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Reviews for Waiting for a Miracle

By : masaharu
  • From Wolfgirl37 on March 29, 2007
    Yay!! Nicely done! I'm loving it! Can't wait to find out what happens next! If it's not too much trouble, do you think you could email me when you update? It would be much appreciated. anyway, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on January 10, 2007
    *sniffs through tears* What the shmullock?! I'm so confused TT_TT!! *blows nose* Ah, this story really... I hate Orochimaru with a passion. Damn it, I'm so pissed at Sasuke *kicks chair*.

    Are you going to update...?
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  • From ANON - snikiti on January 04, 2007
    Oh my God,this is amazing..really,i love sasunaru and this yaoi fic is simply amazing,PLEASEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON,i can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2006
    Are you going to update? This is my favorite Sasuke/Naruto fic so I hope you do... Just don't abandon it, please? I love it.
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on June 27, 2006
    Please, I don't normally beg for authors to continue their stories but this one is....different. There is all the feelings and reality to it. I can't even find words for it. Please update soon and if you're not going to update could you tell me please?
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  • From ANON - Vin on February 13, 2006
    Update! Update! Update!

    I felt like I was warped into the text. _> *Shove.*
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  • From ANON - sizzle on February 08, 2006
    so intense, so full of angst, so deliciously painful yet written with delicacy. i will enjoy seeing where these delightfully long chapters will head, lol
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  • From ANON - ST on February 08, 2006
    ah, i can't wait for the next chapter - you certaintly made this first one interesting.
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  • From ANON - Ayako on February 07, 2006
    I didn't notice many--if any--grammar mistakes (not that I'm particularly good at it myself; if there were any, the writing is good enough that only the most anal would notice). I'm kind of jealous that someone whose primary language is _not_ English can write in it so well. I think I'd love this fic even if it weren't SasuNaru. I'm so impressed. Long, satisfying chapter that leaves many things unanswered--it practically asks for readers to beg for more. :D
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  • From ANON - tariray on February 07, 2006
    oh my ............
    you are beyond a friggin good writer you are among the best!!!
    i looooooooooooooooooooove this and i surely hop you keep it up because it is absolutely AMAZING
    and grovel pitifully in my corner in praise of ye!!!
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  • From ANON - Aki on February 07, 2006
    This is amazing! I can't come up with anything better to say, so
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  • From ANON - WolfPilot06 on February 07, 2006
    Yo. So, reading your footnote, I was extremely surprised; I totally did not realize that English is not your mother tongue. You write excellently, with beautifully aching poignancy, and have an obvious talent for setting the mood. It goes without being said that I find your characterizations wonderful. The part that broke my heart - more than the rest of the fic, at least - was when Orochimaru conveyed Sasuke's last message to Naruto. That was sheer brilliance. I look forward to more of this story - Sakura's single-minded dedication to bringing Sasuke back was very touching and painful, as was Naruto's resigned, hopeless point of view.

    As for grammar, I really only have one suggestion: often, you use an apostrophe and an 's' to represent "was", which is fairly confusing and seems to disturb the flow of your tense. Since "'s" is usually used to represent "is", I recommend that you write out "was" instead of abbreviating it. Otherwise, excellent job! Well-written and captivating. =)

    **Wolf**
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  • From ANON - Shinjitsu no Shi on February 07, 2006
    i have a couple things to say,

    1) I hate sasusaku stories yet i don't hate her, but in this fic i am very mad at her. She is a bitch for loving sasuke so much. I hate her now. Teh true couple is narusasu all the way! That stupid pinkie needs to stay outta teh way!

    2) Your grammer is just fine.

    3) Post more of this story XD few people these days have over 3000 words per chapter ina fic but you did it! you have the record of words ina fic that i have read. *pats you on the back* congrats ^_^ you get the satisfaction of knowing you have a huge fan out there! me ^_^

    4) Have I said to post more of this story yet? ohh... i have but still GREAT but don't make Naruto-kun kill Sasuke-kun okay? The couple won't work if one is dead yah know.

    5) ummm... im just seeing how many things i can say about a fic... umm how about that Orchimaru-bitch should be dead. KILL HIM AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!

    6) I gotta go... ja ne
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on February 06, 2006
    Hmmm. I enjoyed this muchly. Have to admit I was mildly concerned over Sakura's role for a while there. Had to pause to re-read the summary to make sure it truly was intended to be SasuNaru. And am thusly appeased now. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Emmy on February 05, 2006
    Wow...just...wow. I swear, that was good enough to be a one-shot. I cannot WAIT to read more of this story, it is definitely gonna be a good one! You write so well, it's as if I'm there, feeling what they're feeling. The part where snake-bastard did that evil thing apologizing to Naruto...I almost cried! So perfect, and the fight scenes were exciting, not over the top, and really emotional - which of course made it even better. I really can't say enough good things about this story, there was absolutely nothing bad about it, I didn't even notice any grammatical errors...of course, I suck at grammar, but still - there was nothing that stood out. The dialogue in this story was perfect, everyone was in character, and you actually managed to make me feel sorry for Sakura! Which is saying a lot, since I usually don't like her that much.

    Anyways, like I said, this story is off to a AMAZING start! It's very promising, and I look forward to reading more of it in the future. Later! ^_^
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