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BITCHED!	By : modeac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 103387 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 5
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BITCHED! CHAPTER 8: WORLD OF PAIN 1: EARTH
AUTHORS NOTES
AU take involving characters and concepts from the Naruto 6: Road To Ninja movie. The timeline is just before the Invasion of Pain arc as the supposed timeline of the movie makes no sense.
Reality 1 is canon Konoha, Reality 2 is alternate world. This fic is a Naruto/AU!Hinata pairing.
Chapter contains Rape, Mind Control, Futa, BDSM, Slavery, Violence and… 'inappropriate' uses of jutsu. Naruto/OC pairing (kind of).
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.
Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip. It may be a few minutes, it may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Hinata in the street.
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There I will answer question raised by this chapter and maybe give insights or at least ideas on where this fic is going.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non profit-I am making no money from this.
REALITY 2, KONOHA…
A painfully hot summer sun had set and the Founding Clan District main thoroughfare seemed conspicuously empty in the darkness illuminated only by golden lanterns gently swaying in the cool breeze. The environment did not help the nerves of Haruno Sakura standing next to a seemingly hungover Kato Shizune, withering under the lavender yet deathly gaze of Hyuga Hinata in front of the main gates of her families ancestral compound. The heiress hadn't allowed them in for some reason.
So far Sakura had explained (after getting sidetracked by falling into AUSasuke's bed) to this worlds fifth Hokage Tsunade about being from another world. A claim confirmed after a not very pleasant mind-walking session from this universes T&I Corps.
Now she and a very different version of Shizune had finished explaining it to the also very… different version of Hinata.
Sakura nervously studied the uncanny figure; her hair was subtly different from her worlds Hinata; brushed differently and tied into a tight ponytail that ran down to the small of her back.
Her demeanor was radically different; her lovely features seared with a disdain Sakura couldn't have imagined on Hinata's face previously, her body language practically snarled contempt at her.
Her clothing was disconcerting too; gone were the baggy, unflattering outfits the mousy Hyuga she knew wore. Instead this young Kunoichi wore a sports bra that Sakura's teal eyes struggled not to stare at due to the dimensions it stretched to thanks to its contents. Her thicker, but still feminine arms were bare except for well-worn sparring gloves, her wide hips were wrapped in spandex shorts so tight they looked sprayed on to bare flesh and her feet were bared.
Sakura felt herself uneasy in the stunning woman's presence for various reasons.
'Is Naruto in there? Why didn't Hinata tell Naruto we're out here?'
Her heart stopped as she saw Hinata's pupilless eyes go wide. Sakura briefly wondered if the Hyuga was going to collapse into hysterics.
"Hinata-" She began.
Faster than the other world Godaime's apprentice could see, the Hyuga lashed out, immobilizing both visiting women with taps to the forehead. The technique was part Gentle fist, part genjutsu. It immobilized them, freezing them in trances.
She hissed to them;
"You did what you were supposed to. Leave and report back to your masters. Do not return."
The pair stood and blinked a moment. Then raced off, following their programmed instructions.
Hinata stood, trembling with rage… betrayal…
"Menma... no, Na-ru-to..."
Chakra rose and spewed from her body like a cross between a blaze and a hurricane.
Her much-feared eyes flicked about as she thought about her next actions; unfathomable fantasies of pain and terror took form in her mind…
-X-
Inside; Hyuga secret library…
Oblivious to the gathering storm surrounding him, Uzumaki Naruto had deactivated the shadow clones he had tasked with reading Hinata's families scrolls- the information overload had knocked him out- literally and his head still hurt.
'I wonder if the fox bastards healing abilities saved me from brain damage- assuming it hadn't stunted my brain growth when I was a kid…' The blond knew he wasn't smart like… certain people he knew.
Now he sat cross-legged on a tatami mat inside the fortress-like repository of knowledge, reading a scroll about advanced chakra control.
He groaned and rubbed his cerulean eyes for the thousandth time. 'Scrolls are evil…'
When he opened his eyes, Naruto saw a few feet in front of him, a bowl of food; pork ramen with extra pork!
