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Reviews for Bygones and Bylines

By : twistedsheets
  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on May 19, 2005
    OMG!! an update and i was just thinking about this the other day, too! anyway, i loved how you opened the chapter by diving right into the smut. it was a great way of getting the reader's immeadiate attention. *shakes head at the mental images* strawberries, huh? can i have a taste? *gives the authoress a hopeful look then notices sasuke glaring daggers at her from the corner* err.... or maybe, not..... damn possesive bastard *snickers* as i was saying, before my mind was dragged from the gutter, (and yes, i meant to say 'from') ^__^, i loved how the chapter started and now we have a bit more plot. and more plot means more smut, right? *looks around* right?! oh! and that comment about orochimaru looking like michael jackson was hilarious. oh and poor neji, don't feel bad. naruto can't help the fact that he's so molestable! *sigh* i just wanna snuggle him. neji, i mean. and i've just realized that i'm rambling.... so i'mma go now. umm, wonderful work so far! there was a typo or 2 but it was nothing that would take away any attention from the fic. i can't wait for the next update. so until then, viva la yaoi! (please excuse my randomness, i had 3 too many cups of tea with extra sugar this morning) ja! ^__^
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on May 19, 2005
    I love this story! This last chapter was great. And thank you for that link. I listened to some of the voice clips. I was really freaked out though by Orochimaru's morning call. OMG, I wouldn't want to have him whispering in my ear in the morning.

    Anyway, I hope you update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - chem chick on May 19, 2005
    Wow! Great story so far, I really like it. Strawberries? Any chance you're a Buffy fan? Hmm...anyways, loved the new chapter and can't wait for more. Sounds like the group's going to be back in business? Sounds exciting! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 19, 2005
    lol. OK, so Sasuke's intentions weren't that evil. I thought he was gonna rape him or something.

    The plot seems to be developing, and this group the gang was involved in has definately taken my interest. I wonder what Oro is up to?

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    btw, I also read One piece and Hunter x Hunter.
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  • From ANON - KuraResa on May 11, 2005
    I really like your fic. The plot is different then most of the ones I have seen. It's very interesting and well written. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^
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  • From ANON - aimee on May 08, 2005
    very cool idea for a sasunaru plot
    love it, good plot, still mystery leaving us all wanting more
    originality definate plus point

    what a place to stop... dont leave it too long... suspense can kill
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  • From ANON - ReY on May 04, 2005
    hi... U write WELL!!!
    i love it a lot!
    This kind of pairng really suit them well. I mean, Sasuke should be persistent and wicked and evilish. and naruto is not whore, and he clearly wouldnt be whoring for Sasuke. So, I like it when Sasuke have to fight for what he wants and Naruto didnt give in easily... good work pal! Please CONTINUE... I WANT TO READ!!!!!
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  • From ANON - izumi on April 25, 2005
    damn!! i need a shower now!
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  • From ANON - aeryn on April 12, 2005
    you so evil. you dare to stop there! >.< n with the way you evilly stopped there. i have a feeling there won't be a straight up hot lemon in the next. it'll be interrupted won't it?!!! >.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 11, 2005
    nah, we won't kill ya but i will threaten to tie you down and force you to read naru X saku stories all night if you don't update soon. i mean, how can you stop can you just stop at a crucial (not to mention highly arousing) moment, like that? ^__^ this story is extremely good. i love naruto's little personality and how sasuke couldn't wait to hands get his hands on him. i, also, like friendship naruto has with neji. but, what's this? do i sense a love triangle happening in the nearby future or am i just being dilusional? anyway, looking foward to your next update. keep up the good work.
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  • From kawaiikitsunethief on April 11, 2005
    (formally Kawaii_kitsune_Thief) OMG! That chapter was soooo squirm worthy! It was totally awesome! I love it! I love it! I love it! More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Vermillion Spiral on April 10, 2005
    I think this has a lot of potential. Keep it up. ^_^
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on April 10, 2005
    how can you expect me not to be upset over that cliff hanger?! XD omg omg! That was fsckin' amazing! I love you forever! *hugs* and you probably wont be able to update for a while too! thats just sinful! but... I suppose your forgiven! ^_~ You did continue the story after all! you did a really excellent job with this chapter! please keep up with the good work!
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  • From ANON - kirameki on April 10, 2005
    !!!m D< You're evil! Evil!!!!!!! o_O More, please, hurry with the next chapter. So cruel. *sniff*
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 10, 2005
    oh you are sooo incredibly evil for leaving us with that ending!!! i need more now!!! but seriously, great work so far. and ya know, naruto as a reporter actually does suit him. you wouldn't think so at first, but i really like how you took his personality into account when writing this story (unlike some people who make naruto out to be a bumbling idiot). and doesn't everybody love haku and zabuza? but i've got a question for you (not that it really matters all that much for the purpose of reading your story): did naruto and sasuke actually have a relationship? i know you've mentioned that they were lovers, but i was just curious if they were ever together or if they just slept together one time or something. but anywhoo...i can't wait for the next chapter (and hopefully a whole bunch of sasuke on naruto action)!!!
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