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Reviews for Kotoamatsukami Harem

By : Fatsho
  • From ANON - TheSinful on July 28, 2014
    I wonder if you're going to add say Hinata using her infatuation with Naruko. Or maybe the milfs like Tsume (dominate the bitch), Yoshino Nara, Hinata's and Ino's mothers, and Mebuki.
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  • From SeliasKatasuma on July 28, 2014
    This story is amazing. I'm actually working on something similar, though it starts earlier in the series, and uses a different method for Sasuke to gather his harem, so it's nice to have a story that can help my inspiration. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Sasuke 123 on July 27, 2014
    hey man added fuu and Yugito
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2014
    how did he gain the rinnegan in a few days? It took Madara decades for his body to incorporate Hashirama's DNA into every cell. With a weaker Senju (along with a weaker bloodline) how did it not only happen faster but faster by a few dozen orders of magnitudes? For a biological equivalent, it would be a like a human woman giving birth to 2000 babies in a month.
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  • From glk on July 26, 2014
    Pretty good chapter. You've been improving, this chapter didn't have as many grammatical mistakes as before and the chapter flowed better in general. I'm assuming that Konan will scout Kurotsuchi, which should be a nice addition to the harem.
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  • From ANON - Dead Bastard on July 23, 2014
    Really? I can understand Sasuke is not a very popular character. Hell I hate him myself and for the record I can't stand Naruto. But this story is decent at the most, I find it hard to believe that over 700 rated this low. Please if your going to rate a story, rate it for the content, author's writing skills, etc. NOT BECAUSE IT A CHARACTER YOU HATE. Hell, I hate Naruto but you don't see me putting hundreds of low rating on those do you? So rate a story on it's merits that what a TRUE reader does.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2014
    I think there's something weird going on, everytime I come to this site, it seems like this has received 50 new ratings and judging by the way the rating changes, I assume they're all 1 ratings. I think someone's spamming ratings to get this a lower rating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2014
    I'm liking this, but could you have it so the girls don't practically disappear after their chapter? It's weird how Konan, for example, hasn't done anything since she joined the harem. I'd like to see more interactions between the harem members, too.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2014
    hey put ice queens means Kurenai, anko and yuugao in Sasuke harem
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  • From ANON - Previously "Sasuke Supporter" on July 14, 2014
    Hey there. I'm glad you read my last review. As for your threesome writing, I wouldn't say it's "bad" perse. The "problem" is merely its length. When writing threesomes, some author's find it harder to focus on the littler details that they might add when it's only a "twosome". In the previous chapter, you focused a lot on Sasuke's thoughts in Kyuubi's section (how Kyuubi's a bijuu, or how Kushina was his future concubine), rather than on the sex itself. In Kushina's section, you did a better job with the focus on sex, which is why it's "longer" than Kyuubi's section. It sometimes can be hard to, "divide" the time between different partners in a threesome, but that's more experience than anything. As it stands, you did a good job transitioning between Kushina and Kyuubi. Next time, you could try finding a balance between Sasuke's thoughts and the sex itself, instead of feeling obligated to include all members at all times. If you find this hard, you can did what you did last chapter, and have a girl knocked out, or something to keep her "out of the action". Sorry if this sounds a little too criticizing. Of course, you can read other lemons for reference, which can help too. Good Luck. (P.S., will you ever include Kyuubi again?)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2014
    Great next we need anko or ino, or perhaps one of the inuzuka like Hana of tsume
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2014
    how about one wiht kurenai still pregrant or tsume if you could add scenes with Lactation, my brother is interested in tose
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  • From ANON - naruto df on July 13, 2014
    Hey can you put this stories on ficwad.
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  • From ANON - Naruto 123 on July 13, 2014
    Bring Tsume and Yoshino as Milf example added in Sasuke hare,
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  • From ANON - Naruto 123 on July 13, 2014
    Bring Tsume and Yoshino as Milf example added in Sasuke hare,
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