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Reviews for Bygones and Bylines

By : twistedsheets
  • From ANON - dakara on July 29, 2005
    WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I hope it some hot sex here 'cause I read a goddamed 63 chap story and NO sex in it T.T
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  • From ANON - venus on July 01, 2005
    dud you HAVE to keep writing. The BEST lime story plot I've seen!! OMG I really love this!! So kawaii yet funny~~

    O, and I like that added twin sister character of yours, nice hanger there!! ~.^

    Continue please!! =D
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 28, 2005
    Good good good.Interesting.Whats next boss?He does not look like Michal Jackson,get your eyes checked and be original,Oro is hot little girl!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2005
    Wowza. This is getting interesting :o Update soon, I'm dying to see what happens ^^;
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  • From ANON - mitsune on June 23, 2005
    yosh! an update! this ones great! is sasuke gonna kidanap naruto in this this fic? cause i have a feeling he would, please update soon cause i wanna see sasuke kun in action again*drool* ^_^.
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  • From ANON - sorviball on June 13, 2005
    i really like your fic. i think it's the whole AU thing, it works. i LOVED your idea of naruto's twin. it makes so much sense! and i feel like she would be a great character to write, and it wouldn't be fair if she wasn't a real person. anyway, i think the whole group dynamic is very interesting and i'm curious to see how they develop. shikamaru and ino are really cute. i'm excited to see how iruka plays into it all, and when gaara comes into the picture. i think you're writing style is fine. it's really up to you if you want more details/description but what you're doing now works. my only comment is that you should try not to make neji such an over protective prick--not that he is right now, but i see the development in the future. i see where people get that impression, but doing that kind of keeps his character from being...complete? well-rounded? i don't know what the right word is, but it makes him seem really one-sided. sorry, neji's one of my favorite characters so i just want the best for him! keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on June 10, 2005
    Omg!! you know Momo! she was a buddy of mine on narutofan. we used to love telling every1 in the comments section about the joys of yaoi! but anyway, lovely chapter. we got to see a some of sasuke and naruto's pasts but not enough to answer all our questions. so i'm eagerly looking foward to your next update. i can't wait to hear more about naruto's twin, what role the kyuubi is play and orochimaru's proposal. so until then, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - purpleprose on June 10, 2005
    loved your story, hope you update soon! keep on rocking!!! m/
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  • From ANON - azamaria-chan on June 09, 2005
    *___* nooooooo! what a cliffhanger! hehe. ooooh, i love that. turning naruto's sexy no jutsu into a real person. can't wait to see how she turns out.
    once again, great chapter. :]
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  • From ANON - Kai on June 08, 2005
    Ooooh, this is very interesting!
    Please keep writing, and THANK YOU for proofreading!
    So many good fics get messed up because of bad spelling and stuff!
    Love it!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - gallatica on June 08, 2005
    HEhe, loved this so far! ^__^
    And i adored the bathroom scene~
    *glomps*
    update!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 08, 2005
    Hmm...

    The plot thickens...

    Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - someone on June 07, 2005
    UPDAAAAATTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sukara on June 07, 2005
    *Gasps* Orochimaruo!!! That perv!!! D=< Naruto has a twin sister, eh? xD I wonder what part she has int eh story. oh, by the way, is this gonna be a death-fic? like..is Naruto or Sasuke gonna die?
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on June 07, 2005
    Is she the kyuubi? huh? I wonder?

    Don't do anything that evil to Naruto. He's too nice and stuff. If you do, I'll be very sad -_-

    Hopefully we'll see some action soon, and I can't wait until we find out more about what's going on.

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    P.S. I love KilluaGon slash. They're just a perfect match- the way I'd love Naruto and Sasuke's to be.
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