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Naruto: Suzuran no Hanmā	By : Narutomaniac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female Views: 1546 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1
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Naruto: Suzuran no Hanmā
Summary: There are two Ninja Academy's in Konoha, Senju and Suzuran. Senju has turned out the next generation of warriors who shine above the rest and become known throughout the world since the founding of the village, and Suzuran that has turned out the next generation of shinobi, and those destined to stay in the background to do the villages dirty work. Now what happens when a boy destined to shine above the rest goes to and conquers Suzuran?
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Konoha's Senju Academy…
"Now as we announce teams, I'd like for you to all gather for lunch to further get acquainted with one another." Loudly announced a man with a scar across his nose with brown hair done up like a pineapple, and dressed in standard Konoha Chuunin garb.
As he stared out at the crowd of fresh Gennin the man took pride in this new generation of shinobi he had taught for the last several years, he motioned for the silver haired Chuunin beside him to start listing teams.
"Alright team one…" Grumbled out the silver haired man as he grudgingly rambled out names of graduates that anyone with a few years of experience as an Academy sensei could see would never advance past Gennin in rank. 'Hell most of these little bastards only got into Senju because their parents have the right connections. On skill alone they'd be lucky to pass in Suzuran let alone here.' gritting his teeth he stopped abruptly, leaving it up to his colleague to finish before he snapped at the little ninja wannabes.
Looking up the scarred Chuunin quickly grabbed the list as it was tossed at his chest by his partner. "Um ok then well starting where Mizuki-sensei left off…let's see here Team 7 will consist of Uchiha Sasuke, Haruno Sakura, and Uzumaki Naruto. Your Jounin Sensei will be Hatake Kakashi." sighing he prepared himself mentally. '3...2...1.'
"WHAT? Iruka-sensei who's Uzumaki Naruto?" yelled a pink haired young girl before finishing her surprised query in a more even tone. She had pink hair half way down her back, her Hitai-ate atop her head, a red dress trimmed with white reaching her knees with slits up to her waist on each side, black spandex shorts, and blue shinobi sandals.
Shaking his head after the outburst Iruka was thankful he had the experience dealing with the dreaded fangirls and had blocked his ears lest he end up like the Inuzuka sitting behind the young girl who was almost in tears holding his ears, poor boy only had time to block his puppy's ears. "Haruno-san due to the graduate's numbers being uneven for the standard three member teams the top of the graduating class at Suzuran was chosen to fill out your team. No-"
Sakura though wasn't about to let him continue. "Suzuran? Why is some dobe from Suzuran joining a team from our class? Let alone one with Sasuke-kun the rookie of the year?" this caused several other young shinobi to laugh, and their sensei to groan. 'Hell yeah! Like some dobe from that loser school deserves to be on a team with my Sasuke-kun!'
"Sigh; Haruno-san that was very rude, simply because Uzumaki-kun is from Suzuran doesn't mean he's not a competent ninja. His graduating class was also uneven so it's not like he has a choice in the matter either." Iruka lectured in a stern voice causing the rosette to shrink back in her chair while looking down after suddenly finding her finger nails particularly interesting.
With a nod of satisfaction Iruka continued with the team listings "Team 8 will consist of Inuzuka Kiba, Hyuuga Hinata, and Aburame Shino. Your Jounin Sensei will be Yuuhi Kurenai." pausing he noticed the brash Inuzuka and calm Aburame walk over to join the shy Hyuuga. "Team 9 is still in circulation from last year. Team 10 will be Akimichi Chouji, Nara Shikamaru, and Yamanaka Ino. Your Jounin Sensei will be Sarutobi Asuma." Again Iruka stopped and developed a sweat drop as he watched the loud blonde member of the team crash face down on the table as the big boned one munched happily on a bag of chips, and the lazy one napped. "Ok then…your all dismissed for lunch, be back at 1 P.M. sharp to meet with your Jounin Sensei." With a sigh Iruka sat down while the young ninja swarmed for the doors.
Konoha Suzuran Academy 12:30 P.M…
Standing outside of Suzuran's gate stood three figures, two of which were shaking in what seemed to be excitement while the third seemed bored. The bored one had long black hair, white eyes lacking pupils, a tan short sleeved high collared shirt, brown shorts, with white bandages on his right arm and leg, and his Hitai-ate around his forehead with straps framing his face.
