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By : Kinumi
  • From ANON - Kurisuchan on December 23, 2003
    OHMYGOD! You're the best! The best Naruto fic I've ever read, and quite possibly the best among all fics I've ever read! No joke! That was really cute though. And you write really good! I could actually hear the characters saying those lines! Great job! ^^

    You MUST write more Hinata+Naruto stuff! XD

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  • From ANON - snk_tyrant on December 20, 2003
    Hmm... superb! Heh, it's good to see Hinata not beinlittlittle good girl anymore. Heh, I especially loved it in Chap. 1 when Naruto called her a Sex Kitten... I think I got that right. Dude, this is turning out great, please don't drop this project. I'm loving it from start to finish. And I'd love to see more.

    By the way, nice touch with the Wind and Sand contries at war. ^^
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  • From ANON - kenji! on December 20, 2003
    ARE SHIKAMARU AND KIBA GAY!!!!! i love ur story and stuff but how can they be gay!! shikamaru is my fav guy
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  • From ANON - Alanna on December 19, 2003
    Thank you for writting such a great Naruto/Hinata fic!!! I have been searching for a good one and I finally found one. It was really good. ^_^ Naruto/Hinata forever!!!
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  • From ANON - jmr on December 18, 2003
    come on man!!! the suspense..lol anyways pretty good when will chapt. 5 be up lol
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  • From ANON - trutenor on December 15, 2003
    Love this story! Everyone stays in character and the plotline is believable! My favorite Naruto story here!
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  • From ANON - ashez on December 14, 2003
    Man, it's so nice to see a het Naruto lemon. And it's actually a plausible relationship too. There's waaay too many Naruto/sasuke stuff out there. Since you're giving the lemon a plot (I love lemons with plots) are you going to go into any "protection" issues? Ninja chakra birth control? lol
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  • From ANON - wojohoski on December 13, 2003
    Well, where to begin? I'll admit this is the first fanfic of this nature that I've read, so I can't offer anything in the way of other comparisions. I enjoyed it very much. The beginning seemed a little....awkward/forced maybe? Although I think that this has less to do with writing skills and more to do with the innate problems in taking a non-sexual character like Naruto and suddenly putting him in such a situation. By, non-sexual, I only mehat hat in the anime and manga we see a goofy but determined fighter and not much growth or explaination in romantic areas. Because of this, anyone (even the creator himself) will have to deal with awkwardness of putting Naruto in very unfamilar territory. Seeing what you had to work with, and the fact that easing into a Naruto/Hinata sexual relationship would probably take a pages and pages of setting up, I think you did an excellent job. The description was good and very believable. My favorite line had to be:

    "God Hinata, you're beautiful," he murmured.

    And she was.

    That was very heartwarming. Nice touch! I think that a separate story dealing with Naruto slowly realizing that Hinata loved him and that he actually loved her as well would be nice, although I'm sure this might not be the right forum for it, as it wouldn't deal with anything erotic (I'm guessing that's the main purpose of most of the stories here). Also, it might not be as popular, except to old softies like myself. I think another story expanding what happens after Naruto and Hinata hook up would also be very interesting. I'm glad that you wrote about Naruto and Hinata, seeing as how they are the two people I want to get together the most. Once again, I think you did a fantastic job. I look forward to any future expansions you make on the subject. (OH! I just noticed you've written several other chapters. My mistake. I'll take a look at them ASAP) Thanks.

    Sincerely,
    Wojohoski
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  • From ANON - Crazymonkey on December 12, 2003
    not bad, i'm actually quite enjoying it. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2003
    Haha...a pretty good fic, if you managed to get me to read the non-porn parts. And thank you for a straight Naruto coupling (That's a first).
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  • From ANON - breezbox on December 11, 2003
    Getting more and more interesting! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Abby on December 10, 2003
    Soooo cute! I'ma total sucker for HinaNaru and you've done it very well, although I do think you rushed into the bedroom scene, but I don't care!

    Raikage is the official term for the cloud shinobi leader. Rai=lightening as in Raikiri=Kakashi's lightening edge technique.
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  • From ANON - Suzuko on December 08, 2003
    I like this story and I hope nothing bad happens to Hinata or Naruto he is such a poorly treated character since he is so scorned by most of the adult it is nice to see that at least one person truely loves him. please update more soon
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  • From ANON - breezbox on December 07, 2003
    Another fantastic chapter! Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - crude on December 07, 2003
    great stuff kinumi has talent !
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