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Reviews for Normality

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Miki-Chan on November 03, 2007
    i love normality and i think that if you continue it normality will be a great story. Please continue it.

    from a fan of your stories,
    Miki-Chan
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 27, 2007
    Just when I thought you couldn't get any better, YOU DO!! Dang, this was awesome! Ok, I'm a diehard sasunaru fan, but darn it, he deserves having naruto turn his back on him. hey, is it too late to request nejinaru instead of sasunaru? probably not but thought i'd ask. wouldn't that be perfect? the great sasuke uchiha loses naruto to neji and sakura to lee, with ino there to rub it all in. hehehehehe! anyway, update soon, 'cause the story must go on. luv ya!
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  • From auroradartmoore on October 25, 2007
    Hi!!
    I totally fell in love with you story Normality!! It's brilliant!! And I can't wait to see an update!!
    Which brings me to the next issue: do you still need a beta reader?? Although I'm not officially registered in the beta reader group, I'd love to help out. As for my qualifications: English is my second language, I studied English at the university and currently work as translator (English - other languages). So if you're interested and don't have a beta yet, let me know!!
    Livvy
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 12, 2007
    Oh, and because I forgot to add it in the review, please, please don't make this an mpreg. I can't stand those, except for very few. They are just soooo, odd.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 12, 2007
    I have to admit, I really like the way you're developing this! I just found it so please don't be made at me for not reviewing before??!! Write more soon. I especially like you're story with Naruto in Anbu with Itachi. I can't wait for more of that!
    Slave
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  • From Georginna on October 07, 2007
    sorry, my email is gml125@comcast.net

    dw
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  • From Georginna on October 07, 2007
    I really love this story! It's nice to see Naruto get some real friends. I enjoy your characterizations thus far. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Also, if you are still looking for a beta reader, I would be interested in the position. Please feel free to email me.

    Keep up the great work!!
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  • From Seraphyn on September 09, 2007
    I truly adore this story! I've only read Naruto, never watched the Anime, but the characterization is very well balanced and similar to me. As much as I love the fact Naruto isn't the usually going-to-roll-over-and-take-whatever-kernel-of-affection-Sasuke-gives-to-me I really hope he and Sasuke find that sappy happy ending. Please update soon!
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  • From LadyLaran on August 24, 2007
    This was incredibly well done. A lot of emotions from both sides and it really touched me while reading. I do hope you'll continue with the story. Email me if you need any help or advice. I also have messengers and would be willing to chat to help with any muse issues. Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - mishap on August 21, 2007
    I have read the majority of your work posted on aff and I have really enjoyed it I am very lazy about reviewing so this is it. I have noticed that you have not updated in some time, are you posting elsewhere?

    You asked for c&c but only one thing really stuck out in my mind. You might want to use the word peaceful instead of pacific. Although the meaning is very much the same pacific is kind of awkward and many people associate it with the the pacific ocean.
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  • From novaline on August 20, 2007
    Just found this story and read it through, and I just love it. I became so sad when Naruto wanted to leave team 7 but now I know it's for the better. He will become a better and stronger person when teamed up with Lee, Neji and Shikamaru. Looking forward to seeing how the new team 7 will handle things and how Naruto and his new team will make progress. And I can't wait to find out what name they will pick for their team.

    Great story and very well written. Thank you for sharing

    //Helen (newbie at reviewing =)
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  • From morbiDreamscape on August 18, 2007
    This fic makes me reconsider the dynamics of the whole Team 7 relationship. I feel so sorry for Naruto, but the entire plot makes sense, and that's great to see in a fanfiction. I also like the pacing of the story; it's both suspenseful and interesting. :D The theme of "change" is pretty consistent, and seeing how Naruto, Lee, Sasuke, and even Ino are trying to change for the better is really heartwarming. I look forward to reading more!

    If you're still looking for a beta reader, I'm willing to take the job. ^__^ You can email me at morbidreamscape@gmail.com if you're interested. I read fast, and I will catch most grammar/spelling errors, and can smooth sentence structures or whatnot if required.
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  • From biiisti on August 16, 2007
    God i love this fic! ^^ I hope you update soon and keep up the good work (:
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  • From AliceMina on July 17, 2007
    I like it. It is good to see the good interaction between Naruto's new team. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Trigger on July 14, 2007
    Awesome story, I love it! Please update soon I'm dying to see what happens next hehe.
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