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Chapter List
- 8
- 9
- 10
Disclaimer: It
breaks my heart each time I have to admit that they don�t belong to me *pout*. Naruto belongs to Kishi-sensei unfortunately
(though I bet he has �property of Uchiha Sasuke� tattooed on his ass heh).

Chapter Summary: Naruto has a talk
with Tsunade. Afterwards Sasuke
comes over to his place so they can talk about an upcoming mission.

Again, many thanks to Kayoko for reading this through for
me! And OMG, this fic warranted fanart
from Sakura Boy! (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16765967) *dies with
happiness*

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�So how do you feel?�

Naruto looked up with a raised
eyebrow at Tsunade. He was perched at the edge of her
desk, cradling a sleepy Ton-Ton on his lap. Previously lost in his own
thoughts, the boy quickly remembered what she was referring to.

�Great! I mean, absolutely ecstatic!� he beamed, flashing a
wide smile towards her direction. �Hokage-dom, here I
come!�

Tsunade threw a lazy glance at him.
�Don�t be too enthusiastic. Becoming Hokage is not
all ceremonies and toasts. You�re going to have to take lessons in politics,
diplomacy, crisis situations, trading mana-�

�Yeah yeah,� he sneered playfully
at her as he shifted his legs at the edge of the desk, earning a sigh from the
pink animal on his knees. �You�re getting old, hag. It�s about time you give up
your high and mighty position to me before we have to surgically remove your fat
ass from the seat and fucking OW!�

Even his ninja-trained reflexes had not saved him from that
empty mug that had hurtled itself straight to his head. Startled from the sudden,
jerky movement, Ton-Ton leapt off his lap with a high pitched yelp and
scampered off to another chair. Naruto sulkily gave
the slug-tamer a dirty look as he rubbed his aching forehead.

The Godaime took a deep breath and
swiped a hand across her red face. A moment later, the scowl had vanished and
she allowed a small smirk instead. �Despite your insolence, I�m truly happy for
you, Naruto. I told you that your jounin
promotion would come soon,� the older woman said, pushing several papers aside.

The youth was making funny faces at the pig, unsuccessfully trying
to coax it back to his lap. He gave up and idly scratched his head. �And the
application is finally going through, yeah?�

�Yep. It�s easier to accept now
that you�re officially a jounin. I don�t suppose you
want to take on a genin team right away, huh.�

He shook his head, placing a serious expression on his face.
�Nah. Not yet anyway. I haven�t even gotten used to
the title.�

�Fair enough,� she said.

�So who else got promoted?� he asked.

�Sasuke.
I spoke with him this morning. Sakura should be up soon in a week or two if all
goes well. Inuzuka Kiba is
close too. He would have gotten the position sooner but he�s impulsive and
hotheaded like you are.�

�Oh please. I�m so much more better
than he is.�

Finally. Everyone else had been
promoted much more sooner. He knew that Team Seven was the most problematic
team of them all, each member plagued by his or her own troubles. He mentally
snorted. With exception of Sakura of course. What a
bright, hopeful girl with hardly any internal worries.

�What I�m hoping is that you won�t end up like that idiotic
sensei of yours,� Tsunade grumbled as she absently
attempted to make a paper boat. �Kakashi still owes
several reports which should have been finished a fortnight ago. And don�t get
me started on Jiraiya��

�Like you�re one to talk,� the blond cheekily scoffed. �You
and your sake and gambling��

This time, he managed to duck as another mug went flying
past him.

�Naruto-kun!
You should know better than to provoke her!�

Shizune walked into the office
with a hot cup of tea, most likely hoping to bribe Tsunade
in actually doing some paperwork. Soon Naruto found
the red mark on his forehead being fussed over by the dark-haired woman.

