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Reviews for Abandoning Hope

By : Mieren
  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2005
    I love this. You have to continue soon. Maybe I'm a sadist but I seem to enjoy stories with the torture of my favorite characters. It beats the fluffy romance you usually find.
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  • From ANON - Liliath on April 05, 2005
    cool, really cool, Im kinda sadistic so I think it was great!YAY! update soon!!!^^
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  • From ANON - - on April 05, 2005
    well.. its different i'll give it that.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 05, 2005
    Wow,like Itachi would ever buddie up ,esp. like that with Orrochimaru and without Kisame or another Akatsuki.I do wonder what is interesting about torture,only ever read one good torture book (Raw Pain Max) and the pay back was increadable,but it was the heroine Max who carried it,even Suzie Brights stuff gets too over the top.Like why isn't Kyubie (spelling) melting their faces off?Because it is a fan fic and your are writing for sadists?O.K. but the torture did not seem to work,Naruto is pretty chipper,Sasuke hasn't gone Ape shit.Where is Tsundae?I guess the point of the gore is escaping me.I must say the first chapter was really f'd up/shocking,that worked but it has really powered down to simple gross out.Can not wait to see what could be the point.
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  • From ANON - VS on April 04, 2005
    Oh my. Poor Naruto. Well, I'm glad we get to see what happened to him. I'm also glad to see such a quick update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on April 04, 2005
    EVIL BASTARDS!!!!
    T-T Poor Naruto...and that was only the beginning!! T___T

    Never-the-less, I liked it. ^^ Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - VS on April 04, 2005
    This... I like. Keep up the good work. ^_^ Poor Naruto. Why do us pervs torture him like this? At least in this one he seems to be handling it well like he actually would and not collapsing into a shuddering heap of trauma incarnate. Although I would expect him to be a bit different and much more... I dunno, frail? Especially with no eyes and one hand. He's gonna need his buddies. ^_^

    I really look forward to seeing more of this.
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on April 03, 2005
    OMG! This story is great!!! Poor Naruto-kun. T-T But I'm so happy that he's getting better.
    *shakes her fist threateningly at you* You had better update soon! *goes all sweet and innocent again* Please? *bats her eyelashes*
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  • From ANON - someone on April 02, 2005
    its a really awesome story so far!...but...poor naruto...his beautiful blue eyes and his hand are gone! HOW SAD!!! *cries* POOR NARUTO!!!! I hope he gets better soon! I hate it when he looses his eyes as in they are gone..not just blind..and his hand....but it really is a well created story! even though I hate things like this (loosing his hand/eyes, or anything else that can't grow back), you have managed to keep me reading it! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Rosemary on April 02, 2005
    Interesting, can't wait to find out why ;)
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  • From ANON - kayoko on April 02, 2005
    Okay, when i read "graphic torture" i was thinking something else. I would definitely add a squick warning in there somewhere and maybe blood and gore because the way you worded things in the summary felt more like some kind of bondage rather than gory disturbing material. Actually, I wouldn't classify naruto's situation as torture because he wasn't tortured. He was just mutilated and got a few lims chopped off. It's would be more like excessive violence, blood and gore, squick material. The effects of his attack may be torturous for Naruto, but i guess it depends on your definition.

    But please, please, please, put more warnings.

    I guess once you get past the extremity of the situation, it's pretty good. It's just a little too extreme for my taste. If they were to bury a kunai in anyone's eyes all the way, I'm sure the kunai is long enough to hit the brain. It's amazing how no one came to Naruto's aid when he was attacked. I'm sure there was some point in time where he was kicking and screaming on top of his lungs before they injured him. It's scary how Naruto was actually alive and didn't die from blood loss. The human body doesn't contain a lot of blood and even though his attackers took precautions to prevent him from bleeding to death, it's still a little disturbing.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on March 30, 2005
    WUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!how sad poor poor naruto i hope sasuke kills his brother for what he did to "his dope" muahahahahaahahahahahaha!!!

    oh well this one helluva great story please contiune cant wait to read what happens in the next chapters!!


    UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!
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  • From ANON - cassie on March 29, 2005
    ohhhhhh..... poor kid, that realy sux. i will continue to read though!
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  • From NarakusKoi on March 29, 2005
    I'm loving it! So bloody. So gory. So....sexy! Can't wait to read the rape scene. Heh. >) Orochimaru and Itachi my two favorite characters. X3
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  • From ANON - Liliath on March 29, 2005
    OMG!! YOU TOOK HIS EYES OUT AND CUT OF HIS LIMB???? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HIM!! DIE YOU EVIL PERSON DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T but first....update!!^^ man, could you put up a good description of what really happened?? and man, make it really graphic and cool!!!!!! XP okay okay, Im not perverst, sadistic or what, me just curious^^....*sweatdrop*....eh *sigh* DARN IT!!!!!!>.< eh, just update, everything else is fine^^
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