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A New Breed of Carnage	By : CarnageShriekLove Category: Naruto Crossovers > Het - Male/Female Views: 12916 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: Marvel, Naruto, and all the characters involved in this story do not belong to me, and I make no money from this.

Chapter List
- 1-Carnage Rules!
- 2-Psycho Love!
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A:N: Hello all, welcome to this little story of mine. Now, I wanted to let you all know that I'm a huge fan of the Carnage Symbiote, and I wanted to try my hand at writing a story involving him. I've been eager to read a story involving a Naruto bonded with the Carnage Symbiote, but all of the ones I've found only have a few chapters to them, and have been dead or discontinued for a while. So, since I'm such a huge fan, I figured I would try my own hand at it. I know I am not the greatest writer in the world, but I REALLY love Carnage, and I like Naruto, even though I got frustrated with how ridiculous things were getting, not to mention the epilogue. I would like to start off with an apology as the very beginning is a tad bit cliche, but other than the very beginning, I hope to stray from cliches. Now before we start, I'm going to answer a bunch of questions I'm sure people will have right off the bat.
Question #1 - How Close Will You Stick To Carnage & Naruto's Canon Personalities?: Naruto's personality will not be like how it was in Canon, I'm going to have him be introduced to Carnage at an early age, around the time before he really found people who cared about him. It would be a time where his negative emotions would be much stronger, and thus more likely to be influenced by the Carnage Symbiote, so the answer about Naruto's personality is not very much, maybe not even at all.
As for Carnage's personality, he will be more like how he actually is in Canon, a demented psychopath who wants everyone and everything dead, aside from himself and the person he/Naruto will be with. I don't recall if he was ever a cannibal at all, but I like to think he is, so there will be bouts of cannibalism, as well as have some silly moments where he's not taking things seriously and joking around, even when he's trying to kill/eat someone. So the answer to this half of the question, is very close, but with some added flair. Of course, since Carnage is a very demented, horrifying villain, this story will be Rated M. After all, super powered, mentally ill serial killers with a penchant for cannibalism won't exactly fit a T Rating.
Question #2 - Who Will Be Carnage's Love Interest?: Fem!Sasuke, and why I chose that will be revealed in the 2nd Chapter.
Question #3 - Will I Be Bashing Anyone?: If anyone sees any bashing, of any character, I promise you it will be unintentional. When people do bashing topics, they tend to butcher the character being bashed and make them significantly worse. I, for one, will do my best to avoid that.
"Person Talking"
'Person Talking Mentally'
*Person Thinking*
"Bijuu/Cursed Seal/Symbiote Talking"
'Bijuu/Cursed Seal/Symbiote Talking Mentally'
*Bijuu/Cursed Seal/Symbiote Thinking*
"Jutsu Names"
Chapter 1: Carnage Rules!
"Get out and stay out you little demon spawn!" said the voice of the elderly matron at the orphanage as she kicked Naruto, and the few things he had for himself, out into the streets in the dead of night over the laughter of the other children. The 5 year old blonde cried to himself as his things that were thrown out with him were destroyed. He sniffled to himself as his stuff was ruined, and thus were completely ruined. He walked through the streets of the Leaf Village, his thoughts running wild with negative emotions fueling them, his mind conjuring up various images of what he'd like to do to everyone there.
*What did I do to deserve this?* he asked himself as the tears continued to race down his face. Unknown to him, he was being observed by a puddle of red goop. The red goop had been observing the blonde child discreetly for the past year since it somehow found it's way to this village, when it wasn't gathering information on it's current surroundings. It had been trying to find a host for so long, and while there was plenty of people it could choose from, due to this place being full of assassins, it wanted to find just the right host. After observing the blonde-haired child for long enough, it had decided to make it's way and choose him. However, timing was key, it needed the right moment to take over the little blonde so that it be too late for the blonde to do anything.
