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Reviews for Smile

By : Kyuunoki
  • From bloodshound on September 20, 2010
    typical Sasuke, he's such a hardarse.
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  • From ANON - Raven Swiftwing on November 01, 2005
    *sniffs* It's so sad, but I love it! I hope Naruto breaks Sasuke's nose and ends it with him! *Sniffs* That would be hard to explain to Kakashi as well... Sasuke didn't even say anything and Naruto's bustin' his nose in!! LOL
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  • From ANON - Heather on November 01, 2005
    this was very poignant and slightly sad. i feel that, if sasuke hadn't (SPOILER! for anyone who doesn't know too much about naruto) betrayed konoha and went to orochimaru (and also if naruto and sasuke actually had a relationship) this is what it would be like for them. sasuke would still act like an asshole, pretending like he doesn't care, shying away from emotions that would only tie him down and make him weak. and naruto would always be there, trying his best to help sasuke, willing to do anything for him. this story of yours, i think, showed a very realistic slant on their relationship. it's not a bed of roses (sorry for the cliched saying), but with those two, theirs will always be a struggle. but sasuke's smile hinted that maybe, just maybe, it may not always be so bad. a continuation of this would be great, but as is, this is an awesome one-shot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2005
    MORE PLEEEEEZE!
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  • From ANON - Nishtiman on September 20, 2005
    Will you do a sequal to this? I would love to read a follow-up. Anyway, it was simple and perfect in my opinion. You showed their emotions easy. It's on my favourite list.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on September 06, 2005
    Simple and perfect. It shows everything that defines them with a simple none gesture. Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on September 06, 2005
    That's a very interesting one-shot. It wouldn't hurt to have a sequel, but then, it's strong enough to stand on it's own. All in all, a good fic. Keep up the great writing. Ja!
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  • From ANON - kaka-she on September 04, 2005
    Aww!...thats so sad! ; _ ; ...cute, but sad! I really liked it. You should write more! o^-^o
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  • From ANON - caro8 on September 03, 2005
    I really enjoyed it. I liked how you wrote it out of both perspectives. The Sasuke one was my fave. With him saying how he doesn't want Naruto to love him, and how he turned away so quickly so Naruto wouldn't see his smile.

    It was great. I can't wait to see more of your stuff.
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  • From ANON - yuki on September 03, 2005
    it's not made out to be a oneshot. it's the making of a good multi-chap. please consider continuing this, cause it's good. i can just picture what the story would be like, and i swear it's gonna kick ass. please, please think about it.
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  • From ANON - Serenia on September 03, 2005
    I like how you covered the same part of the story from both POVs. Sasuke can sure be a hateful little bastard, hey?
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  • From ANON - spare on September 02, 2005
    Wow. The emotion was very well-done, with just the right amount of intensity and introspection to keep a reader... well, reading. ^^; Good writing here. Short, but very memorable. Naruto angsty and Sasuke... angstier, still, but a very believable angsty.
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  • From ANON - Fan on September 02, 2005
    ...isn't 'yuri' for girl/girl? Am I wrong in this? I like the story... but I think wrong category? Maybe? Sorry if not!!!
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  • From ANON - Jaxxy on September 01, 2005
    My eyes are pricked with tears.
    What a *lovely* interpretation of the way that could go! That's an IC story I can really buy into.
    I'm speechless really ::weak laugh:: that was simply beautiful.
    I hope you have more stuff..


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  • From ANON - onefreak on August 31, 2005
    I Loved your story ^^
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