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Reviews for Hypnosis

By : Saitochan
  • From ANON - MrSubWright on August 29, 2016

    Story was hot as hell! It's August now and I certianly hope there are more chapters coming, I love how hypnosis is used to subtly to change the character's behaviors, I'd want to see how Tsunade was caught and of course more of the others. Hope you're still writing this and would love an update soon


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  • From ANON - Red on August 13, 2016

    Totally in love

     

    Any guesses on the next pairings? 

     

    I vote Shikamaru and Kurotsuchi <3


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  • From ANON - on July 09, 2016

    I definitely enjoyed this. New crack pairing for Shikamaru lol.


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  • From ANON - Fapman on February 15, 2016
    Fantastic to finally see an update. Hope this means that you will continue to update
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  • From ANON - Mikey Boy on February 14, 2016
    I hope he knocks her up!
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  • From ANON - picajump on July 11, 2014
    Really quite a fun fic, I do really like Shikamaru and hypnosis-with-limits is a perfect power for him!
    I hope this continues, especially if he has to get sneaky and subtle; that is when he is at his coolest.
    ... Well ignoring the fact that he can control shadows, which is cool all of the time.

    The guy who knows hypnosis creeps me out somewhat though, hope he sits in the background as a plot device...
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  • From edwardmorte on July 21, 2010
    Unexpectedly, I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Shade on December 19, 2008
    Please update soon, your story is very interesting and enjoyable. I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - BlueRyuu on October 18, 2008
    horrible author! XD having no lemons! lol, what happened to the less plot?? not that im complaining, this is really entertaining XD
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  • From on October 10, 2008
    I'll admit its getting interesting i'll check up on this from time to time to see if you have updated. You are a good writer although the first chapter was a little boring and i almost stopped reading but it got good quickly, and im interested now. Keep up the good work and I wish you luck in making this good. ^^
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  • From TheMetalCowboy on October 06, 2008
    You wrote that Sakura was going to be one of the girls, but I don't see Shikamaru doing that because of Naruto. Naruto is his closest friend after Chouji, and with Naruto's love for Sakura, Shikamaru wouldn't betray his friendships for some ass. I would suggest you replace Sakura with Yugao Uzuki, the ANBU who was in love with Hayate Gekko. He could test the hypnosis on an ANBU and she gets to let go of her stiffness. It's a win-win.
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  • From hsosborne on October 03, 2008
    I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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  • From on June 02, 2008
    UPDATE P{LEASE
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  • From Schrodinger on June 02, 2008
    Hmmmmm, I like where this is going. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. One question though, if hypnosis isn't considered a technique (which is what "jutsu" means in japanese too) why does it require chakra control.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2008
    Alrighty! It's about time we saw this one alive and kicking again! I've been waiting ever since I first saw this one for the fifth chapter to come out. I'm sure it'll be good. Keep on trucking!
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