�Isn�t it great, Naruto-kun?� Shizune smiled cheerfully as she brushed a light layer of
healing chakra over his temple. �The new council member said such good words
about you this morning.�

He looked up curiously. �Did he? Wait, I think I saved his
son during a mission or something.�

�That�s right. You have such a golden heart, Naruto,� she said, drawing back from the teenager. In the
meantime, she tossed Tsunade�s pathetic looking paper
boat into the bin and sorted out some documents in front of the blonde. Shizune ignored Tsunade�s
grimace, flashing a second smile at Naruto instead.
�You�ll be a great Rokudaime.�

Naruto returned her smile,
gratefully. The assistant bid him goodbye and walked out of the office with Ton-Ton in her arms. Tsunade
sighed.

�Okay, piss off. I got work to do. A mission should be
coming up for you soon anyway.�

He was still smiling effortlessly when he left the room. Two
ANBU stood motionless like statues on either side of the main door. Only their
eyes moved, the heavy weight of their glares on his
shoulders as he passed them. But he continued to smile. He ran into Hinata and the poor girl blushed, as usual. Of course he
knew that she had a crush on him; sadly he didn�t feel the same way. He doubted
she�d feel the same if she found out what was inside him. Seeing her so
oblivious to his true nature made him sick so he made a quick excuse and
escaped. The more he descended the main flight of stairs of the tower, the more
his smile began to slip.

The crystal Hokage necklace was
itching terribly beneath his shirt. It attempted to burn through his skin, worm
itself into his conscience and fill it with guilt and remorse. Naruto�s smile disappeared completely. Then his nine-tailed
conscience kicked in and successfully pushed that guilt back.

The plastic smile returned the moment he stepped out into
the sun. It was a good thing that the itching had stopped; he would have felt
awful if he was forced to take the necklace off.

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He stood in front of Naruto�s
door, knuckles poised in front of the door. The first rap was practically
inaudible and when he made a movement to knock again, his hand faltered. Sasuke briefly glanced around. Naruto
had not changed address since they were children and the apartment building was
showing its age. The walls needed re-painting and the door itself sported a
large amount of deep scratches. One particularly stood out. A word beginning
with �m� but roughly scratched out with what seemed to be a kunai before
lacquered over like a half-hearted attempt to smooth over the abrasion.

He sighed again and as he was going to knock again, the door
opened. Naruto stood there, giving him a curious look

�What�s up, Sasuke?�

The dark-haired teenager masked his slight surprise expertly
and held up his other hand, bearing a scroll. �Mission.�

�Oh! Well come in then and ignore the mess. I would have
cleaned up if I knew you were coming over.� A soft snigger.
�Okay, maybe not.�

Naruto was clad in what were his
old trademark trousers, now crudely shorn into shorts. Even his plain black
t-shirt looked as if it had seen better days. They passed a tiny square space,
probably the living room. A wide array of weapons laid spread on the floor,
dirty rags and polishes strewn to one side. Sasuke
nimbly avoided stepping onto a monstrous looking shuriken and followed the
other boy into the kitchenette.

�Want tea?�

�I don�t drink ramen flavoured
tea.�

Naruto let loose a short bark of
laughter as he reached over the sink with a kettle. �Wow, Uchiha
humour. Nah, I�d imagine that ramen flavoured tea would taste disgusting. Green
tea okay with you?�

�Yeah sure.�

Naruto�s kitchenette was
surprisingly spotless. He gracefully settled himself on a chair and placed the
scroll carefully on the table. Further down on the clean surface was a bowl,
filled to the brim with various fruits, and another plate covered in peels. Interesting. The idiot actually eats healthy food.

The other boy deposited two steaming mugs on the table and
sat opposite from the Uchiha. He gestured at the
bowl, asking cordially. �Want some?�

�No, thank you.�

They both knew just how twisted and complex their
relationship was. It was a dangerous cocktail consisting of close friendship,
bitter rivalry and now was peppered with the nauseating prospect of them
becoming lovers. He didn�t know how to deal with it or the conflicting emotions
that accompanied it. Naruto�s behaviour,
however, was beginning to baffle him. That comment at the funeral was enough to
completely throw him off. Just how far was his teammate prepared to go?

�So what�s this mission about?� Naruto
inquired as he busied himself into devouring a pear.