His boredom caused him to speak his mind in a frustrated tone. "Tell me why we're at this run down embarrassment to the Konoha Ninja Educational Program?" Waving his hand at the state of the academy to emphasize his point. The building had ivy growing up the sides of the cracked walls, the grass was dead and dried up. A strong breeze could kick up enough dust to lower visibility several fold. The outer wall was deteriorating, the stone crumbling in parts around the sides.
The other male of the group spoke up in an exuberant voice while pumping his fist in the air. "Neji-san, my most un-youthful comrade we are here for it is the day Teichou graduates!"
The loud Gennin wore a sleeveless green spandex leotard under a high collared black sleeveless jacket that went to his waist with a red swirl on the back, bandages around both of his forearms from his elbows to his hands, he also had oversized orange leg warmers with blue sandals, his Hitai-ate on a red band was used as a belt, and had black hair in a bowl cut along with two large bushy eyebrows.
The pale eyed teenager rubbed the bridge of his nose in annoyance at his teammates over the top attitude. "Lee, you've mentioned your Teichou before. Though never actually elaborated on the subject." abruptly holding up his hand to stay the response from his green clad teammate as he noticed him take a deep breath he turned to the female member. "On second thought…Tenten-san would you please explain?"
The young woman leaning against the wall opposite the male members of her team sighed a bit while glancing towards the doors. She had brown hair done up in two buns atop her head with two black senbon crossed through each bun, a light pink top with red trim that stopped above her navel, she also wore a black long sleeve jacket that went slightly below her waist with a large collar, it had a red swirl on the back, black fingerless gloves with steel plates on the back each with a leaf insignia etched into them, green cargo pants with a black belt with several brown pouches on the belt, blue sandals, and her Hitai-ate sat on a black band tied tightly to her forehead.
Speaking up to answer her teammates question and avoid another outburst from Lee. "Teichou is…Teichou really. He's a year younger than us, but when he started here he had an aura that just…pulled you in." Sighing as she spoke fondly as she recalled meeting her Teichou. "As you know, now at least, Suzuran is different than Senju. It's different in that its reputation is for turning out lousy ninja, which is in fact wrong. It's just that people don't know the names of the ninja who graduate here even when they advance to the higher levels, unlike their counter parts in Senju. Not that they lack power or anything, it's just that they tend to go into the more murky aspects of shinobi life."
Her pseudo lecture caused Neji to sigh to himself before interrupting her. "I know all about that, though it doesn't negate the fact that the fate of graduates from this place for the most part anyways is to toil in mediocrity at best." The pale eyed Gennin froze slightly at the heated glares sent his way from his team making him earn that genius title with a quick save. "You two are the exceptions that prove the rule. While your fate is not to reach the levels of a genius, and those fate has decreed to ascend to the greater heights of the Shinobi world, you were selected to join me and study under an…eccentric but powerful Jounin."
Gritting her teeth Tenten looked to see the grimace on the face of the ever jovial Lee. Looking back to Neji she regained her composure with a thought that was more akin to a mantra after teaming with him for a year 'It's ok it's ok he's the so called Hyuuga prodigy but still a member of the branch house., which means he has to demean everyone due to his own insecurities…' with a calming breath she eyed him wearily. "Anyways as I was saying, due to that fact the school has always been rather chaotic. Everyone forms factions and tries to lead the others and conquer the school." after a nod of understanding from the Hyuuga prodigy she was interrupted by Lee.
"Yosha! It's said that only one person has ever truly conquered Suzuran before, and that was back in the Nidaime's reign! The next closest was Morino Ibiki the current head of the Torture and Interrogation Department, BUT that was before the Teichou joined Suzuran and conquered the school by the end of his second year!" excitedly rambled the bushy browed Gennin, causing Neji to cringe at the volume while Tenten nodded firmly with a smile.
"Heh that's right Teichou came in and it was almost like he was meant to rule the school…probably because he didn't want to." Tenten said causing the pale eyed teens eyes to widen slightly at the twist of what he had felt was coming.
"Yup he didn't want to rule, he just did without even realizing it. Simply because he didn't like how the factions fought and innocent students who were there to learn to defend their homes were caught up in the crossfire. Lee and I were the first two that gravitated to him, almost immediately due to that aura of righteousness of his." Tenten said in an admiring tone, while she turned to watch the doors once again.
"Others always scurried around snatching up underlings like bargain barrel kunai. Before he came we were constantly fighting just to keep from being swallowed up by the whole situation. He was different though, he was going to take these guys down a peg or two by himself. Never once even thinking of asking for help." Her tone turned cocky at the end, and why not? She was retelling one of her fondest memories that she didn't get to regale others with nearly as often as she'd like.
