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Reviews for Sexy no Omake

By : bucketmouse
  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    It's good so far, only one problem. In the sixth chapter you called Gai the Azure beast. Azure means sky-blue. Gai has always been the green beast.
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  • From ANON - ayla pendragon on December 13, 2005
    Let's thanks the lord for and update. This story is HOT !!!! We... I need more of this. So, update soon, okay ! Oh and cool drawings by the way.

    Luce
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  • From ANON - Ebony Nemesis on October 04, 2005
    Hyaaa~~~ finally a Gai/Kakashi, and a good one never the less. I thoroughly enjoyed your story, loved the characterization, it's not easy these days to find a fic with good sex scenes, and I mean REALLY good, AND decent plot. But you managed to do it, and you surpassed that by intergrating the two. Good job~~

    I'm going to re-read the fic now and drool over sexy Kakashi... Actually, I can't imagine him without the mask, except with a pair of codfish lips or beaver teeth (due to naruto suggesting them in ... ep 110? I think...).

    Looking forward to more of your stories.

    luv
    Nemmy
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  • From Masago on September 14, 2005
    This story is fecking brilliant and has reawakened my urge to write my KakashiGai fic. XD
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  • From ANON - anon on September 05, 2005
    more? pretty please?
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  • From ANON - A-Person on September 05, 2005
    You're really good at this. :)
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  • From ANON - passing by on August 23, 2005
    It's pretty obvious that you're alternating paragraphs, one author writing Kakashi's paragraphs and the other writing Gai's, because Kakashi's author has better grammar and proofreads more. Get Kakashi's author to proofread Gai's paragraphs and it'll be less jarringly noticeable that there are two different authors writing one paragraph at a time.
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  • From ANON - Clem on August 23, 2005
    You know what ? I really love your story... The caracterisation is 100/100 canon (well, maybe exept for the 'I want to fuck my rival' part), but even in those part you make them act very credibily. This IS Kakashi, and this is undoubtly Gai :).
    I see too few fic staring Gai and Kakashi (even just as rivals), so I think I will fall in love with you if you keep posting this really excellent story :D.
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on August 12, 2005
    this is the first fic of this kind that i saw, and trust me, i look around a lot. you got fics hinting this with nothing happening and you got fics with nothing at all. but this fic had at least some lime and that was more than enough. this fic is good, has a solid and good plot, humor, and all yaoi goodness. and i have to tell ya, if you put some actual lemon in there, this fic will be off the chain (like it already is). plus, i kinda like this pairing since like i said, not much of this pairing going on.


    well, i hope you update real soon ^_^V
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  • From ANON - Kazoom on August 12, 2005
    "The desires of a man's body need to be sated in order to keep the flames of youth burning!"

    Gai promptly got more than a few looks from those in the hallway, or ones that were peeking out of their rooms. A narrow-eyed blonde yelled at Gai from down the hall, standing in his doorway. "As long as you keep it in your room, go right ahead!"

    Hahahhahahaha! I love that! This fic was really funny and pretty well-written! Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - dilemmalicious on August 12, 2005
    *you are goggled by big eyes somewhere deep in the heart of England*

    Bloody Nora. I had my doubts, was actually a tad scared to read this... Not because of Gai/Kakashi, but because it had the dreaded words RP branded across it. But I take my hat off to you both, your madness is enjoyable to say the least. I'd kill for online role-player like you two. Fun, imaginative, it it was scarily, brilliantly plausible. An actual plot! A hedonistic Kakashi! A hysterically enthusiastic Gai! *grins* Looking forward to the rest... -j.
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