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Reviews for The Butterfly

By : tealeaf
  • From ANON - Macross on April 04, 2005
    GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! i"m sorry i didn't review all the chapters but i read and enjoyed everyone

    Take care and keep writing
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  • From ANON - Macross on April 01, 2005
    KICK ASS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ICAN"T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    YAY FOR THE AWESOME STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    TAKE CARE AND KEEP WRITING ^_^
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  • From ANON - Elly on November 22, 2004
    I absolutely adored this fanfic! You write Sakura as I write her, I found it amazing how similar we are...which is probably why I loved your fanfic so much ;) I sat down and read it all in one night...let me tell you that took a while, lol.

    I love the ending, and I'm even a KakaSaku fan! Of course I wouldn't have minded her to end up with the older guy either ;)

    good job ^^
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  • From ANON - Lc on November 01, 2004
    Damn that was good! :x Sakura fictions are my fav. No matter who she ends up with (as long as it's not a woman :P)
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  • From ANON - chl on May 30, 2004
    oh, man! the ending was a little too abrupt, but i love the story! i didn't think it was going to be SasuSaku at the beginning (which was why i read the fic in the first place -- i'm not partial to the pairing these days), but it worked out incredibly well. it was a nice tale, and while the characters are OOC (for Naruto universe anyway), i can totally picture them acting like this had they been this old (damn, do i need a life!). anyway, just want to let you know i think you did a really good job with this fic; my only real beef is with the typos, and i don't think that even qualifies as a criticism. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - caz on May 23, 2004
    hey
    i got one of your fanfics off of livejournal.com/community/narufanfic
    rite now its about one chap.long and an alternatite universe one (sorry i forgot the name of your fanfic)
    i really liked it so i decided to read this one
    well this one is awesome
    it seems like you stayed true to everyone's characters
    for instance sakura has inner sakura and often wants to say things she cant
    same withs sasuke...sasuke is so freaking internal but it felt like sasuke is really like how he was portrayed in your story
    your a very good writer and you made their love and issues seem so believable like it was right out of the series
    also i love gaara in your story and mika!!!
    it made me smile
    n_n
    ~caz~
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  • From ANON - Kilyn on May 11, 2004
    Without a doubt, unquestionably, most certainly the best Naruto story I have ever read. Including the original! It is beatifully written, and quite enthralling. I couldn't stand to leave for bed at chapter 16, I would have been unable to sleep knowing that the rest of the story is sitting mere inches away, waiting to be finished. So here I am, reveiwing this work of art at one AM. I'll probably have to read it again tomorrow just in case sleep somehow erases some tiny bit of this story from my memory. Ah well, I thoroughly enjoyed it all the same. Although, I was fervently hoping that Sakura would end up with Gaara, but I like the ending just the same. Well, maybe not just the same...but it's a good ending anyway! I do hope you write that prequel of Kakashi and Sakura, I would just love to read it! I can hardly wait; oh darn, now I won't be able to sleep tonight even though I finished the story! Ah well, please post it soon!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 09, 2004
    I HAVE RETURNED! Sorry coz of my pops. HE changed the place of computer so I cannot! Nice fin! Im crying! Its so sweet!
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  • From ANON - red.junko on May 08, 2004
    excellent! brilliantly written! and powerfully enchanting : )
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  • From ANON - aya on May 05, 2004
    i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love you tea leaf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Darker Magenta (can\'t be bothered signing in to review this on fanfiction... too troublesome) on May 04, 2004
    as always wonderful story. i like your decision with a simple ending as i think its best suited to the story, it left me with a happy fuzzy feeling. I think a big dramatic finish would have ... i don't know let down the story or something... so the choice you made was really good. any plans to make other storie's soon ^.^ ? *kyubi's ears perk up*
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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on May 04, 2004
    I was hooked ever since you first started posting this story. It's the best Naruto story I've read so far.
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  • From ANON - Kashshaptu on May 03, 2004
    aaaaaaaw, that was such a sweet ending ^_^ I'm glad about how it turned out, you should write more fanfics in the future, well, thx for the fic^_^
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  • From ANON - La Perle on May 03, 2004
    I just wanted to say how much i have enjoyed reading this story. From the very first chapter i was hooked. I loved your different twists opn the characters, especially sakura. The angst was used perfectly, and the storyline was fantastic. The only grievance i have is that its now finished. I look forward to reading more fics from you.
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  • From ANON - kayoko on May 03, 2004
    finally finished the fic, eh? *pat*pat* good job!

    hm..i'm glad it turned out to be sasusaku fic..i like that pairing...

    i'm quite surprised that you left many questions unanswered...like...why the butterflies stopped approaching sakura (she said so herself)...how kakashi and sakura mixed blood...and sakura's various relationships with other people...i was hoping that some of it would be explained...as..it seemed important to the story..

    but...after reading the ending..i think that it really doesn't matter...
    i give you much applause for the last scene with sasuke and sakura...it was simple..straight forward...in character...and most of all ..it expressed their thoughts and feelings in a very..understandable way...it's very well written ...and it just made their biggest problems seem like nothing at all...like...they're happy..and nothing else really mattered...a very interesting way to end the story...

    thank you so much for writing this story, you're really great author..the plot waeat.eat..the characterizations of sakura and sasuke were amazing...you write fast..(which is the absolute best)....there are some typos (=P)...but..im sure many of us can just fix that when we read it...oh yeah...you didn't leave us with too many clift hangers...and definately not for long...so..i must give my thanks for providing me with such great entertainment for the days since i've started reading the fic..i looked forward to it everyday..and always disappointed when i didn't see an update (well..i checked the fic often =P)

    i don't think i can thank you enough...^_^
    i look forward to your next piece of fiction..
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