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Reviews for The Secret Technique

By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2014
    I would like to reread about A.with sakura
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  • From ANON - John on March 23, 2014
    I love the idea of the Yellow Flash, it seems like Jiriaya could have corrupted Naruto durring the trip, making it more believable. Although, the other story does sound good to!
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  • From ANON - lielz on March 22, 2014
    I prefer option A!!

    good story. so isthis it? complete?
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  • From ANON - x on March 22, 2014
    good so far for the other fics option b
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  • From ANON - Xeno on March 22, 2014
    Ooooh the sleeping idea seems better if you're going for something different, yet desirable.
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  • From Ragingspeed on March 22, 2014
    Great chapter loved the first fuck can you write dirty demon dreams you are one of my favourite authors easily second best on this site competing for the top spot.
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on March 22, 2014
    Again another great chapter. Thanks for the update. As for another story I like the idea of Dirty Demon Dreams over the other but perfer you stick with this story please, but it's your choice.
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  • From Pete91888 on March 22, 2014
    Excellent chapter one again. Just curious though will Mebuki ever accept Naruto as a human/fall in love with him? Or will he always just be her toy?
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  • From keyblade03 on March 22, 2014
    Great fanfic you have here. Very well written and detailed. Any chance of Sakura joining in on the action between Mebuki and Naruto in the future? Also do have any other fanfics planed for the future? Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From 123rodx on March 22, 2014
    Really nice chapter, love the idea to help him with the clone technique:P and how it build up little by little to the sex scene. It's really well done again


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  • From snake1980 on March 21, 2014
    man great job on the new chapter. love the way mebuki cleared naruto mind I cant wait to see were they will do that again? was wondering when tsume is going to appear again? maybe she catch naruto and mebuki in the act and finds out that's her secret of looking young again and has naruto do that to her? keep up the great work and hope that u might post this on fanfiction so at least ill get a alert when u post a new chapter. still great job and keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on March 21, 2014
    Ever chapter I expect something different than what you actually did. Not that it is a bad thing about the story I really enjoy your master piece. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - lunar on March 20, 2014
    i like to see more anko. lol
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  • From ANON - Dafox on March 20, 2014
    Lol i just thought how funny it would be if Naruto lost his virginity before he graduated and when Mebuki finds out she would either be depressed, confused or angry. I like your story so far. At least its continuous without long hiatus.
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  • From ANON - ghwaaron on March 20, 2014
    Have you.ever thought to put this on fan fiction.net this website is a pain to navigate through. Oh by the way great story mos people don't know how to write a proper lemon.
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