�It�s an A-class. We are to travel to the borders of the Earth
country in a week from now, meet up with the client and��

Naruto�s teeth sank into the
fruit�s skin, viciously tearing away at the over-ripe flesh. There was a loud
slurping sound as he attempted to contain the flood of juices from trickling
down his chin and Sasuke instinctively looked up from
the scroll. He continued to speak in a robotic tone, having already memorized
the details.

�Shinobi from the Hidden Stone are
expected to interfere��

His eyes were trained onto the blond�s
mouth, small bits of the fruit clinging stubbornly to those lips before being
licked away. The core of the pear was discarded onto the plate and a second one
was picked up. He ate the brownish green fruit much more slowly, appearing
oblivious to the line of juice running down his chin as he clearly savoured the taste. It glistened in the light, almost
beckoning Sasuke to reach out and lick it off.

�We�re told to be careful. The Stone seem to have some
noteworthy jounin��

Naruto was holding a plump
strawberry this time. He sucked on it absentmindedly, the red tip disappearing
into the cavern of his mouth before finally biting into it. Then he frowned
briefly before speaking. The bitten fruit rubbed against his lips with each
word, causing them to shine. �So it�s just the two of us then?�

Sasuke�s gaze followed the red dribble
as it slowly journeyed around his teammate�s chin and escaped down that
delicate, squeezable throat like blood. Naruto wiped at
it with a finger only to lick it off. Dark pink little tongue
flicking out to catch a stray droplet. Vivid images in his mind
immediately followed and a familiar, throbbing feeling began to settle. �Uh yeah. The client
wanted discretion.�

�Blah. I hate those types. Don�t be
flashy! Pretend you�re not ninjas! Don�t bring attention to us even if you�ve
got ten people throwing kunai at you! I can tell you from now that the client�s
a prat already.�

Fuck you, Sasuke thought, what the
hell are you doing now?

Naruto had already finished with
the strawberry and was now slowly nibbling at a banana. The fucking fruit was a
bright yellow too to match his hair, firm, curved and long. It was the king of
sexual innuendos and the Uchiha was feeling his
resolve rapidly dissipate.

The blond had taken the scroll from Sasuke�s
hand and his bright blue eyes skimmed across the paper, mouth still wrapped
around the fruit�s length. The fleshy undersides of his lips dragging against
the pale, pliable surface and Sasuke wondered how
it�ll feel if the same action was repeated on his cock. His trousers tightened
in response. Enough was enough.

�What the hell�� the dark-haired youth gritted out as he
leaned forward, palms placed flat on the table, ��do you think you�re doing?�

Naruto froze and stared Sasuke with the banana still in his mouth. He looked
ridiculous. ��Eating?�

�That�s not eating, idiot. You�re sucking onto that damned
banana as if it was someone�s dick.�

The blond dropped the half eaten banana back into the bowl
before snapping. �You�re just horny. Go wank or fuck
some girl.� His tone turned bitter. �I�m sure they�ll all drop at your feet
like flies.�

Sasuke widened his eyes in
mockery, sneering. �What? Don�t want me to fuck you? I thought you did, or
that�s the impression I got.�

Naruto�s chair loudly screeched
against the tiles as he abruptly stood up. �I changed my mind. I wouldn�t want
the likes of you to do anything like that to me.�

He snorted. Reverse psychology eh? Fine, two can play that
game.

�Dumbass, the feeling is mutual,�
he muttered as he speedily rolled the scroll up before spitting out. �Have a
nice night.�

Naruto called out to him when he
was half way across the short hallway. He ignored it and yanked the front door
open. It was already dark outside; after all he hadn�t been in the greatest
hurry to see his stupid teammate in the first place. When Naruto
whined his name again, he twirled around in a fit of fury and promptly froze.
The other ninja was leaning against one of the walls, wearing a forlorn
expression on his face.

�I didn�t mean what I said earlier,� he choked out, tone low
and hoarse with slight embarrassment. It must have been a blow to his big ego
to admit something like that. �I mean, I trust you with my life. You should
know that.�

Sasuke scoffed and rolled his
eyes. �Whatever. You�re wasting my time.�

The blond youth�s appeared crestfallen. He thinned his
mouth, most likely in an attempt to restrain himself from throwing out another
insult. Then the blue eyes softened and his hand trailed down his chest.