Lee could barely contain his excitement at hearing his Teichou's greatness being retold and had to speak up once more. "Which is exactly why we decided to fight by his side! While the fight was tough in a little over a year he stood at the top of Suzuran with everyone acknowledging him as the leader even if they disliked it!" the bowl haired teen was now hopping in excitement.
Neji scoffed at this. "So he's the king of the losers? How does standing atop the lower class ninja of this place make him so great?" after his questions he involuntarily stepped back from the intense aura's generated by his teammates.
Lee was the first to speak in a surprisingly cold tone as his fists clenched slowly by his sides. "I'd advise you choose your words more carefully in regards to Teichou Neji-san."
"Lee's right, disrespecting the Teichou will end in a way we'd like to avoid seeing as you're our teammate." Tenten all but whispered as she glared over her shoulder at the Hyuuga.
The sudden shift in demeanor amongst his team unnerved Neji as he stiffened slightly. 'I've been with them for an entire year, and I've never seen either show such an intimidating posture let alone attitude.' There was no way he'd show that their attempt at intimidation could unnerve him even slightly, his status as a prodigy of the Hyuuga Clan would not allow it. So he did what any genius would…he changed the subject while he calmed himself completely. "Ahem. Anyways, even with everything you said I fail to see how him conquering the school and you following him as he did so can inspire such loyalty."
"Huh?" Was the response he earned from Tenten as she tilted her head to the side in confusion.
"Ah my apologies Neji-san how un-youthful of us. Allow me to explain." Lee said as he assumed a pre-made lecturing pose, crossing his arms with his right hand cupping his chin."We have simply never fought a foe that we needed to do anything besides the basics you've seen us do before. Simply put Teichou helped us develop and become strong enough to stand beside him with our heads held high!" his calm pose devolving as he continued his excited rant before thrusting his right fist high into the air to punctuate his statement.
Now this caused Neji slight pause, while not completely coherent Lee had said something that intrigued him in his own roundabout way. He basically said that he hadn't seen Lee or Tenten go all out and show all their abilities. This little tidbit of information caused him to frown as he looked at the door, wondering who this 'Teichou' of theirs was.
It irritated him slightly that his team would hide their true capabilities from him, not that he'd admit it though. Sure he hadn't seen the need to go all out either, but that was different since with his fighting style they knew essentially what to expect. He on the other hand had no idea what they were capable of other than Lee being extremely proficient with the Gouken Gai-sensei taught him, and Tenten having impeccable aim with thrown weapons.
Neji was broken from his internal musings once more by Lee's exuberant cries. "Yosha! I can barely wait to show Teichou how Gai-sensei has helped me polish it even more!" this claim startled Tenten as well as Neji.
Turning abruptly Tenten smiled at Lee's antics. "Really? Even more? Your making me jealous Lee, I've been having a bit of trouble speeding my little project up."
All of this talk had Neji becoming increasingly curious as well as agitated, rather than risk showing his annoyance he decided to bring up a nagging question he'd had since they'd arrived. "Ok I get it, though I do have one final question." his teammates looked over their shoulders while still facing the academy doors. "What are all of these people doing camped out all around the entrance for?"
This question caused Lee to sweat drop. "Well, the thing is…well you see…yeah…." his explanation dying out he coughed suspiciously towards Tenten causing her to sheepishly scratch the back of her head.
"Heh, well through Teichou's time here…he made a few enemies." With a wave of her hand towards the numerous ninja in hiding…most rather poorly…like the chubby boy behind a sapling. "Several are from previous graduating classes…as far back as from Teichou's first year…though most are drop outs and from younger classes eager to take the top spot."
Nervously Lee put a hand on Neji's shoulder and said in a serious tone, "Neji-san...how do I put this. Hmm sometimes you can be...un-youthful? Yes that sums it up nicely." Nodding to himself while Neji developed a tick. "So I must ask that you not make a comment about Teichou's...lack of stature. He's very sensitive about it."
Looking at his green clad teammate oddly Neji contemplated what was said. 'Surely someone they speak so highly of couldn't be that short...'
No sooner than Lee had finished asking that favor from Neji did the doors to the academy burst open as a male figure exited the building, which caused all in attendance to stiffen in anticipation.
