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BITCHED!	By : modeac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 103387 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 5
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BITCHED CHAPTER 7: THE PINK VIPER
AUTHORS NOTES
AU take involving characters and concepts from the Naruto 6: Road To Ninja movie. The timeline is just before the Invasion of Pain arc as the supposed timeline of the movie makes no sense.
Reality 1 is canon Konoha, Reality 2 is alternate world. This fic is a Naruto/AU!Hinata pairing.
Chapter contains mind control, femslash, slavery, toys and… 'inappropriate' uses of jutsu. Sakura/Shizune pairing (kind of).
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.
Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip. It may be a few minutes, it may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Hinata in the street.
There is a Forum Review and discussion thread for Bitched! on the AFF Forum;
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There I will answer question raised by this chapter and maybe give insights or at least ideas on where this fic is going.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non profit-I am making no money from this.
Konoha, Reality 1...
Two figures stealthily moved through the streets of the village hidden in the leaves, hidden under a cloaking genjutsu, actually not uncommon since they had entered Konoha's Akasen; the Red Lantern District, an infamous square block boasting a staggering concentration of prostitution and sex-oriented businesses, such as sex shops, strip clubs, and adult theaters. While the services on offer were nowhere near as… expansive as places such as Tanzaku Town, the district had developed an international reputation for providing relief for the stresses of Shinobi life.
While definitely not expected of "The child of heroes", Haruno Sakura had made use of these services in her own universe many times. Shinobi life demanded methods of coping; some indulged in drink and drugs, some burnt out and became emotionally deadened, some offed themselves, some lost themselves in memories. Sakura just fucked discreet strangers (male and female) and moved on with her business.
Moved past being reminded every single day of her life that her parents were dead.
That everyone resented her because she was at a level they could not reach.
That both her Genin team mates and her sensei died in front of her eyes before she was old enough to have figured out a fucking bra.
Focusing on more 'positive' memories, Sakura remembered disguising herself as Hinata and tricking Menma into coming here once. She paid a ton of cash she had looted from a Yakuza opium racket she had broken up and bought eight different hookers. She had then had the prostitute posse pass Menma around claiming that "Only by being with so many lesser women would he understand how good he had it with her".
She still couldn't believe the idiot bought that- how hard did White-eye iron cunt kick him in the head?
When the Byakugan bitch found out (with Menma balls deep in woman no 6- the Uzumaki vitality was no myth apparantly) the Byakugan beast had committed a rampage that made the Kyuubi attack years earlier look like a minor inconvenience. She had mercilessly hunted Sakura down and tried her hardest to slaughter the pinkette. And an entire ANBU team who apparently thought she was under an insanity genjutsu caused by evil invaders.
She led the genjutsu-swayed Hokage assistant Kato Shizune by the hand, to any passers-by they looked like a middle-aged man and woman (Shizune was the man) out for a stroll.
They found the building Sakura was looking for.
Two storeys high, though Sakura knew there were several subbasement levels, the building was of a dark oak colour and the windows were covered by blood red curtains. A chestnut coloured wooden sign with the name 'Bird Of Paradise' in elegant carved in writing.
'Hope this place hasn't changed…'
-X-
They descended a stairwell and knocked on the large thick wooden door.
Hearing a sound of a large wooden block being moved, a moment later the door opened revealing an appealing-looking woman Sakura didn't recognise; tall, purple haired, dark-eyed. She greeted them and inquired their business in a tone that made the bisexual Haruno wet.
'I'll fuck her another time. I have plans for my 'guest'
Upon entering, Sakura inhaled deeply, detecting the sweet perfumes and other relaxing scents in the air expertly measured out, synthesized and emitted to soothe and reassure their customers.
Sakura handed one of the service staff a list of 'tools' she required and informed the staff she was here to play with her associate in a private setting.
She handed over half of the fee up front. She recognised the matron; Shibzakura Akane, a former Toukubetsu Jonin specialising in Genjutsu. If anyone tried cheating a fee using illusions she would know. And brutal repercussions would follow as she recognised an elderly-looking woman dusting; Yamamoto Chika; an ex-ANBU in her world famous for concealed blades and a fighting style that merged her families earlier Samurai background with ANBU close-quarters assassination style. Sakura could see despite the woman's well concealed movements she was likely as deadly in this world as hers.
Following a cup of tea while preparations were made, the pair were escorted to their room.
-X-
Now alone in a room lit only by dim candlelight. Sakura sat on a chair watching as the mind-controlled Shizune stripped.
The jutsu she utilised was 'The suppressive light', a touch based genjutsu Sakura had cast on Shizune designed to take away the free will of the victim, making them submissive to the caster. It was originally developed to be used for interrogation and the original version was easily countered, Sakura's self-developed version however was near unbreakable and lasted for hours without leaving memories in the victims mind.
