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Kinderfeld,

Written by: Asterisk

Inspired by: Slipknot, and Silent Hill.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, and don't really want to. Ninjas... I
think not! >:O but that's beside the point. I always like to tear
holes in anime I don't like and transform them into anime I do like.
So that's why I'm writing this. (I don't own the snippet from
Slipknot's "the nameless" either.)

Warning: Gore (that's about it)

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1, the only thing you every really loved was Hate.

"Pathetic
(BENIGN)
Accept it (UNDERMINE)
Your opinion (MY
JUSTIFICATION)
Happy (SAFE)
Servant (CAGED)
Malice (UTTER
WEAKNESS)
No toleration
Invade (COMMITTED)
Enraged (ADMIT
IT)
Don't condescend (DON'T EVEN DISAGREE)
Desire
(DECAY)
Disappoint (DELAY)
You've suffered then, now suffer
unto me."
- Slipknot, "The Nameless"
  
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The pain of decay surged through
Naruto's now fragile frame as he tossed and turned in his hospital
bed. It was the night after the fight with Sasuke but something had
gone wrong. He was feeling warm everywhere, and more than just a
little fever. As if the fires of hell itself were eating on his
insides the quietness of sleep would not take him. What's going
on? He remembered Kyuubi giving him a huge rush of power, and now
he was afraid it wasn't without consequences.

Little did Naruto know, the walls
around him were turning to ashes. Around him decay set in with speeds
that would make a flamethrower look like a candle. The wallpaper
peeled off and dropped to the floor in a mushy mess. Red energy
flowed from Naruto's form and materialized in the room, spreading
across the walls like vines from a flower. They spread and mutated
until the room looked like a demon's lair. It hurts...

His breathing increased as he
clenched his chest. The floor was coming apart now, falling upward in
a strange paper like fashion. Beneath Naruto a long way down to a
fiery chasm. The sounds of laughing and loud roars made their way up
the hollow shaft to Naruto's room. Naruto began to feel them, their
hot breath and their dead souls. A chill of freight made its way up
to Naruto's brain as his eyes sprawled open in an instant.

"Grrrr." Naruto's eyes were
open wide as he turned his eyes over towards the door. The sound of
scrapping metal made its way down the hallway. Sometime during the
confusion the room had gone pitch black, illuminated only by the
moonlight from the window. "Rrrrrrrh." Naruto's eyes widened as
he sat up. The scrapping had stopped.

His eyes widened as a large blade
went straight through the wooden door. It was unmistakable being the
same sword that had given him so much trouble when he had become a
genin. It was Zabuza's sword. Naruto's heart raced as he melted into
fear. Everything went blank as the sword slashed the door in half,
and the black figure walked through.

"Long time..." Naruto's face
was contorted in pure fear as he looked at the face of the same
person that died over two months before. "no see." Zabuza turned
his face upward, and it was certain that he was no longer alive. His
eyes were clouded with a white haze, and blood was dripping from the
corners of his mouth, ears, and eyes. His back was still impaled by
the projectiles that was used against him, but it seemed he was still
strong enough to wield his huge sword. "Naruto..."

Naruto was freaked out enough.
Zabuza lunged for him, and he ducked, hearing the sword make contact
with the wall, which was now just a back frame. Zabuza grunted as he
attempted to pull the sword from its hold. As he did so with little
effort, Naruto made a break for the door. Zabuza slashed around his
back and caught Naruto's shoulder, making him cry out in pain.

Recoiling, Naruto caught himself on
the far side of the hospital wall and looked down the hallway. The
darkness prevented him from seeing very far, and he felt like there
was something evil waiting for him if he ran from Zabuza. But if I
stay here... I'll die! Naruto noticed Zabuza going for a thrust,
and jumped in front of the blade as it rammed through the wall.

However Zabuza let go of the blade
and wrapped his arms around Naruto's neck. Naruto felt how cold his
hands were and new that he really was dead, but he had came back for
some reason."It's your fault. Your hate killed me, and Haku...
someone I could have loved as a son... I'll never forgive you, even
in my next life in HELL!" Naruto flailed in his arms and attempted
to get loose. Zabuza held tight, and started to press down on
Naruto's neck. "Farewell Naruto, its too bad you won't be able to
join me in hell."

Naruto wanted to ask why, but the
pressure of the hands on his throat was not letting him say anything.
It would only be a few more minutes before he suffocated, and Zabuza
would have won.