The lips tugged at the red-stained corners, full of
suggestion. �Then how about I make it worthwhile?�

This was the Naruto he had to
beware of. Naruto was predictable when he acted out
his goofy masquerade. He always had been. Now�the blond�s
actions were much harder to pinpoint. Sasuke�s mouth
parted, seemingly in a daze. Get out
before you do something you�ll regret. His hand gripped the door knob. He
had to leave, right now. That tanned, slender hand that was capable of smashing
through solid rock was undoing those shorts before dipping straight in. Sasuke tore his eyes from the sight, forcefully looking at
the door. His knuckles were white, the metal bulb pressing uncomfortably; he
could imagine the ghastly bone cutting right through the skin if he
clenched his hand even more.

�Why won�t you look at me, Sasuke?�

Childish, bitchy voice that always
screamed for attention. How he�d love to gag him.

Despite his brain screaming not to, he did look. Naruto�s shoulders were pushed against the wall, lower body
thrust out towards him. Held in his hand was his half-erect cock, fingers
coddling it lovingly. The legs were spread, bare feet braced apart in a display
of masculinity. And on that damnable, irresistible face an impish smile.

It appeared as if Naruto had been
counting on it, placing all he had in this one moment to finally cause Sasuke to crack and give in. He knew that Sasuke would not resist the opportunity of dominating him,
especially when he was offering himself on a silver platter.

�Sasuke�� he crooned as he wet his
lips. �Don�t leave me alone here�please��

Naruto�s eyes danced with
mischievous light. The t-shirt shifted underneath his wandering hand, exposing
a bellybutton surrounded by thick black lines.

�Sasuke-e-e�I want you so
badly�stay with me��

The door slammed shut. But Sasuke
had not left. Instead he viciously locked the door with a loud click and chucked the scroll onto the
couch. He would teach that stupid blond brat a lesson. He�d make him cry, beg
and scream until those pretty blue eyes were red-rimmed with tears. The young
prodigy angrily kicked away a sheathed katana, sending it spinning wildly
against the other weapons as he strode past the other boy.

�Your bedroom. Now.�

Naruto obligingly followed,
looking quite pleased with himself. The mugs of tea
lay forgotten on the table.

TBC
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Hah, you all must really hate me now. Promise, next chapter
will definitely be smutty!

Devious Lil Devil: *chuckles* Like I stated earlier, Kyuubi�s speeches and such come to me naturally, oddly
enough. Thanks!

Hitomi No Ryu: Yep,
Naruto is climbing fast up that political ladder now
with Kyuubi advising him. Thank you for reviewing!

Bella8618: Heh, that�s what I do during class. Think about smutty Naruto situations all day long. I�m such a pervert. Thank
you for liking my story *smile*

Tenohikari: hehe Kyuubi rocks! thank you muchlies!

Scottishfae: You�re
right� Naruto does need a cookie..
my poor dear! *hands him a cookie* You
know� I�m really not cut out for plots. I really am not. Lol. But yeah you�re right,
there are a lot of possibilities I could expand on. I do intend to touch on the
points you mentioned! Thank you for your review hun *huggles*

Juli: Ahaha wow,
you�ve really fallen for my interpretation of the fox huh. I�m flattered!
Please though don�t give my fic so much credit!
Remember I write these chapters off the top of my head. I really do not have
any planning in them. But thank you!

Inazuma: *stares at you funny* nahhh I don�t. Stop giving my fic
so much credit, it really doesn�t deserve it! Thank you however, for your kind
words *smile*

Ayonoi: I should be ashamed, avoiding all the
sex and all. Hell even in this chapter, I leave you guys on a cliff hanger! You
must hate me *hangs head in shame* but seriously, the next chapter is going to
be pure smut, I promise! And that Kyuubi� mmm I fell in love with my own perception of him. Hah, that
last �fuck you� line I wrote as a last minute thing. And it�s alright being
obsessed with Kakashi-sensei� sadly,
I don�t think he�s going to turn up again. Again, thank you for taking the time
to review!

