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Reviews for The Secret Technique

By : MathiasBlue
  • From 123rodx on March 16, 2014
    nice one, can't wait for the next chapter, would love to see Sakura join them in later chapter
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  • From ANON - ... on March 15, 2014
    Keep with it. it's interesting.
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  • From ANON - X on March 15, 2014
    It's got quite a few, um, grammatically incorrect words. You used "like" instead of "lick" for instance. Other than that, it's well written. I'd love it if you continued it.

    Anyway, I recommend that you read word-by-word each paragraph after you've written it. No scanning or skipping words when you review your work. That should cut down on those little mistakes.

    Great job.
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  • From Pete91888 on March 15, 2014
    This is great. Finally a decent het lemon for a change. I hope you continue this, you could definatly turn this into a good story. Like if Mebuki where to start sharing Naruto with other women and or have Naruto showing his new techniques to the young girls he meets. Anal sex is always great along with other kinks. Just no blood, piss or scat please.
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