His blue eyes blinked. He looked around in panic.
'Did Hinata leave it?! I should thank her!'
"Hinata… sama! Dono? Hime? ...thank you for the food! It looks awesome!"
He bowed several times to the door. And the walls. Like a sycophant.
Smiling widely, he dug into the meal.
BANG!
A flashbomb inside the food detonated! The blinding flash seared his retinas, making him feel like Katon jutsu had struck behind his eyelids! The wave of noise and pressure near ruptured his supersensitive eardums, near-overwhelming him with agony!
He roiled in such extreme pain, that he didn't notice the several black figures blur around him, or the one that struck him on the back of his neck driving the pain-wracked teenager into unconsciousness.
-X-
Unknown place, unknown time later…
"Uuhhh…. Wha…?"
Uzumaki Naruto roused to consciousness sluggishly. He felt cold and tired and his limbs hurt. In particular his wrists, arms and shoulders reported severe distress.
His vision blurred into focus. His stinging eyes widened and sleep was blasted away as he established several things;
1/ He was in an unfamiliar and menacing place.
2/ He was dangling from the ceiling on chains
3/ He was naked. Again.
"WHA!? WHA?!" His head shot around in panic, seeing only cold grey walls of smooth stone with black scrawl that may have been fuuinjutsu and a rusty metal grate flooring. Eerie green crystals in the ceiling emitted the only light in the grim place he was in.
"Hinata?! Hinata-Sama? Hinata-Hime? Dono? Hinata-goddess…?" He called out.
'What did I do now?!' He sweated.
CRRREEEEEEAKKKK!
He almost shrieked as a door that he swore wasn't there before (hidden by genjutsu?) creaked open on clearly reinforced hinges. Silent as a ghost, in stalked a figure Naruto squinted at to recognise as a woman.
'Stalked' was the perfect word to describe her motion. While shinobi (except for the stupid and crazy ones) tended to be quiet, the way this woman soundlessly glided across metal grating he could see was designed to make footsteps echo was quite unnerving.
She wore the distinctive unflattering black and grey gear of ANBU with a shark mask encircled by a black hood that concealed her ears and hair. With no furniture in the room for reference it was difficult to gauge her height- though she was strikingly tall. The clothing made her body shape indistinct.
A voice, distorted to an inhuman tone by some technique but still emanating cold, sharp menace he acquainted with angry women, rumbled out from beneath the sinister grey mask.
"I am Same, ANBU of Konohagakure Torture and Interrogation corps. We are aware you are not Namikaze Menma. You will tell us who you actually are, what your mission in Konoha and your intentions with Hyuga-sama were. You will answer my questions truthfully. False answers will be punished. Late answers will be punished. Silence will be punished."
The declaration was delivered coldly. Yet not quite mechanically, there was something else in her voice...
His inner inquiry was cut off as Naruto realized every part of him hurt; his wrists were bruised, he couldn't feel his fingers, his shoulders felt like they were going to snap off, his back hurt terribly, he couldn't feel his feet, his ankles bruised. His skin felt cold to the bone and he shivered, lightly rattling the chains that held him off the metal floor.
Everything hurt so bad he just wanted to retreat back to unconsciousness. A thought occurred and Naruto spoke, his tongue felt large, throat desert dry;
"Where's Hinata?"
"She is being questioned to ascertain whether she compromised the village. We will begin your questioning now."
Naruto was about to tell the bitch where to shove her question when the masked kunoichi stepped forwards and placed her fingers on both sides of his head. Blinking in shocked confusion, he swore he saw a flash of red inside the eyeholes of the mask now mere cm in front of his face.
Then.
He fell.
