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Reviews for Normality

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on July 13, 2007
    Excellent story idea! I'm really looking forward to where you're taking it. You are right though, it does need a beta, little things like the wrong tense or wrong word usage are distracting from the overall wonderful quality of your work. If you still need one, I'd be happy to help, and if not, I still love the story and hope that your life allows you to write as often as you'd like.
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  • From rerickson1983 on July 05, 2007
    I can't wait to see Ino and Kakashi explain what's going on to Sasuke and Sakura. And Ino finally getting what she's been wanting to say off her chest and tell the other two members of Team Seven off (I'm a big Sakura hater, that is until she grows up after the three year time jump). Maybe even Kakashi admitting his mistake of playing favorites with one of his pupils.

    I would like to see more of Naruto's improvement in Genjutsu, Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, maybe even learn a few more jutsu. And what about Kyuubi? Are you going to have Naruto and the Kyuubi converse with each other? And will Neji, Shikamaru and Lee be able to talk to Kyuubi too?

    Also, what's with all the brown clothes? Neji wears a light colored shirt, and Shikamaru's jacket is a light color too? Not to mention, Sakura wears red, and Sasuke wears blue and white.

    This is a great fic that I have read over and over numerous times. Great job!
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  • From ANON - rae on July 05, 2007
    great fic, love your story
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  • From ABL on July 05, 2007
    Ah! Yes! I remember reading this story once but it only had three chapters the last time I read it. I'm sooooooooooo happy you're updating!

    I can't wait to see where this goes. I really, really, really, want to see how this story ends. So please don't give up on it!
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  • From ANON - Aice on July 03, 2007
    You wrenched my heart out of my chest when you make Naruto walk away from Sasuke without sparing the raven a glance.
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  • From gaara89 on July 03, 2007
    This is really great please continue!
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  • From TheSirens on July 03, 2007
    First off i just wanted to say great chapter and I'm was ecstatic to see that you had updated.(I even squealed some ^ ^) If you still haven't found a BETA I would love to help out. Beside this story I also like your other one, 'Colourless Vanity'. It would be fun editing your work. If you want to chat more just email me @ lady_mayhem02@hotmail.com, or you can email me with the email address in my profile, but that more of my partners than mine. Anyway I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work!
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  • From electricme on July 03, 2007
    that was too good! sasuke's reaction was classic, i mean that was a huge blow to the ego when naruto whent to neji. i love it!
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  • From Raithea on July 03, 2007
    Hey Cepheus
    Great job on this fic. I love your style and the emotional and logical flow that runs through your works. I would love to be your BETA, I have the time and grammatical know how and agree that the grammar missteps are the only thing that interrupts that beautiful you have. So drop me a line if I make the cut and once again great job on this story. I love it! Oh by the way my e-mail is windfall77@hotmail.com.
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  • From ANON - dragondancer on July 02, 2007
    thats a really mean place to stop and you so need to write the next ch
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  • From ANON - Sue on July 02, 2007
    What took u so long? Great chapter! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - dana on July 02, 2007
    sorry for the short review for a really great chapter but i have to go. can't wait til the next update. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Minen on July 02, 2007
    i usually hate cliffies.. allthough.. the ones in this story rules!!!! *nice guy pose with huge brigh twinkling smile* absolutly love this story..! hopefully sakura will go after lee and he will play hard to catch*evil*^^ btw, pls make sasuke suffer a bit more.. he has had it way too easy on him! does it show that i'm not a great fan of mr. uchiha?
    oh, also.. update asap:P can't wait^^ kör hårt!

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  • From hightojo on July 02, 2007
    Hey, I love it it's great, talk about a great plot. If you still need a Beta I would love to give you a hand. My email is hightojo@earthlink.net. So give me a shout.
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on July 02, 2007
    Wow, that was so painful at the end of this chapter! I actually felt the palpable tension...and I could feel the panic Naruto was experiencing. I have to give you major cudos for that! Not many stories can make their readers actually feel the situation as your story made me feel. This story so far is just absolutely amazing! The characters and how they are developing is extremely well written. I love, no adore your writing style. I still can't get over how into this story I was from the first six chapters! Everybody should read it, I swear to God. Wow...now I mean wow...you are talented. This is one of the best stories I have read. I would be your BETA but unfortunately I don't have an account. PLease please update soon! I can't stand to wait another minute :)
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