The red goop silently followed the boy, keeping to the shadows and biding it's time, much like a predator stalking it's prey. Eventually, the little boy found a place in a dark, secluded alleyway that he could sleep in for now, hoping no one found him and killed him in his sleep. All the while, the red goop slithered across the ground, anxiously waiting for the moment to strike. The boy's breathing evened out, and clearly nodded off to sleep, and if the red goop could smile evilly, it would. The red goop moved up to Naruto and slowly encased his body, slowly morphing to cover him neck-to-toe. The red goop attached itself to Naruto fully, mind body and soul, and fed off of the glorious amount of negative emotions the boy had. It was going to gorge itself until it was fat with the splendor of negative emotions, and there was nothing the boy could do to stop it. As Naruto slept, the Symbiote messed with his dreams, feeding off of his negative emotions to supply him with a graphic image of what one would describe as a nightmare.
~Dream Sequence~
It was a scene of utter carnage, it was a scene of a massacre. The menacing, echoing cackle of some kind of demented monster echoed in his head as he morphed his hands into menacing blood red axes. The cackling grew louder as children in the orphanage were slaughtered left and right, their screams of pain and terror making his heart clench tightly in horror over what he was doing. Body parts and blood sprayed and flew everywhere, not a single child was spared the pain, anger and hatred of the being that was responsible for this ungodly horror. When it seemed like there was no one left, a voice came from the now horrifyingly bloody scene.
"Aw, look at the sad weettle scene, poor weettle orphans slaughtered with no one to save them. It's no surprise, though, orphans aren't wanted to begin with, so no one cares if they die! Ask the ones who gave them away or died that they were related to!" the voice cackled out in a high-pitched, glass-shattering kind of voice that was similar to nails on a chalkboard. However, his laughter was cut short by the door to the bedroom opening, revealing the elderly matron.
"Alright, what's with all the-" she started to say, before the coppery stench of blood overwhelmed her and fully awakened her. Her eyes widened and her mouth dropped open at the graphic scene of the orphans cut into pieces and strewn about all over the room, the entire place drenched in the blood of the kids. However, before she could scream, the being responsible chuckled in amusement and shot out a large tentacle that wrapped around the old matron's mouth and kept it closed. She was pulled towards the being responsible for this massacre, and her eyes widened in horror at the sight of it.
"You don't seem too happy over the deaths of these little crotch gremlins. Don't worry, I'm sure they're all in a better place, or maybe they're in hell like all non-people are sent to, just like you will my dear! No need to feel too sad, though" here the being's face morphed from a fake frown, to a wide, twisted smile "After all, I'm sure the little sexsnot goblins will be watched after by in Hell! I don't know for sure, because I've never been, but I'm sure it seems like an awesome place! Now, for a little song. This is the way we stab you good, stab you good, stab your good. This is the way we stab you good, so many times~" the voice chuckled as he morphed his hands into blades and started stabbing her viciously, wracking up stabs that numbered to 55.
When the stabbing spree was over, he let the very dead matron go, and morphed his right hand into it's clawed default form. He then ripped the woman's heart out and consumed it in a series of bites. After cleaning himself of all the blood, he proceeded to coat his fingers in blood. He then wrote a simple, two word message on the closed door, and it was enough to scare and terrify the people of the Leaf Village, while also leaving no clues to his whereabouts. The killer then slunk away into the night, hoping to inspire some terror into this supposed village of killers.
The message simply read Carnage Rules
~End Dream Sequence~
Naruto screamed as his eyes snapped wide open, sweating nervously when he was finally allowed to leave the dream. He placed his hand over his heart and clenched his chest as he panted for breath. He was deeply disturbed by the dream he had, and was wondering why he had that dream last night. His dreams were never so graphic violent, it usually involved Ramen. Very shaken, he stopped up, and looked down. He found that he seemed to have gained some mass, as he was no longer so skinny. In fact, as he took several breaths and performed some stretches, he actually felt so much better than he did the night before. Being a kid, he thought it was totally awesome, and didn't question it. Shrugging to himself, he decided to walk through the village, making sure to do his best to avoid catching anyone's eye as he didn't feel like dealing with the villagers today.
As he went on his walk, he noticed that the orphanage he was kicked out of had been blocked off by the Uchiha Police Force AND the ANBU. Narrowing his eyes, he overheard a conversation going on between two investigators, quietly listening in.