Sekra: Tell me about it� this was another
reason why I continued this one shot � I didn�t want to leave Naruto so weepy at the end (cause
to be honest, I love Naruto revenge fics). So out came this fic. Hrm.. marry
you? Heh� and then we can spawn our own little gay Naruto and Sasuke love children!
Thanks for reviewing!

Kayoko: Heh, I told you why I don�t pimp out my fic
on the lj communities! I�m so shy! (plus the whole lj cut things
confuse the hell out of me) KakaNaru side fic? *tries to edge away* it�s uh�. *tries to
become one with the background� * *hugs*

Ayoko: I know, what
a coincidence! *slams fist on the desk* There�s no plot dammit!
I suck at plots! It�s just a really drawn out PWP! *shifty eye look* But yeah,
don�t worry� no sparkling happy Naruto. He might be
happy but he sure as hell won�t be sparkling lol.
Thank you!

Ryuukotsusei: What a nice long review you left me!
*squeals* Nah I won�t hold anything against you if you write a story that�s
similar to mine� cause you know, me writing that concept of him saying stuff to
Naruto abt the village isn�t
highly original either lol. I must admit, that one
last line at the end was something I impulsively added cause
I was going to end it at him staring at the ants�till my beta remarked that it
wasn�t a very dramatic ending. So there you have it *grin* Thankies!

Ruby Lee: lol in a dilemma are you? Well whether Naruto
comes to his senses or not, is yet to be seen. You might be a bit disappointed
though- at this point with Naruto there�s no turning
back. But nah, he�s not going to go apeshit and
destroy the village. Thanks for taking the time to read the story *smile*

Evil: Yes� hawt SasuNaru PICTURES�!! I want
those framed on my wall *grin*. I was cracking up when I wrote that line too!
Thanks for the review!

Celticfx: haha well
there�s some sasunaru in this chapter� well the
actions leading up to it at least. Thanks!

Suicidal Skies: That
false �I love you� came as a whim in my head while I was watching the discovery
channel. Go figure. *bows*

Editor�s Crawl: Dear
lord, my eyes bugged out at your long review.

I think though you�re looking too deep into my story. I
really don�t have a moral for this fic to be honest �
other than the fact that Naruto realizes that he will
have to play dirty with the community if he wants to achieve his goals ie. Hokage. Kyuubi on the other hand, wants
his vessel to succeed in life and thus, slowly persuades him to start acting a
bit more forceful. Still, Naruto would never give
into Kyuubi; his ideals are too strong for that. He
would never destroy Konoha or kill people for no
reason. Kyuubi knows that well.

Still, Naruto doesn�t see it as �darkness�.
There is guilt, yes, remorse of course. But think about it this way: that
council member wasn�t important to him. He saw the council dude as a mean,
spiteful old man ready to die anyway. So why should he care if it�s wrong or
not? He knows it�s not exactly a nice world out there so he has to push someone
down in order to survive and get on top. Of course, you can also say that he�s
thinking �Okay, I�ve chosen the dark path. So fucking what? They drove me into
it.�

As for the Hinata factor, I hardly
mention her in this chapter and overall in the story because a) I don�t intend
on taking this fic far b)she
doesn�t suit the story and c)I never really thought of her as that important.
In this case, Naruto doesn�t really think about her
to really be influenced by what she thinks of him. He�s more wrapped up in Sasuke�and Sasuke isn�t exactly a
nice boy you take home to meet your mother either. So no influencial �I�ve looked up to you� talk there.

And Kyuubi and love�well, he
understands love but he can�t relate to it nor does he care about it. He�s just
giving an example to Naruto. He�s a demon after all,
he will never be loving.

Anyways, sorry for the long review answer and I�m sure that
it doesn�t make sense lol. But THANK YOU for your
analysis, I really do appreciate it!

Jadetiger: hah, I�m glad! Thanks!

