Naruto the Battousai | By : kerrde06 Category: Naruto > General Views: 3925 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
A/N: I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed so far. It
really does inspire me to write more. I am glad nobody seemed to dislike my
lemon in the previous chapter since it was the first I had ever written. This
chapter will end the first arc of my story as its ‘prologue’. The next chapter
will take off with the academy and follow events from the anime with my own
spin on them. I am not sure for how long I will stick with events from the
anime but eventually I will start the final arc of the story which will be pure
me with a few influences from other fics.
The day finally came a few days before the one month mark
when Naruto need to return. They had received word that the Shogunate forces
were on the move.
The rebel forces had been on high alert for some time and were ready to move
at a moments notice. The Generals each gave their forces the order to move out.
As Naruto charged, keeping his hand on the hilt of his sword
and dispeling his gravity seal, he commanded his troops with last minute orders
adjusting to the enemy attack.
When the forces clashed it was utter mayhem.
Reaching his first opponent Naruto drew his blade slicing the man’s chestUpon awakening Naruto was met with an empty battlefield.
Looking around Naruto saw that to his side his sensei had plunged his sword
into the ground.
A/N: Ok this was the final chapter for the first arc
of the story. Next chapter Naruto returns to the village. So what did you think
of the chapter? This was my first fight sequence and was not as good as I hope
my next one will be since I was unable to do a one on one battle with another
strong opponent. Naruto killed all those people so easily because they were
only swordsmen and average swordsmen to top it off. Shinobi are a lot stronger
in my opinion with just a few exceptions. Sorry about the spelling and grammar
but my spell check is on the fritz again right after getting it fixed. This
chapter was only a little over 4,000 words since I had trouble writing it.
Please remember to review.
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