"...find the sick bastard whoever did this. The scene is utterly sickening, only a nutcase would participate in such wanton slaughter!" growled out one of the Uchiha on the scene, causing Naruto to blink in confusion. What were they talking about? he asked himself.
"Whoever murdered the orphans and matron will be found, and we will ensure they pay for their crimes! Just reading the bloody message pissed me off something extreme! Carnage Rules?! It clearly shows this psychopath enjoyed every moment of his little rampage!" the other Uchiha fumed, and hearing this caused Naruto's heart to stop beating for a moment.
What he dreamed actually took place?! So, does that mean he was the one to-?! He stopped himself from thinking that, just the thought of it made him go green. Sure, he was angry over being kicked out, but he wouldn't actually kill anyone. Feeling dread creep up and down his spine, he continued on his way, blending in with the people of the village as the day slowly moved on.
By noon, the news spread like wildfire, and the fear was palpable on everyone's faces. So many people dead in one night, and not even a single suspect to be found. Naruto in particular was feeling the most dread out of everyone in the village, due to his having dreamed up such a scenario that became real the next day. What was truly terrifying to him, however, was that while he was horrified over the thought of him actually killing anyone, he didn't feel sadness over the matron and other orphans being dead. He feels like he should be sorry or something that they were dead, but truthfully after the way they all treated him, he actually felt a bit smug that they were dead, like he was thankful for their deaths.
'Karma' a voice whispered in his head, causing him to stop in his tracks. Looking around him, he didn't see anyone look at him or give any indication they spoke to him, so he shrugged his shoulders and assumed he imagined it. However, before he could continue walking along, the voice spoke up again.
'They hurt us, so they got hurt back' was what the voice whispered to him this time, freaking him out and causing him to move into a nearby alleyway. Once he was safely hidden, he tried to speak back to the voice.
'Killing is wrong' he said back to the voice whispering in his head, merely a fluke test to see if the voice was real, or if he was imagining it.
'Then why do ninja kill, and get hailed as heroes for it?' the voice spoke back, which caused Naruto freeze up and widen his eyes when he confirmed the voice was real. He would have shouted at the top of his lungs and go screaming to Jiji about it, but then what the voice said to him kept him quiet as he absorbed what they said. He thought ninja were cool, awesome people who protected people and fought for their homeland. They were heroes, noble people who fought bravely for their village and were respected by their fellows. He was feeling very incensed by the words this voice said to him, but before he could reply, the voice spoke up again.
'Think about it, the ninja system rewards killing of people. Just look at your hero the Yondaime Hokage, he killed over 2,000 enemy ninja and got rewarded for it by his village, even becoming Hokage from it. Minato Namikaze was said to be one of the most liked and respected ninjas of all time, yet he killed so many people. If killing is wrong, why did he get respect, and rewards, from doing so? Ninjas are tasked with killing people everyday, sometimes innocent people, for no reason other than they're being paid to do so' the voice whispered to him, which caused Naruto actually stop and think for a moment. What the voice said made a lot of sense, if killing was wrong, why was his hero praised for killing so many people? He didn't want to kill people, that would just prove everyone right about him being a monster or a demon.
'Those Uchiha judged the killer of those orphans and the matron as if they were better than him, yet they themselves have killed others, and let's not forget the Uchiha are very quick to be rough with you for supposed crimes, even trying to kill you several times. They are hypocrites, they judge someone for doing something they claim is wrong, when they have done the same thing' the voice said again, which caused Naruto's eyes to harden in remembrance over how the Uchiha would always rough him up and take him in on charges that were clearly bogus. The voice was right, if killing was wrong, why did Ninjas kill? Thinking something, the 5 year old replied back.
'The laws of our village says we can't kill others' he said back, albeit in a very weak manner, which caused the voice to scoff.
'Laws are just words made up by people to try and add some semblance of society and civilized behavior unto themselves, to make them think they are above animals, yet they aren't. Humans are guided by their emotions and their desires, they always do evil every day, sometimes because they like doing it. The matron and orphans were cruel to you and were just like all the others here. If laws are as good as you say, then why do people break them? Laws don't stop people from doing what they want. If they did, there would be no crime. If others don't respect the law, why should you?' the voice whispered to Naruto, which caused his head to droop down in thought. The voice was making a good point, it always had a good point in this conversation of theirs.