Gothic_marshmallow: Ahhh I�m
afraid there�s no smut in this chapter� just a prequel. But chapter ten will be
smut chapter, I promise!

Kai: lol yeah� Sasuke was just�
flabbergasted. Thanks!

Macy: Oh dear,
don�t let me fic be the cause of you being late for
school! And yes, a seductive Naruto is a very hot
one, I have to agree! I�ll write more of him like that! Thanks for reviewing
*smile*

Gitona: lol yes, it
was a bit odd. Glad you liked it.

Sansty_san: hehe it�s
okay if you�re being demanding. Thank you!

Ghonchi: Heh, wow
sounds almost as fucked up as my dreams! Wish I could involve Naruto characters in them though. And yes, I love Gantz. Love it, love it. Took me forever
to get the entire full uncut series. Sorry no lemon here *chuckles*. Thanks!

Multifaceted Tune: Glad
I asked you about the story behind your nickname, it
was really an interesting read! And yes it did made sense. Sorry to hear about
your mum being overbearing � trust me I used to do the same thing myself. Still
do it now with my gran *quickly presses alt-tab �Yes gran I�m studying for uni�* Anyways,
chocolate is chocolate and I�ll take it in any form! Ta very much *smile*

Rika: *bows
profusely* does that mean that I have a nicely sized following of loyal fans
now? *eyes glitter* hee hee.
*cuddles Kyuubi plushie* mmm

Loveforboysineyeliner: Ohhh� thank
you for adding this to the rec section! Thank you!

Toki Mirage: Glad
you love my story!

Taylor: Hehe. Well
think about it this way: Kyuubi plays on Naruto�s feelings by bring up his low self-esteem, laying
it out on the open. Thus when Naruto is vulnerable,
he moves in as the �comforter�. Makes sense now? Mind you, he isn�t trying to
help Naruto get back at Sasuke�what
he�s trying to do is mold Naruto into something more
to his standards. Sasuke to him is an obstacle that Naruto has to get over if he ever wants to proceed. Thanks
for the review! *bows*

Maya: Yes, I
agree with you! Thank you!

SakuraBoy: Oh boy, I was running around in
circles with this big smile on my face when you did that complimentary fanart for me. This is the first time I�ve ever gotten any fanart. I was so gobsmacked!
Thank you, thank you!!

PerriotLeFou: That is of course, if there is any
rampage at all! Or maybe there is�Naruto rampages Sasuke *evil mischievous look* heh
heh. And Kyuubi�s
description wasn�t anything special at all! Quite common in
fact. Thank you for reviewing *grin*

Blisblop: Awww� Sasuke can run all he wants, Kyuubi
will catch up with him anyways *giggle*

Demon: Thanks tonnes for the review!

Akuma_river: Plot? Where do you see the plot?
*whips out binoculars* Thanks for the review!

Dvana: You know, Naruto will remain my favourite
too. There�s just something so likable about him, so much potential and so much
character! I mean there�s so much you can do with Sasuke�
but Naruto? You can expand him and expand him and
expand him. He�s really *chuckles* playable. Thank you for liking my Kyuubi!

Tonya: Well I
suppose I can�t please everyone *smile* Still, if you don�t like their characterizations
now, you will be disappointed in the future. Nevertheless, thank you for the
review!

Bunnicle: hehe you
know, it could be SasuNaru in the end� or NaruSasu� or hell even both! Glad
you enjoyed it!

Vermillion Spiral: *blushes*
Glad I could please you with my fic. *curtseys*

Aishiteru Koinu: Really?
My story isn�t THAT suspenseful you know! Anyways, an evil psychotic Naruto is a sexy Naruto *clicks
tongue*

SnyperKat: Well better late than never! Glad you
enjoyed the chapter *giggle*

TenshiKaitou: Eeep!
*dodges smelly sock* You�re going to hate me! So
sorry! No sex in this chapter either!
You know, I always noticed that Naruto has
random mood swings in the anime�one he�s acting goofy..
and then he goes all serious.. and
then goofy again. Thanks for reviewing!
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