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Reviews for The Secret Technique

By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on April 29, 2014
    What happens to the babies that the Inuzuka have once they are born? He can command them to care for them but you can't make someone love them. Babies need love. If all their needs are met but that you often have failure to thrive and they can die. What about their dogs, Kuromaru can talk and if the kids are born blond or red-haired, he's gonna know. And if Tsunade gets involved as the Hokage, he's going to have to be punished.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on April 28, 2014
    Excellent, but I wonder why he didn't take her in every hole for further humiliation ... anyway I hope he does managed to knock the mutt up and her daughter in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shin on April 27, 2014
    Bwahaha that was wonderful I was waiting to see how he would get even with her and Hana for what they did to him. Though now I have to wonder where his little watcher Hinata is and how turned on she got from watching that and thinking about being the same way. I really can't wait for a Hinata chapter..that would just burn Kiba to ashes smelling Naruto on his sister, mother, and crush and knowing there's nothing he can do about it..that would be an awesome chapter to read think you can make it happen?
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  • From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on April 27, 2014
    Naruto forgot to give her orders to stop her from terminating any possible pregnancy. What he did as a trial run of sorts was very good. Can't wait to see what else he does to her. I think he should tell her the more she hates what he does to her, the more she says she loves it. Being unable to control anything but her mind would the ultimate torture for her.
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  • From 123rodx on April 27, 2014
    Well she learn the hard way that payback is a bitch. that was awesome and wow
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  • From ANON - Storylover213 on April 27, 2014
    I was wondering if you were ever gonna have Mebuki and Naruto do a gangbang together involving Naruto's Shadow Clones
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  • From ANON - CLZ on April 25, 2014
    I think you should watch 'Hentai Kamen' on youtube or read it on a manga site to see that putting panties over ones face can lead to...interesting results.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on April 25, 2014
    I hope Mebuki is pregnant with Naruto's child ... and I hope she's only the 1st of a wave of new Uzumaki's to come :)
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  • From ANON - Gui on April 25, 2014
    Is it me, or did Naruto figure out how to certainly impregnate a woman?
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  • From ANON - hugplx on April 25, 2014
    'Show Kizashi how to get a woman pregnant'? lol...


    I think he knows...
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  • From ANON - wincest on April 24, 2014
    it seems to me like somebody is trying to direct you how to write

    it seems they think that it is an ultimate justification to correct the way you write

    just be on your guard lolz
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2014
    For fuck sake, if people getting cheated on bothers you so much, don't read the fucking story. It clearly says there will be cheating in the summary.
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  • From ANON - soccer-fan1 on April 24, 2014
    That person who said that they would like Jiraiya to fuck Mebuki as a lesson to Naruto, I dont think that they chose Jiraiya specifically, anyone would be fine for that role, the idea was to make Naruto feel what It actually feels like to be on the other side. I sort of agree with that because even though the justification that Naruto gives is a valid one, its an entirely one sided decision and quite unfair to Shikaku who doesnt even know what is going through his wife's head, is it shikaku's fault for not realising it? yes it is, but isnt it Yoshino's job to point that out since a woman like would much rather keep her relation with her husband an honest. It becomes even more unfair because even if Shikaku tries harder from now on and brings some satisfaction to their sexual life, it wont be the level of naruto and Yoshino will always crave that and keep going back to Naruto which may leave shikaku bitter about it and somewhere down the line may become the cause for their marriage to fall apart. Yoshino made quite a rash decision( or a drunk one) if you look at it from a realistic point of view and it would be quite foolish of her to expect her husband to be fine with it, shikaku maybe lazy but this is a matter of their marriage and losing it before doing anything about it would be a stupid move from someone as smart as him. If Shikaku after this still doesnt do anything about it only then in my opinion would yoshino be justified with her decision other wise its a selfish one. In all honesty you should not have brought that kind of reasoning into the story since before this the cheating was still on a lighter tone because none of the other husbands were actually aware of the affair due to which readers(such as myself) didnt actually put any stock into the cheating justification. Its like saying since its anal sex, its not cheating. In a realistic world no one would think twice about yoshino's reasoning but call her a slut instead, because her actions were infact slutty, she put her need of sex above her relation with Shikaku. I feel like ive been going in circles with this review so I hope you got what Im actually trying to say, and sorry if i came off as ranting too much, looking forward to you next chapter. See ya!!
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  • From ANON - Frost on April 24, 2014
    Enjoyed the chapter, though the way you hint it, Shikaku isn't going to try and improve his *attempts* with his wife in an effort to win her back? ouch. Other thing being you seem to set a lot of the guys (if not all) as rather spineless outside of Naruto and maybe Hiruzen and Jiraya. Are we ever going to see anyone else develop a back bone? Just wondering, not critiquing your choice of development.
    Not sure if you do requests, but would you mind throwing in the Jinchuriki Fu during the 3 year trip? Reasons for this request:1. Just a fan of fu in fan-fiction.(thought I'd be honest) 2. Part of me always saw this trip as Jiraya showing Naruto the rest of the world, and just widening Naruto's perspective, and the only other jinchiriki in an allied nation he could have run into and compared notes on life in general is Gaara in Sand, and it is covered that Fu was origanally from waterfall, a Konaha ally village. And other then Nii Yugito, Fu is the only other Female Jinchiriki. Just thinking that the two of them (Fu and Naruto) could have a lot in common. Just some thoughts, that's all.
    Oh one more thing? you could always go for the origin of the rasegan for one of naruto's sex techniques. Check this fanfiction, https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380504/1/Icha-Icha-Paradise-Spiraling-Love for what i mean. If you decide to use it, pplease give credit where its due. If not, i hope you enjoy it at least. Once agian, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on April 24, 2014
    Another awesome chapter. Still, wish it had been a pregnancy that tipped Shikaku off ... anyway loved it and there more more meeting between them. Don't include Shikaku though ... it's one thing if a husband agrees and allows his wife to do her own thing for whatever reason, but to be apart of it is ... sick and more to the point if I was the other man I'd rather kick his butt than let him watch even if he was doing if from the closet.
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