As he strode forth with an air of confidence, the audience took stock of the figure that stood slightly shorter than Tenten did, yet his muscular build made him appear much larger still. He wore an unbuttoned high collared black jacket that bulged tightly in the arms and reached down slightly below his waist with a red swirl on the back, a skin tight orange tank top, black pants with a black belt, and black closed toed sandals. The most striking things about him though were his vibrant spiky blonde hair held out of his striking blue eyes by his Hitai-ate on a black band, and his tanned face with six whisker marks adorning his cheeks three on each.
As soon as he cleared the steps he threw his muscular arms up with a big smile and spoke in a loud voice. "Lee-kun! Ten-chan! What are you two doing here?"
Simultaneous yells of "Naruto-Teichou/kun!" was his response as Lee appeared in front of him before snapping into a salute with a large smile showing his pearly whites almost blinding everyone bearing witness to it. While Tenten put her left hand on her hip matching Lee's smile…though much more subdued, before strolling forward.
"Naruto-Teichou we're here to congratulate you on your graduation!" Lee shouted while giving a thumbs up before taking a deep breath. "Yos-Itai! Tenten-san!" his rant broken before it really began as he held his head while giving his female teammate a hurt look.
"Lee…I'm just as happy to greet Naruto-kun as you are, but don't you think we should deal with them first?" Causing the two to look over her shoulders at the crowd she was pointing at.
As she stuck her thumb out there was a loud shout of 'CHARGE!' before the group of would be ambushers split and came at them from three sides in an attempt to box them in. Each carried some sort of weapon ranging from basic kunai and shuriken, to short swords and clubs…the chubby boy from before with his mothers rolling pin that had bent nails hammered into it.
"Seriously…?" with a sigh Tenten stepped towards the group coming from the front. With a puff of smoke she held a curled up brown whip about 8 feet long. She began to walk forward before breaking into a trot towards the center of the six charging enemies, before suddenly falling forward face first then abruptly disappearing from her opponents sight and reappearing a step behind them.
With her wrist in front of her she flicked it from left to right quickly while speaking in a bored tone, "Better luck next time boys, though try and train a bit more would you? I'd like a decent work out." the boys dropped to the ground a moment later, eyes rolling to the back of their heads.
In the aftermath she snapped her whip curling it back up as it recoiled while putting her hand on her hip before glaring at the tree in front of her. "You can come out now, or do you have a thing for voyeurism? Pervert."
A man with neat black hair above his Hitai-ate, a gray turtleneck, brown pants, blue sandals, and a white sash across his chest stepped out from behind the tree. "Heh for you BunBun-chan I think I might start."
Her opponents 'nickname' for her caused a tick mark to develop over her right eye, and for her to reach towards her right Bun…the one on her head.
Meanwhile with Lee…
Lee turned to the take the group on the right noticing six opponents closing fast-ish…though the chubby child from before was lagging several meters behind the rest…and was clearly out of breath.
As he waited for them to close in he suddenly smiled, before disappearing from view and ending up beside the chubby child in a crouch "Konoha Reppuu (Leaf Violent Wind)" spinning quickly with his right leg lashing out connecting with the boys shins sending him rocketing towards the rest of the group who stopped less than two meters in front of the two as they heard Lee call out his technique.
"GAH! Shibo!" was the last thing any of them could get out as he hit them, his mass taking three out, his…'weapon' taking out the other two.
After bowling with the chubby boy Lee stiffened while looking to the academy where he heard a clapping noise.
"Heh you've grown Lee…especially your lousy taste." the man sat on a second story window sill clapping. He had messy black hair held back by his Hitai-ate, and wore a gray jacket, white scarf over his shoulders, black pants, blue sandals, and a white sash across his chest.
Meanwhile with Naruto…
Naruto turned towards the left with a bark of laughter. "Come little ones let Naruto-sensei give you a lesson in practical combat!" while opening his stance wider, his arms up motioning for them to try their luck.
This group was seven strong and more prepared than the others, four with kunai in each hand stopped holding them up in defensive positions. The other three stopped as well, each lining up in the opening between defenders while throwing two shuriken a piece to ensure accuracy.
Naruto stared at this tactic with a grin, "HA good effort!" Quickly snapping out a series of lightning fast right jabs, picking the shuriken out of the air. "Good but not good enough!...huh?" with a glance down he saw a couple explosive tags attached to the shuriken,"Heh REAL good!" Concentrating for a few seconds his hand darkened considerably then with a SCRUNCH he turned the six shuriken into a ball of scrap causing the tags to fizzle out from the disruption in the chakra triggers. At the looks of disbelief from his attackers his jovial grin turned feral. 'Ah good old fashioned intimidation, there's nothing quite like it!'
