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Reviews for Hypnosis

By : Saitochan
  • From Archfiend on June 01, 2008
    So.., as Shika/Anko pairing, now that`s something you don`t get everyday. On the other hand Shikamare could now plow through Konoha`s females (aand a dertain Suna nin) and effortlessy ask them how they feel about himm, hehe This story so far shows great promise, as the idea of the story is a completly new quirk, so keep it up and please update as soon as possible, especially with those cliffhangers of yours
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  • From SandmansAngel on May 15, 2008
    I love how the story is going so far, and I can't wait for more to come. I think things are getting really intresting in the story as well, so keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2007
    So far this is a rather promising tale. A downpoint I would make is perhaps lingering too long on things that don't matter too greatly to the plot...hah, though I gues most people here aren't reading this for the plot, neh?

    At any rate, don't grow too bored of the story yet, at least do the other chapter. I look forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2007
    Did Tsunade (&maybe Shizune) somehow get brainwashed/MCed?
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  • From ANON - D on September 21, 2007
    Well looks interesting so far. For Shikamaru, I say give him Temari, Ino, or Sakura as his girl.

    Now I'm going to take a guess and say Genkaku knows how to hypnotize people, and that Shikamaru may learn it.
    Some suggested targets for Shikamaru to practice with first would be both Naruto and Hinata (for Naruto it's
    being over Sakura and taking his blinders off on others feelings, and Hinata is the confidence bit and her
    nervous habits). The reason I suggested them and those particular suggestions, is because I like NaruHina as a
    pairing (sorry I can't see Hinata with anyone else willingly, and she is the best one for Naruto once he opens
    his eyes, since he would listen to her).

    Anyways keep up the good work.
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  • From PlaidFlannelShirt on August 31, 2007
    Nice work so far. Reading about Shikamaru having problems with a 'tent' in his pants is pretty funny. I wouldn't mind seeing this turn into an Anko/Shika fic, as she did proposition him for sex sometime, and that would be a pairing I haven't seen before. Or maybe Tsunade/Shika....that'd be nice too. Wherever it goes, I hope to see an update soon. :)
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  • From undercoverfreak on August 19, 2007
    oooh, make this a sakura/shikamaru story, that would be awesome. there are never enough fics of them, the two brains in the village working together, it would be awesome.
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