Although Naruto felt one of
Zabuza's hands let go, and heard the sound of metal sheering. His
eyes widened as he felt the cold hard steel on the back of his head.
"This will only hurt for a moment." Tears snaked their ways down
his cheeks, he had fought Sasuke and lived, but before he could live
out his promise he was going to die to a resurrected Zabuza? "You
don't deserve to cry."

Naruto braced himself, but looked
upward in an instant. His eyes widened as he saw that the lights were
still there and since he was so close, he kicked upward as hard as he
could. Zabuza's sword was meant to cut his waist, and ended up
swinging too slow, sticking into the other wall and letting Naruto's
makeshift plan fall together. Naruto kicked the corner of the
lighting system, breaking it open and letting a shower of sparks fall
on Zabuza, who cried out in pain. "DAMN KID!"

Naruto didn't hang around, he took
off down the hallway, ignoring the sinking feeling in his gut. And
all the while he heard the scrapping of metal following him. Zabuza
wasn't going to leave him alone until he cut him in half. This is
a bad dream, a bad dream! It couldn't be real, because there
wasn't a technique that could do something like that! But I
wonder, maybe someone did find out how to wake the dead.

Naruto bolted out of the hospital
and froze. In front of him was a somewhat familiar face. Although he
couldn't be sure, but he suddenly got an urge to vomit
uncontrollably. His body began shaking as he walked over under
something like a duress. He stopped in front of an almost
unrecognizable body. It was pinned to the tree in front of the
hospital and was stained red everywhere. It's body was cut open in
five directions and there was a line of innards leading down to a
pool of them on the ground near it. The inside was hollowed out with
a scroll sticking out from it. While the rest of the body was covered
with needles. Its face was contorted in fear, and its eyes were
missing. But what was unnerving was the brown hair that was tied back
in a pony tail.

"N...No."

Naruto held his nose as he reached
into the body cavity to pull out the blood soaked scroll. He jumped
away and patted his stomach as he opened the piece of parchment. It
was a letter, but written by someone he didn't know. Another thing
was that he didn't know a damn thing of what it said. Most of
these characters I've never seen in my life, what language is this?
He couldn't read it in this condition, so he put it in his pocket,
and looked back over to the corpse.

It was then that he noticed what
was written above the body.

"Oh devil of Devils!

Will you never let us rest?

What do we have to do to kill you?"�

Somehow he knew that the
perpetrators were after him. And it was then that the front door
shattered open as metal slid on the concrete steps. Zabuza had found
his way out of the hospital and was looking straight at Naruto with a
crazed psychotic grin. "You found him huh?" Naruto noted how the
body's mouth didn't move as he answered, which made him a bit
suspicious. "It was your hatred that killed him. Is all you love
hate?"

"Don't compare me to some sort of demon!"
Tears continued to fall down his face. He couldn't stop them anymore,
it was much too late to try. "I don't like to see people hurt, your
not Zabuza." He heard Zabuza's chuckling and saw him pick the sword
up on his shoulder.

"Keep convincing yourself while
you can."

Naruto took off running and the
chase was on. He could hear Zabuza's sword scrapping against the
gravel as he ran. There was no distance gained or lost between them.
Naruto knew that he was just playing with him. The town was getting
devoured in darkness, and they were playing a game of tag. The price,
Naruto's life.

Naruto looked over to the other side of the street and
saw people running. There was something following them too. Upon
closer inspection they were insects. Although these were seriously
mutated. As soon as they latched onto a person they would drive their
stingers into them, and the person would fall, getting eaten alive by
the creatures, until not even their skeleton remained.

When Naruto rounded a corner his
eyes widened. Dead end. Naruto gritted his teeth as he turned
around to see Zabuza crowd the only way out. The walls were covered
with the man eating bugs, and Zabuza was the only alternative. I'm
really going to die! Zabuza advanced upon him, body glinting with
ash. He chuckled and brought his sword over his head, while Naruto
sunk down too his knees. Is there nothing I can do? He dipped
his head and prepared for the blow.

"Gah." Naruto turned upward to
see Zabuza's skin dissolving in front of his eyes. His eyes widened
as Zabuza backed away and turned his face up towards the sky. "I
was about to kill him!" The insects around him also began to die,
falling to the ground and then tearing apart and falling up to the
sky. Soon Zabuza did the same, and Naruto was left alone in the dark
alley.

The darkness slowly crept away, and
a soft rain began to patter down on the city. Naruto was staring
blankly in front of him, not really comprehending what had just
happened. But what Zabuza had said disturbed him. my hatred?

He couldn't think, all he could to
was fall down on his face, he didn't feel good at all.

To
be continued...

A/n: Alright, I set the stage, now
I'll get to work on the next chapter.
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