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Reviews for The Butterfly

By : tealeaf
  • From ANON - archermartyr on April 26, 2004
    come on, pair Sakura and Kakashi, man, that'd be best and you KNOW IT ! Imply a previous sexual relationship between them and FREAK OUT SASUKE, heheh he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - wicked_innuendo on April 26, 2004
    Very nice chapter! It feels like Christmas every morning when I see updates. I'm glad you included the missing scenes ^^ The love square is very interesting too. I find myself leaning towards either a Gaara or Kakashi, Sasuke's been such an ass in the manga..let him squirm. I'm loving the updates and the soap-opera feel to the story, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Cuito on April 26, 2004
    Its getting really, ry goy good!!! I can't stop reading this story!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on April 26, 2004
    Damn! with a chapter like that, I can go to bed happy! hehe I loved it! poor Sasuke got a bloody nose, but I loved the play between him and Sakura. And I think she helped his ego get over getting his face knocked on, lmao!!!! I can't wait to see more sweet scenes like this! And we can't forget my fav Bishi, seems you have some stuff in mind for him, can't wait to find out!

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  • From ANON - ivy on April 26, 2004
    can there please be a story alert? how are u supposed to know your favorite story has been updated!?
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  • From ANON - Silver Dragonfly on April 26, 2004
    LOL! I loved this chapter. Normally getting a pair of characters drunk, these two in particular, just to get them 'togetherouldouldn't work but with the hell they've gone thorugh and are going trhough it works wonderfully. Especially since it didn't really go past the kissing. ^.^ I loved how Sakura ordered him back to bed with her as well *GRIN* Keep up the fantastic work with this fic. I enjoy reading it very much.
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  • From ANON - kayoko on April 25, 2004
    *laughs at chp12*

    light-hearted comedy is great ^___^ i still can't believe he fell onto the floor...heh...
    oh yeah..i thought you weren't supposed to drink when you have wounds and stuff? but that's probably just old wives' tales..heh...
    can't wait for next chapter( kay
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  • From WickedInnuendo on April 25, 2004
    Another great chapter! This reads like a soap opera, I'm enjoying the the possibility of a love triangle (or square XP) I saw in your A/N there's mention of a deleted scene in your LJ, but I didn't see a link to your journal. Can you share the link, or friend me ::big grin:: http://www.livejournal.com/users/wicked_innuendo/
    thanks!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on April 25, 2004
    I really lyk ur story! It expresses things the way the reader wants too, like a flowing melody! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - kayoko on April 24, 2004
    yay for chapter 10!

    hm...i dunno..about the part after sakura wakes up from the "coma"...she's quite talkative...like..i thought she didn't want to open her voice to anyone anymore...i was expecting somethign darker...is sakura healing psychologically..cause of the gypies....since sakura liked them in the beginning?..but then agian...happy sakura is good...^_^

    i think the part where sakura talks to kakashi is very well done..kakashi is so funny..^_^..i really like taht part..i can't wait to find out..how kakashi got into a coma...is sakura's skin really poisonous? or is that just psychological...>_
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  • From WickedInnuendo on April 24, 2004
    You've got an incredible storyline going on, I look forward to future updates.
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  • From ANON - CloudKoneko on April 24, 2004
    oh god yes! this is the type of fic that i search for every day and mostly never find. this, this is "Bloodlines" b SOC Puppet quality! pleaseplease write more some time soon. i started reading this around 2, and suddenly, its like 5! i was entranced! [oh, that sounded strange..] anyway please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on April 23, 2004
    Hey, Sasuke is hot on her trail, and can't wait to see what happens when he finds her. I am glad he found out about Kakashi, and I hope that Sakura pulls that knife outta her arm some time soon, hehe. damn, everytime she does something like that I just cringe. Huggles,
    Fly
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  • From ANON - onflonflyelj on April 22, 2004
    As always, I loved this chapter, and can't wait to read more. I went and checked out that site for non-yaoi Naruto fics, thank you for sharing that!
    huggles,
    Fly
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  • From ANON - kayoko on April 22, 2004
    wow...
    at first..i read the summary..didn't expect much...but..wow...^_^;;;
    *is speechless*

    well, i think the fic is really well written..plotwise and stylewise...but...i think the summary could be better...maybe put something from chp1 and 2..where you describe the butterflies..and how they're like sakura..but don't mention you're describing sakura..i think it would be more attractive..as for the spoilers..imho, i think it would be sufficent to put it in the warning part of the first chapter...

    but anyways, that's the only thing i think could be improved...*grins*....hehehehhe...*starts fangirling*...i really like this idea of sakura and the butterflies..it reminds me of a fic called "desired and undesired"...(i think that's the title, great fic),thatthat fic...orochimaru calls sakura "butterfly"..but just as a nickname...hehehe..here's it literal!~ XD...

    i think its' really interesting how you give the butterflies life...how they get jealous of other people..how they protect sakura...but then..they also pose a threat to eone one around h.>__< so..what are they gonna do in the end? i mean...>_
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