Taking a step forward as they gaped and leaning down digging his free hand into the hard earth beside him, coming up with a hand full broken up clumps of dirt. Not missing a beat Naruto let them fly with a grunt as he straightened, pelting the 'squad' about the head with his hastily made projectiles. Each piece creating a far bigger impact than was normal rendering them all unconscious, not one with a full set of teeth or non-broken nose after the blondes barrage.
With a smile of satisfaction Naruto stood up straight dropping the ball of scrap metal he caught before his eyes locked on something behind the unconscious boys.
A man was standing on the academy's perimeter wall his eyes squinted with a wicked grin. He had messy black hair held up with his Hitai-ate, a small goatee, black sweatshirt with a white sash over it, brown shorts, and blue sandals. "Heh finally graduated eh 'Suzuran no Hanmā'?"
Meanwhile with Neji…
Neji stood still Byakugan active while contemplating what he'd just seen. Nonchalantly swaying back to avoid the kunai thrust aimed at the left side of his head, while striking his assailant's shoulder joint before waving his hand beside the attackers head causing him to fall limply to the ground.
All the while never taking his mind off what he'd seen. 'These are hardly worthy foes, but they took them out as if it was routine to face off against a multitude of ninja. Lee-sans tactic I'm not surprised it was just a spur of the moment adaptation of a low level Gouken technique. Still though the efficiency was remarkable.'
Stepping forward Neji side stepped to his right avoiding a barrage of shuriken before sprinting at the wall to the left of the gate and sending a quick palm thrust out ripping a hole through a cloth being used for a "Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)" causing the user to start making retching noises. Showing himself worthy of his label of prodigy, Neji quickly grabbed the top of the cloth deflecting the projectile vomit back onto the sick boy.
With a quick step back he allowed the boy to fall face down into his own vomit…then dropped the cloth over him with a grimace. 'But Tenten-san…a whip is an odd weapon for a ninja, and she seemed highly proficient with it. Even still that posture she used to get past them allowed for her to make it seem like she was far faster than she actually is. Lowering her center of gravity enough with a sudden fall out of her opponents range of vision then increasing her speed in an instant to keep out of their line of sight, made it appear as if she vanished with pure speed.' His thought process was interrupted as he spun to avoid a large teen male who dropped from above, his face was obscured by the hood of his large brown robe, he also held a Nodachi firmly with both hands.
"Damn snooty Hyuuga bastard!" screamed the teen as he brought his blade down hard in a clear attempt to sever Neji's right arm.
His blade though was easily batted to the side by Neji's right hand as he turned his body, causing the blade to smash into the cement sidewalk snapping over a foot off of the cheap blade throwing the boys balance off. Stepping in he tapped the large boy on his forehead rendering him unconscious in a relatively painless way, until he fell face first on the concrete sidewalk with a sick 'CRUNCH'.
Then he had the newly revealed 'Naruto-Teichou' to contemplate. The shinobi obviously had a tremendous amount of hand speed and strength, he effortlessly caught those shuriken out of mid air before actually crushing them, and then tore into the earth with such ease. The force of the impact from the clumps of earth was out of the ordinary as well. Even if he was really short...
His head tilted up at the arrival of several new foes, 'Well these ones might prove enough of a challenge to make this interesting.' his impassive look turned amused as a girlish scream echoed within the schoolyards walls...
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AN: Ok so I had this in my head for a few days and decided to get it down. I had originally had much more written but decided to break it into two chapters. Some of you might recognize some of this being inspired and crossed over a bit with Kongou Banchou a badass manga. Anyways the second chapter continues here and should go on at least till the end of the test by Kakashi so fairly significantly longer than this one. Unless I choose to do three chapters at once...Sorry other stories aren't being updated but I've got a lot of crap on my plate and don't get much time. Time I do have is spent on video games...so when a new idea pops into my head I write what I have in mind as quick as possible or else other old stories wont get written.
Jutsu List:
Konoha Reppuu (Leaf Violent Wind): Is a D-Rank Taijutsu technique where the user moves low to the ground and performs a spinning kick to sweep their opponent off their feet.
Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique): Is an E-Rank supplementary Ninjutsu where the ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
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