The room vanished. Everything turned red, he fell an impossible height, and kept falling…
In the real world, the ANBU codenamed Same; actually Uchiha Suzune, Tokubetsu Jonin of Konoha Torture & Interrogation Force, synched her unyielding chakra with her subjects and engaged in Ame-no-Uzume, her variation of the dreaded Tsukuyomi technique…
As the pairs chakra intertwined, both sets of sensory organs beheld as the room transformed; everything disappeared, walls, roof, floor… everything except for Naruto's thick, chakra-supression-fuuin sealed chains that now spread onwards vanishing into rips in space that hissed menacingly, and Same who stood before him, a huge, demonic red moon shining behind her. Almost everything had turned red, all colors had changed to an infernal mix of red, black with white outlines of forms and people.
"Prisoner… you will now be asked questions." Same began, her voice echoing inhumanly.
Naruto squirmed and thrashed against his chains, he bit into his cheek trying to break the obvious genjutsu.
In the real world it was a wasted effort, the ANBU interrogator was not just reaching into his mind with Sharingan genjutsu, but was dosing him with several hallucinogens via the gloves she was massaging his temples with. Furthermore, she had attached a sealing jutsu onto him that constantly 'recalibrated' the chakra signal of her genjutsu to prevent counter illusion techniques from working.
"Your counter-Genjutsu skills are pathetic. Look at me." Commanded Same, and Naruto's eyes, against the prisoners will, snapped open. The blue orbs stayed open no matter how hard the rapidly panicking teenaged male tried to close them.
Naruto did a double take as to his left he saw a figure, another Naruto.
'A clone? I didn't make any clones…'
He realised there wasn't only one other Naruto. He looked about and saw... dozens, maybe hundreds of Naruto's! All naked and restrained in a bewildering assortment of ways... he locked his eyes on the closest one who looked as terrified as he...
A Naruto (was he the real one?!) fearfully looked about identifying himself in a …. crabwalk position?! His hands and feet were buried up to their forearms and shins in quicksand that had hardened like concrete! The ninja struggled and found he couldn't free himself. His attempts to summon chakra didn't work either. His naked body was positioned with his torso and pelvis pointing towards the… endless red, white and black. There was no sky. His cock and balls dangled between his widely spread and uncomfortably bent legs. He was shamefully exposed and totally unable to fight back or defend himself in this frightening and humiliating position.
He saw other Naruto's… clones? All restrained in similarly humiliating and disabling positions… and other Same's looming over them, some on platforms above, below, all around him at all angles defying gravity!
"?!"
Speaking of, Naruto looked up over his fear-heaving chest to see a pair of long legs planted on either side of his torso, turned away from him giving the trapped teen a view of the strikingly tall woman's back.
Before he could yell defiance at the woman's rear…
She sat on his face!
Not softly either, she slammed down on his face hitting him with bruising force that drove his head down, straining his neck! Naruto cried out feeling the voluminous peach-shaped ass press down on his face compacting his features!
"HEY! G-GET OFF!" He yell/mumbled through compacted nasal passages and covered mouth.
Naruto frantically tried to escape the ass-smothering by twisting his head about. The posterior pressing down on him, reacted, locking the attached legs around Naruto's neck and jaw and holding him in position as the red-faced Naruto felt the shockingly powerful thighs and glutes enwrap his face.
The Jinchuriki sputtered and mumbled through soft buttocks and thighs squeezing his face, he could barely see red light past the toned glutes smothering him.
She put seemingly her entire body weight on his face pushing down, squeezing his features, straining his neck muscles.
Then…
The rump pressing down on him liquefied! It became like mud and poured down over Naruto's face covering his eyes!
'WHAT THE FUCK!'
His shock and disgust became fear, then terror as he felt the mud force its way into his nostrils! Then into his ears! He again attempted sending chakra to his limbs and began thrashing in the ANBU's leg lock trying to break free, to no avail.
He tried holding his breath, but then…
Another Naruto- one above and upside-down to the smothered Naruto's viewpoint- saw the mudbutted ANBU straddling the Naruto beneath(?) raise a gloved hand. A mitten of ominous black stone- like obsidian- grew over the limb. Then it swung down like a club and crushed down onto the Earth-trapped Naruto's exposed cock and balls!
"MMMAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGG!"
Naruto screamed in agony! His mouth opened and mud cascaded in, past his teeth, over his tongue, against his tonsils triggering spastic, ineffectual gagging! Then down his throat into his stomach where the chakra infused illusionary mud displaced his stomach!
'CAN'T BREATH!CAN'T BREATHE!CAN'T-'
Naruto's heart beat at inhuman speeds thanks to terror and pain burning his life-vital oxygen supply faster!
Just when Naruto's lungs burnt from oxygen depletion and his encased head spun from dizzying stars even though blinded by ass mud, the soft, earthy river broke off. Naruto felt the horrifying ooze retract from his airways and ears, pull back from his face and reform into the appealingly soft toned buttocks that now pressed and twitched against his face, teasingly.
The unnaturally enveloping rear end sat up off Naruto's face long enough for the red-faced blond to gulp in several desperately needed gasps of air.
"WH-WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY?! YOU-ULP!"
The crimson-faced teen turned what in the real world would have been purple as he swallowed down a feeling of vomit as he realized the mud that went down his throat remained in his stomach! It roiled within him and felt as heavy as a boulder!
Naruto pulled his head away from the torturers backside only for something hard and blunt to grow from the floor and push his head back into the towering woman's butt-vice.
She sat back down again and repeated the mudslide attack on Naruto's face, except when he held his breath this time his torturer leaned forwards, (her upper body still human) reached out with her gloved palms and began stroking Naruto's stomach, seemingly in teasing spiral patterns.
SKLUTTTCCCCHHH!
Any pleasure from the stroking act was incinerated as the mud inside Naruto's stomach came alive violently! The mud expanded in volume, stretching Naruto's stomach past human limits, forcing its way into Naruto's intestines and further and displacing (fatally in real life), his inner organs!
As Naruto again screamed into the mud flow atop his face, allowing yet more mud into his body, his tightly muscled belly swelled horribly, like a balloon filling with air! Or a super-high speed pregnancy!
When Naruto's gut was on the tip of exploding, the earth torturer again pulled back, leaving several hundred pounds of soft, wet, earthy matter inside Naruto's traumatized digestive tract. He vibrated in pain and horror, unable to control the spastic shudders wracking through him.
The depraved woman would repeat this grotesque procedure four more times. After the fourth combo mud drowning-belly burster jutsu, the depraved ANBU abruptly got up off the spasming Naruto's face. She stepped down over Naruto's belly, now shockingly bulging nearly nine inches away from his previous abdomen shape like the man was very heavily pregnant! Her long legs gliding and her hips swaying in a manner that dozens of Naruto's, including the near-mud-drowned one cursed himself for watching.
THUMP!
Without warning, she slammed her lower body down onto the aberrant swell that was Naruto's stomach! The force drove an explosion of mud from the teens mouth as he vomited up several gallons of soft, wet earthy matter!
"BOOOOAARRRRKKKK!"
The vomit of mud exploded from his mouth, poring back down and covering his face; spattering over his pain-wracked features, mixing into his hair and into his tear-stinging eyes.
"Ah. Ah. Ah-Ha. Y-you bitch..."
The silent ANBU towering over him unbuckled her pants, then pulled them down to her thighs bearing a not-out-the-ordinary-pelvis to him.
Across her pelvis, above her light black pubic hairs and vaginal opening, suddenly grew a bulge. A bulge that then drooped, stretching downwards like a shaft or tube. From the base of the shaft two large sphere shapes formed-like two balls being blown up. The weird shaft tip split open at its center and Naruto screamed in disbelief, eyes bugging out, exploding all feelings of his recent mud impregnation and evacuation from his mind as he realised what he was looking at;
The tall, shapely woman had grown a cock!
"Wh-wh-what? The fuck…"
Standing over Naruto's head again, she apparent hermaphrodite grabbed Naruto's face on both sides. Pressing painfully into precision pressure points on the quivering blond's face and jaws, she forced his jaws open! Crudely, she forced the newborn male organ into the grossly astonished, babbling blonde's mouth, it easily slid over the thick, lightly bubbling mud inside the Jinchuriki's mouth.
