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Reviews for Abandoning Hope

By : Mieren
  • From ANON - One_Sick_Mind on June 27, 2005
    nonono, Sasuke can get tortured and still wind up being the strong comforting one... I mean, in MY mind he's ALREADY been tortured and raped by Itachi, so he should be able to handle it better maybe... maybe be inclined to crumple back into a traumatized little ball, but with Naruto so shattered, he must instead be the strong one and overcome his own pain so he can be strong for Naruto... And besides, they don't have to physically damage Sasuke as much as Naruto so that he's in traction for weeks, just rape him and cause him a whole lot of pain. But leave him uninjured enough to be sitting next to Naruto when he comes around again... which might be in a cage in OroKabuIta's dungeon... ^________^ hmmmmmm... OMG... the two of them injured and traumatized and comforting each other in a cage...
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  • From ANON - kirikiri-mai on June 26, 2005
    I'm with you on that one_sick_mind! more angst! yeah! but not sasuke. sasuke needs to be strong enough to be there for naruto. And then naruto could get even worse, before getting strong and kick orochimarus ass himself! yes!

    Please write more of this story! It can't end like that! I'm in here every day looking for updates!
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  • From onesickmind on June 17, 2005
    P.S. It kinda surprised me when I read all the reviews saying how they hoped Naruto would get better. Am I the only one who's hoping that Orochimaru, Kaubto, and Itachi will get ahold of him again and torture him even more? And possibly torture Sasuke in front of him too? Is anyone else with me on this?
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  • From onesickmind on June 17, 2005
    *was going to go on a very sick on disturbing ramble on how much I loved this, but instead grab your shoulders and shake you violently*

    THE NOTEBOOK HAS TO BE SOMEWHERE!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh please please please please find it within yoruself to recall what you had written. Or take the entire day, as long as it takes, to find your notebook. It has to be SOMEWHERE. I've lost precious writing like that too, but I am the messiest person in the world and surely a dedicated amount of time to picking up and reorganizing papers will not only be rewarding in the long run but will also turn up your notebook WHICH HAS 200 PAGES OF STORY IN IT IT IS LIKE YOUR VERY OWN CHILD You fucking sick freak that story was right up my alley but I KNOW YOUR PLAN!!!!! You are TORUTURING US!!!! There is no notebook with 200 pages of story, or there is and you know where it is and you are withholding that information just to torture all us sick freaks who get so much enjoyment about reading torture. I love you and hate you so much!!!!!!!

    ::back to begging mode:: *Incoherent scream*

    ::back to trying to do something helpful mode:: Look, I don't write super well, but I write violence and torture and angst and pain and whatnot, so if you need someone to help fill in places--- lemme know!!! I will do all I can to help.

    *Slips back into Really-Great-Fic-That-Might-Not-Grow-Or-Have-A-Conclusion-Induced hysteria*
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  • From ANON - Souls of the Forgotten on June 11, 2005
    Well I must admit that this is my first story that i've reviewed here in a long time. I feel sorry that you lost a whole notebook worth of the writing, especially since I know how that feels. Hopefully you can rewrite everything that you wrote in the previous notebook. Oh well, a very dark story that you have here, and I happen to like dark stories such as yours.
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  • From ANON - Rokuema on June 10, 2005
    I think that this is a really good story to follow along with, I would like to continue reading it to see what will become of Naruto, will he be able to fight again due to his blindness? Or is there some kind of surgery that can get it back, will he ever recover from the encounter? I cant wait to read the next chapter to find out what'll happen. So you just keep telling the story and I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 30, 2005
    that was a really well writen chapter keep up the good and update soon like really soon
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 30, 2005
    Having fun defileing fandom.Scanned quickly,blowing Neji and Nara up through walls was good for a giggle however I still believe you are a dangerously deranged fat guy why not aim your bitter humour(or b.um.)at a more worthy targrt like your president,that I would like to read,200 pages more of this?, I know you jest I just don't know why.You honestly sound like a serial killer in that you description of others pain has a lusting turned on edge to it.ICK.If you are aiming for Poppy Z Brite territory,YOU MISSED.This is too easy to mock you revolting bully,go pick on someone your own size,McDonalds for instance.Sorry for this unsavory unwitty rant but quid pro quo...
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 30, 2005
    OMG poor Naruto, this is so sick but so good. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kiran on May 26, 2005
    Please continue writing!! And please make it...you know...a bit cute? I mean, he has already suffered, does't he deserve a bit of fluff???
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  • From ANON - kirikiri_mai on May 10, 2005
    Wow, I must say, I really like this fic. I read all six chapters in one go. I actually purposefully missed school because I wanted to read it all, I just couldn't stop.
    The technique is also very good. I have grown up with an author-mum, and when I showed her this fic ( I have never told her I read stuff like this before, but I just couldn't help it) she initially freaked and said she couldn't understand how I could read stuff like that, but when she got over the shock she said that despite the cruelty, it was very well written. And I really hope you'll update soon!
    I'm not sure if even Kyuubi could generate new arms and fingers and stuff, but maybe he could get some cool metal prosthetics so he's kinda like terminator!!!! Yeah!!! well... maybe not... But I do hope Kakashi and Jiraiya are going to kick Orochimarus scaly ass!!!

    and I give you a whole bag of insentive as well! hope it helps!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on May 08, 2005
    cute chapter! please update soon!

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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 08, 2005
    very good chapter and a very very good *omfg* GREAT fic now update dammit
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  • From NarakusKoi on May 08, 2005
    Nice chapter! I have this story saved to my favorites. I hope you update soon. Please! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2005
    As sad as this story is, it's still interesting. Please continue. ^^
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