed. He hasn't really given himself a chance to heal. It may be getting better with time, but he won't fully heal until Sasuke apologizes. Knowing Neji, that chance won't come too soon. Aah, now I can't wait to see desperate Sasuke stalking sad Naruto all over Konoha when he returns from his mission.

    Is that why they have such a good mission now? Because Tsunade-sama knew Sasuke was going to be out and about, and wanted Naruto to have a reprieve? If so, YAY! I love Tsunade, and you write her well. Actually, you write everyone well, having most of their mentalities down pat. Thank you for not butchering the characters, and having them grow at a reasonable pace. It bothers me something fierce when cahracters just out of the blue take a total 180. You've got them growing, not changing - bless you for it.

    Well, I am definately looking foreward to the next chapter with the reactions of Sasuke and Sakura. I want the Haruno to feel every last drop of torment. She deserves it. Not to mention how angst-filled the Uchiha is going to be. I only hope you make his reactions porportionate to the character growth you're designing. I'd hate for him to turn into a simpering tag-along. He needs to accept his mistakes and earnestly try to regain favour with Naruto-kun. No easily granted forginveness. He's going to have to work to get Naruto back. They'll both be better for it in the end anyway.

    I also can't wait to see how Ino-chan goes about beating it into their skulls how royally they messed up. Go Ino-chan!!! I also hope that her lost interest in Sasuke will helo open Sakura's eyes. That girl is pathetic. Help her to become a passable figure in your fic, please. As much as I loathe her, Lee needs some lovin'. If Neji isn't available, then Saukra will have to do. Hehe, I love Shika/Neji. They are so compatable. With the groundwork you've already laid down, I can't wait to see how long for both of them to reach the same conclusions.

    Well, that's all the gushing you're going to get out of me now. Keep typin'

    Rezzy
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 01, 2007
    This is absolutely awesome, I love it. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I like that you have delved so deeply into the psychology and emotions of all the characters. Keep it up.
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