'Why should we kill people for being mean to us? The Old Man says one should forgive and forget' Naruto shot back at the voice.
'Yes, let's take the words of an old man who barely helps you out, and avoids doing anything to those who hurt you because he can't be biased. If he's really so unbiased, why do you always get hurt and punished by these people, and the Old Man only helps you when it's proven you're innocent? Everyone else is believed to be innocent, but you're always guilty in the eyes of everyone. How is that fair?' the voice whispered to Naruto in a cynical manner, causing Naruto to freeze in thought. It was true, the Hokage only helped him out when he had nowhere else to go, or when it was proven he did nothing wrong. If the Hokage really is so unbiased, why does it always seem like he's either busy or biased against him until proven otherwise?
'Besides, the Old Man is the entire reason you're so hated. I can prove it to you, if you let me' the voice whispered, stopping Naruto's thoughts completely. Carnage could feel the uncertainty of it's host, along with a hint of curiosity, and it caused Carnage to smile in his mind. If he was allowed the chance, he could fully break the boy's trust in others, and fully meld with him. All he needed was a big enough push. Sure enough, the opportunity came when his host spoke to him.
'Show me' was all Naruto whispered, before he was plunged into the deep depths of his mind, where he would view a memory that would shake his beliefs to their very core.
~Flashback~
"So, the Kyuubi was defeated by Minato? Thank Kami the nightmare is over, what's with the brat, though?" Tsume Inuzuka asked Sarutobi as she looked down at the little blonde-haired boy.
"Minato had sacrificed himself to stop the beast, so I will be taking the mantle of Hokage back up. He had sealed the Kyuubi up into little Naruto here using the power of the Shinigami" Sarutobi said to the shocked council members.
"In that case, we should slay the vessel so it can't grow strong to finish the job" Fugaku Uchiha said with an angry leer as he glared at the blonde-haired brat.
"I disagree, he is too valuable to be killed. I propose he be given over to me so I can mold him into a weapon" came the voice of Danzo, before the chamber dissolved into arguments about what the child's fate should be.
After a bit of tense arguing, silence was returned to the room after the Sandaime Hokage flared his KI, shocking them all into silence.
"I will not allow you to throw away Minato's sacrifice as it if was meaningless! I am enacting a new law that anyone who knows the fate of the Kyuubi is not to tell anyone who doesn't know the secret under penalty of death. This is an S-Rank secret, and I will not have it spread to the next generation!" The Sandaime Hokage said as he dismissed the Council, and enacted contingencies to deal with the fallout of the Kyuubi Attack. As the next day came, the secret got out, and thus began his cruel, miserable life.
~End Flashback~
When the flashback was over, Naruto fell to his knees in shock. Not only was the voice right about the Old Man being responsible for all the hate he has, he had the Kyuubi inside of him. He really was a monster, a demon like they always said he was. Hearing his thoughts, Carnage decided to ensnare the boy's fragile mind while he had the chance.
'Now you see, they hate you for something that was out of your control, and it was the Old Man who caused you to be hated in the first place. He is the cause of all your suffering, all this time he was lying to you and pretending to be your friend, all the while laughing at your foolishness since he doomed you to such a cruel life to begin with. If he's a friend, I'd hate to see what an enemy will be. Fugaku Uchiha, Danzo, Hiruzen Sarutobi, the villagers, all of them want you either dead or as a puppet. Face it, you can only count on me' the voice whispered again, and just like that, Naruto dropped his head and accepted what he believed to be the truth.
Grinning evilly, Carnage overtook Naruto's mind, and started doing his work to bend and mold Naruto to his will. As the melding process became complete, the little boy now known as Carnage smirked evilly, and prepared for what he wanted to do. Operation: Burning Leaf was now in effect.
A/N: The 1st Chapter is done, everybody. :3 I know it's a little on the short side, and like I said my writing isn't the best, but I was hoping to try and go for something I would like to write. Feel free to review if you wish, depending on the reaction I get, I'd be willing to ride this Crazy Train all the way to end.
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