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Reviews for Butterflies Fly

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    That was wonderfully poetic and depressing. I loved it really!~ thank you for writting it i love all your stories.
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  • From AoiNikko on January 24, 2008
    I liked this. I like your style, and not just because you write my favorite Naruto pairing. You have a lot for me to go through, and I'm happy, beause you write well, and pay attention to details. You don't rush through important things, like feelings. Yes, I like you. As a writer, you make me very happy. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From Jomai on January 10, 2008
    Nice story!!!
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  • From criesbloodredtears on July 08, 2007
    Wow, I really enjoyed that, alot! ure a great writer!
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  • From ANON - rage on June 06, 2007
    that was so good. you should make it into a story it would be really awesome. hope you continue this story. see ya
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2007
    i kinda hate to say it (for reasons i can't say) but that poem relates WAY to much to me. i wrote a poem yesterday because i was depressed (for reasons i won't say). i wrote alot of poems but i think this one is the one that i should show and if you want to know the other ones just email me and i'll send them. so here's my poem:



    Unmasked


    Images so vivid in my mind
    Turning back the hands of time
    The pain and suffering that they bring
    Goes unnoticed by everyone around me
    Who knew such simple things could be the cause of this
    To trigger all the pain and sorrow
    I’ve held through out the years
    The tears that will not fall
    The smile that deceives them all
    How can I go on living
    When all I lived for slipped between my grasp
    The only thing that I await
    Is the death that will not come

    Now that your at poems end
    Put this within your head

    Is my life really so swell
    Does my mask work that well
    That no one close to me can even tell

    (Only you can answer that)



    well, thats all i can say for now and umm....well if you...nm. ur poem was nice and i love the ending because he finds what hes been wanting. (i still haven't though) if you write another one like this please let me be the first to know. thanks. l8r!

    o and just in case; the line Unmasked is the title. the poem starts at the line beginning with the word images
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  • From ANON - Sakura-Laurel on March 19, 2007
    Haaaaaaa!!!!!!! *points finger at you* It's YOU!!! AGAIN!!! WHY IS IT THAT I ALWAYS FIND MYSELF IN THE CLUTCHES OF YOUR AWESOME STORIES?!?!?! THE PWNAGE!! THE PWNAGE!!!!!

    *jumps off building*

    *whispers, "don't worry, i liked it much... *nod**nod* i always like your stories. teeheehee."*
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  • From ANON - silver on December 15, 2006
    This is very good. Nice job. I do wonder though if Itachi ends up also being Naruto's death too. Poor Naruto gets to live only a short time in the sun- like a butterfly?
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  • From on December 14, 2006
    wow, this is a good one shot. I like it n.n
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  • From ANON - Mysteryladytx on September 09, 2006
    it took me a while but I knew I had read this before...its still a GREAT story:D
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  • From ANON - ryuichi ukai on August 07, 2006
    I want to let you now this is a beautiful poem and story. It...reminds me of who I have been...and who reached out to break my own mask.
    This story probably speaks to a lot of people, so keep it up!
    Vague, but beautiful in a sad, truthful way.
    5stars ^__^
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on July 13, 2006
    ~stares~...That was so pretty... Touching... Yeah... You're really good! ^_^... Kind of sad, but I've always kind of wondered if maybe all of Naruto's act IS just a mask... This is a very well put-together story... And if I am not mistaken.. i'm the first to review? ~checks~ yep... Love it! T_T...^_^...O_O...0_0...o_o...

    Sincerely,

    MasterLenx

    P.S: BEWARE THE SQUIRRELS!
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