Naruto emitted a muffled cry of refusal as he felt a cock scape over his tongue, push the mud around his mouth placing pressure on the roof of his oral cavity, before battering against his tonsils triggering another round of spastic gagging. Not caring in the slightest of Naruto's risk of choking Same thrust her hips forwards, driving her new creation past her subjects tonsils and down his throat, feeling the surge of power as she generally did when performing her much-loved duties as an Interrogator.
Squeezing into his face with both hands, deforming his features, Same began carelessly riding atop Naruto's face, pushing her long, hard dick down the teen males mudslide opened throat, whilst her crassly oversized balls lewdly slapped against his mudstained chin!
Finally resurfacing from his disbelief and horror of being orally raped, Naruto decided to bite down!
The cock inside his mouth liquefied as his teeth dug in! Yet more liquid slid down Naruto's throat, his terror-filled blue eyes looking right up at the torturer's masked face as she violated his throat.
She reached back behind her, keeping her eyes (he thought) locked on the violated subjects face, and Naruto started when he felt her take his own cock in her shockingly cold grip.
He flinched again when he felt something cold and runny wrap around his cock root, just beneath his balls.
Yet another Naruto spied a ring of mud spread around the orally violated Naruto's cock, then contract and harden becoming a granite-hard cock ring!
The Naruto being orally raped grimaced as he felt the cock ring (he remembered the horrible experience from Hinata) take hold of his manhood and squeeze. And get tighter. And tighter!
"MMMMMPPHHH! MMMNNNOO!"
As he screamed, the torturer atop began once again face-fucking him, her unnatural cock rehardened to continue raping his mouth as the cock ring squeezed down crushing muscle, blood pumping body parts in demonic pain. Twisting the male organ freakishly until…
It exploded!
As in, the pressure of the blood trapped above the cock ring in the cock tip, increased until blood vessels burst, muscles ruptured and Naruto's cock simply… exploded like a chunk of meat he once saw Kakashi-sensei use as a target for Jutsu practice!
The was no word to describe the pain Naruto experienced as he was castrated via crush pressure! Or the agony it caused to the original Naruto as the memories of the experience were transferred back when the clone was finally allowed to dispel!
And that was only one Naruto clone!
Of dozens...
-X-
Outside of Ame-no-Uzume...
Back in the real world, Hyuga Hinata watched via Byakugan as Uchiha Suzune continued working on the imposter she'd taken into her home.
'Wonder how long it'll take Suzu-chan to break that bastard... and when she does... it'll be my turn with the cocksucker..'
She continued staring at the interrogation, fists so tight her nails drew blood from her palms, jaws so tight her teeth threatened to break, tears pooling in her doujutsu-wielding eyes.
-X-
CHAPTER 8 END
AUTHORS NOTES
Ame-no-Uzume; In real-life the Shinto goddess of dawn, an inventor of dances and comedy, whose positive self-image and quick thinking helped bring the sun goddess Amaterasu back to the world. In this story it is a original jutsu OC Uchiha Suzune develops. The technique is similar in effect to Itachi's canon Tsukuyomi, however it requires sustained physical contact to function and is easier to break if it wasn't for the Fuuinjutsu component that reinforces it. The advantages are much lower chakra drain and no cumulative permanent damage to the Sharingan utilising it.
Uchiha Suzune; Original character. Somewhat based on the character Horikita Suzune from Anime Classroom Of The Elite. Was an instructor for Hinata when she briefly served in the ANBU in the AU. Tokubetsu Jonin with speciality in Genjutsu and Fuuinjutsu.
Title "Earth"; I have decided to do a torture scenario for Naruto's clones for each of the Naruto elements (Doton, Suiton, Raiton, etc)- it was supposed to be a brief overview for each, but i found the unique grotesqueries of an illusionary world irresistible and to do all of them in one chapter would waste an invaluable opportunity...
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