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Reviews for Bygones and Bylines

By : twistedsheets
  • From ANON - hypnotic on November 21, 2005
    *cries* please update. Wow I love the plot, it keeps you on the edge but don't stop ok. if i have to e-mail support note then damnit I will! yatta i love this story so update soon k!

    ps...ummm what role with gaara-kun play? cause...it's cool to see sasuke-teme jealous over gaara and naru-chan spins ^_^

    ~ ja.
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  • From ANON - looli on November 08, 2005
    where aare you ?
    where are you ?
    where are you ?

    i miss your story so much i think i'm gonna cry please update soon please
    looli
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  • From ANON - AmethystRei on November 02, 2005
    I love your story sooo much, very detailed and advanced writting always makes an awesome story. I really like the whole AU you have set up here ^^ yup, I do. I really wish you'd update the fic soon, but if you rush an artist the piece wont come out in all it's splendor...will it?
    Well, take care and ttyl
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  • From ANON - Hime on November 01, 2005
    I really, really, really love your story! It's like Naruto version of a modern everyday world. Please update soon. It's been so long waiting but I don't care as long as the next chapter's going to good as previous one.

    Oh. I love all your other fic too ^ ^.
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  • From ANON - dragondame57 on October 26, 2005
    omgsh... that was so friggen good! i love this fic.. i love the sasuke jealousy.. although all this business talk is making my head hurt ^^:; update soon! *could you by any chance email me when you update? thanks!*
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  • From ANON - dar on October 23, 2005
    PLease update soon!!! CLIFF HANGERS ARE BAD!!!!! but is it me or did sasuke actually show a little bit of jealousy and sorta let it slip in the last chapter hwere he pulls naruto into the limo *which i may add was one of my favorite scenes in the chapter!!*.......but yea PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - _nai_ on September 14, 2005
    OH MAN!!!!

    i just find out that this fic was inspired by VIEWFINDER (i'm sorry u'm so slow....)...
    dude, i love it so much!!!!!
    i love your fic even more now....

    will you present a character like fei long in this fic????

    keep up the good work!!! love you!!!!
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  • From ANON - _nai_ on September 14, 2005
    gee... been waiting a long time for your update!
    it's a nice one!
    but, i dont really get the chapter before (stupid me)....

    I like the way you built sasuke's character, it's dark and possesive and tricky, they're good for naruto.

    hope you wont make naruto surender to sasuke so easily, i know he's still in love but i like it when he puts up a lot of fight to 'fight' sasuke.
    thanks!!!!!
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  • From DogandPoo on August 19, 2005
    Oooo... I love your story ^^ Can I know what's the pairings?? I get a little twitchy when authors seperate Sasuke and Naruto, even if it's just for a little while. But don't mind me, write your story the way you want, I just want to be informed of the pairings even the teeny tiny ones ^^
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 18, 2005
    I like your story...alot. =) I can't wait to read the next chappie. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sukara on August 17, 2005
    Yay!! Lemon next chapter!!! Write now! Write now! x3 You made me feel inspired!!! x3 -Huggles-
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  • From ANON - dakara on August 17, 2005
    OMfG! This wil be sooooo fun to read XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD what a bitch sasuke are muaahahahahahah and I hope the lemon is about Sasuke and Naruto grrr if not muuu then I'm going to cryyyy
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  • From ANON - Nora Shu[Hitomi] on August 16, 2005
    (Ch. 5)
    Before I forget; are all those pairings listed really going to take part? It looks a bit like joking, or maybe some are only one-sided. I'd like that to be cleared up for me, if you could. :) Also, "Mafia/Yakuza/Gangster" XDDDD I hope you know that's all basically the same thing. XD

    I liked this chapter.
    For the NejiNaruto, weird grandpa Kyuubi, Tsunade and [oh god yes!] Sasuke procaliming again what's HIS! Yeah!!!


    But, uh, I'd suggest getting this chapter beta-ed; it was full of spelling mistakes and typos of many sorts. Not that it was really bad or anything, just something you should consider doing at some point. :)


    Until the next,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - yuki-chan on August 16, 2005
    i only have one thing to say... PLEASE UPDATE FASTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Choi-sama on August 16, 2005
    Not that anyone here is a bitch. ^^;;

    Anyway, awesome job, this was incredibly fun to read. However, somehow, Kyuubi and Company can be, uh, overbearing at times. -__-? I don't know. It's my fault, really. (Why the hell did I read the AN?! I never read the AN!!!) I guess it starts with Narumi, though. The manipulative/obnoxious bitch thing is good, but that's not where the bad-taste factor lies. (Actually, being a bitch can pretty damn attractive.) She's just way too OC-ish. Like, if she were to appear in the cannon, I would go, "That must be a rabid, Japanese fan request. Or an extra high-hitted RP character." in my head. And Kyuubi? Uh, nothing's wrong with him, but when you put him and Narumi together... You get OOC OCs. -__-;; (I think I'm not making sense, but if you read it a few times, you'll get it.) Don't worry though, with the Naruto fandom, it's usually Naruto and Sasuke who come out like OCs, not the little explored Kyuubi and Sexy no Jutsu-ed Naruto. Really, it's a good, good fic, and I am seriously enjoying the way you depict everybody. So, don't feel bad. Your writing is awesome! ^__^b (Damn, I am starting to feel that if I read whatever I just wrote, I will have to fix it... O__O! Not happening. ^^)

    So yeah, good job! And keep the updates coming! And, if you want, make Narumi less... overbearing. -__-;;
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