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Reviews for Smile

By : Kyuunoki
  • From ANON - Tatemshope on August 31, 2005
    Wow! I really like it. It's amazing how right on your are with the characterizations! I'm very very impressed. I'm just WAY too sappy to ever be able to let people act like themselves in my stories! I really wish I could write more like you.
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  • From oubliette on August 31, 2005
    Hmm...cute. Very cute. Well done.

    -Oubliette
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  • From ANON - macy on August 31, 2005
    that was sad ;____; But I can totally see Sasuke thinking that way.
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  • From ANON - Mostflogged on August 31, 2005
    There has never been a better welcome back gift than this. And letting me Beta something in the same day, what more could a fangirl ask for? The last two sentences were Perfect with capitalization, they were just so Sasuke. Every time you write something like this I thank every deity I know that you're a yaoi fangirl. If you weren’t writing of this caliber would be a very convincing argument for the side of het.
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  • From ANON - ses on August 30, 2005
    good story here... i know sasuke likes naruto but wouldnt admit it...
    get sasuke jealous or something, or make him regret once naruto
    is gone from his life!!! SO continue the story !!
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  • From ANON - lje on August 30, 2005
    I love the last paragraph. It is so powerful.
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  • From ANON - Nielenon on August 30, 2005
    kyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! *squeeeeeeee!!!!!* omg.....wow.......so good.......i shalt weep. wow....*HUG* no words, m'dear. i wish i could write like that...
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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on August 30, 2005
    Oh my god! This was so touching...It was just wonderful the way you showed both of their views. Th ending was perfect, as well...Right now, I'm just screaming "sequel" in my mind...D':
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on August 30, 2005
    Awwww! I like this! It's sweet! A cute one shot. (^-^)
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  • From ANON - Fan on August 30, 2005
    I really liked the two points of view you did- it added a nice effect to the story. I think this would make a good 3 part story... though its enjoyable as a oneshot as well. Perhaps add a bit more scene information- well done on the character detail.
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  • From ANON - RCJ on August 30, 2005
    sasuke is too... cold...
    but this could be a nice prologue of something here... do u intend to make some kind of sequel?
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 30, 2005
    OMG!!! *is bawling her eyes out* Ok, blame it on PMS or being overly emotional or SOMETHING, but I can't help it!!! That was sooooooo sad... and sweet...... and........... *bursts into tears again* ^^;; Very well written -- I loved your characterizations -- and definetly deserving of a follow-up, lol. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From koolanimefreek on August 30, 2005
    It was really sad...Maybe it's cuz I read so much SasuNaru fluff... Anyway, it was very good! Although a little sad... I always like it when Sasuke forgets about his brother and embraces Naruto's love... but that's just me... GREAT JOB!
    Much Love
    ~koolanimefreek
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on August 30, 2005
    I honestly can't decide if that was really, really sweet, or really, really sad. It makes me want to write SasuNaru angst, though. Good job, Sasuke was perfectly in character, as was Naruto.
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