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By : exrxr
  • From ANON - Sukara on November 28, 2005
    xDD The ending is funny. "We got handcuffs" xD Please update soon. =3
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on November 27, 2005
    Cool this is fucking hularyus!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to up date soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Keishiki-Dono on November 27, 2005
    Update! For I command it! .......please? *loves*
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  • From ANON - Kenz on November 27, 2005
    keep up the great work love it ^.^
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on November 27, 2005
    ooo this is so hot!!! update asap!!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on November 27, 2005
    Yes! Longer chapter and ending diffrent. Of course I prefer this one. Angel Sasuke really is a perv, he just want to give himself a moral side that's obviously isn't working. Yhe thing about Sasuke having naughty tought about Naruto while he's in jail is very interesting, never seen this one. I always knew Naruto was sinfuly fuckable, even without wanting to be. And as Sasuke is a perv, I wonder of much more time he'll keep his self control. Well at least Naruto will have a good reason to scream "help! Rape! " this time, aven if it's completly his fault. But he won't be rape cause, come on, who in his right mind could object being fucked by Sasuke?? Well good luck for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kaka-she on November 27, 2005
    XD...*laughs for an hour* ^-^ Write more soon! I love it! Please?
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  • From ANON - ochiba on November 27, 2005
    "Thus we didn’t want to bore our readers with mundane details and descriptions." ROFLMAO! That is friggin' hilarious on so many different levels! WTF?!

    Anyway, funny fic. Not genius, not clever, but nonetheless gratifyingly amusing. [insert praise] Claps to you for the read.

    Minus the cheesy angel sasuke and devil sasuke, sasuke's character is believable enough. The situation makes for video porn *snickers* that's not an insult! It's a compliment... sometimes it's nice to read SasuNaru fanfiction with no point or plot. At least I've enjoyed reading this!

    Lastly, if you don't want to finish your fic, then don't... we'll live. It's not like you're dangling a read-or-die over our heads, so don't stress yourself too much trying to convince your partner to have mercy on undeserving readers *grins* Sorry if that sounds catty, but seriously... it's not the readers' fault that your comments are annoying and retarded.
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  • From exrxr on November 27, 2005
    also, i thought that au meant alternate universe. as in not set in ninja theme and sort of like in school setting or some other. and ae is alternate ending as in set in ninja setting with different ending to that in manga or anime.

    or am i wrong? or getting confused? can someone clarify please?
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  • From exrxr on November 27, 2005
    THANK YOU to everyone that has reviewed! i know i really loved getting all those positive responses all you readers and all the constructive critisim there is. (momo - i hope this second chapter explains the summary for this fic)

    this was originally a one-shot and it will stay a one-shot fic by the end of the third installment which may/may not come. seriously, i'm thinking about not continuing this. i've already explained why the a/ns have been put in.

    Einld and i have never intended to sound rude but that's why at the start we stated that you could "skip the notes". however, complaining to us again about it is something that is really starting to irritate me (somehow i get the feeling that Einld will be really pissed about this and won't want to finish the third chapter OR omake).

    oh well. i'll *try* to appease Einld into just finishing as there's only one part to go but please. don't chew us out on the a/ns again. instead, give us some other critisim like how a sentence could be written better or this paragraph didn't make sense (don't ask us about spelling. we use the New Zealand English - expect some differences).

    oh, and ghost - i know what you mean about that last sentence. we altered the ending of part 2 *just* so it would come off sounding just right! glad you liked it ^__^
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  • From ANON - hunn3y on November 27, 2005
    I couldn't finished reading the second chapter becuase despite how much i enjoyed the story so far, there seems to be odd symbols and whatnot with in the story and they do seem to be somewhat distracting. Other then that, good job;D
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  • From on November 27, 2005
    Me likey~ Please e-mail me when you UPDATE PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Marielle on November 26, 2005
    Just to let you know, I was gonna read this newest chapter until I read your author's note.

    It's all good and well the story is au...


    MOST Naruto stories are au...

    But most of us reading are not stupid. And, common sense tell you to keep something you don't "understand" filed in, so that when you get to the a/n at the END to then read through them.

    It was just a suggestion, and the a/n was slightly rude.
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  • From ANON - Fan on November 26, 2005
    Ha- I like it! Yay, cage scene! ;) And I sense Kakairuka coming too... All my favorite pairings! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ghost on November 26, 2005
    XDDDDDDDDDDD THAT WAS SO AWESOME. The last line was one to die for. XDDD the cherry on top. Kudos for you!
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