She had many other techniques besides illusion and mind control arts, as she was about to show her captive.
Sakura reached into a bag of dirt she had brought from a gardening store on her way over here. She removed a handful of plain, ordinary earth in her palm.
Drawing upon her quite formidable reserves of chakra, she emitted it. The source of all ninjutsu flowed into the dirt particles. Now 'aware' of the earths nature, her chakra became solid and transmuted into earth. To the unknowing eye it looked like the earth in her palm was growing, but that wasn't all, drawing from her vast knowledge of Earth style techniques she compressed the earth, shaping it into an almost cone shape, she also hardened it, making the once loose, shifting soil as hard as granite.
When she was finished in her hands was a jutsu-created dildo; shaped like a human cock, but surely too large (though White-eyed Ogre's man-whore Menma came close). It was approximately twelve inches in length, with a dark brown smooth shaft spanning over an inch wide all across, ending in one end shaped like the mushroom head of a male penis and the other a simple flat cone base.
Sakura handed the earth-style dildo to the kneeling Shizune, who took it without complaint.
"Lick it. All over." She commanded flashing a finger at the newly created sex toy.
Somewhat glassy, dark eyes bugged out staring at the grotesque thing now in front of her face. Shizune began dragging her tongue up and down it. Sakura had made it rock solid so no dirt deposits were left on her tongue but Sakura knew from experience that the perverse creations of hers didn't taste nice. She smiled trying to imagine the Shizune from her world doing this depraved act.
"Put your tits around it." She commanded.
Shizune opened her dark robe, pulled up the ninja mesh beneath, pulling open her bra (briefly annoying Sakura on how many clothing layers she wore), finally revealing her bared breasts. Lewdly, she pressed her breasts around the stone phallus while continuing to lick and suck on the head.
Sakura's fantasy hit a bump as her eyes kept measuring Shizune's disappointing rack.
The medics breast were a finely respectable c-cup- and Sakura didn't get the appeal of women who looked they activated fucking Suiton jutsu inside their mammary glands or some variant (milk-tank no jutsu like that smirking blonde bimbo from Kumo). But this version of Sato Shizune was a little far away from her fantasy target (who she would never go after in her own world as she'd be turned into paste by the often-violent Hokage assistant).
Sakura ordered Shizune to disrobe, turning to sit in a chair watching as the shapely medic undressed one piece at a time.
The Pink Viper leered at her body and interrupted the undressing woman several times to perform acts like bending over or squeezing her tits together much to the pink and black haired perverse delight.
She ordered the brainwashed medic to get up close and personal and perform a lapdance. The woman was no geisha or professional dancer, but her strong hips, athletic legs and other curves flowed in hypnotic, if slightly robotic motions.
"You got a hot little body for a glorified secretary." She taunted, running a finger over the medics bared skin as she gyrated in her lap.
The lewd display succeeded in arousing Sakura though and she unashamedly took hold of her still clothed genitals right in front of the kneeling medic.
She still helf the stone cock, and at barking command, Shizune started bobbing her head up and down on the enormous sculpted stone, taking more and more of it into her mouth with each attempt.
Following Sakura's grotesque miming with her empty hands, She tried to deep-throat it, but the stone was too big, and hard, and even under genjutsu compulsion the young woman's involuntary desire to avoid choking caused her to recoil in a fit of coughing, a line of saliva erupting from her mouth and dribbling down her chin.
Sakura frowned. "Hey, I wasted good chakra on that dick and you better use it! If you can't deep throat it, then you'll have to… ride it!" She smiled.
A seemingly confused blink was the only response from the brainwashed woman.
As Sakura readjusted in her plush armchair, Shizune placed the stone fake cock on the brothel rooms wooden floor and stood over it, the unnatural cock facsimile between her strong legs. The brainwashed woman scrunched up her face in muted discomfort as she pressed the thick tip to her pussy lips, and it stuck there.
Sakura noticed it was too big to fit without lubrication.
"Stop. Get off it."
She thought for a moment and realised a simple and demeaning solution;
Following Sakura's callous and too-detailed instructions, Shizune started spitting into her hands and rubbing it all over the dildo. As Sakura lewdly grinned, the medic gathered more saliva in her mouth and then dribbled it down onto the tip of the stone slong.
Once the dildo was drenched in the jutsu-trapped woman, Shizune reseated herself over the dildo and lowered herself onto it. After some resistance, the wide, completely unyielding stone head stretched open her sexual hole and shoved inside.
Shizune wasn't prepared for the strange feeling, cold, unyielding, inhuman. She almost lost her balance at the alien feelings.
"Don't lose it, cowgirl." Sakura called out, right before grimacing at how lame that line was as she watched her 'guest' readjust herself before slowly starting to ride up and down on her creation. Sakura was impressed as the older woman seemed to be attempting to get lower with each downward movement of her hips.
Sakura raised her eyebrows and gave two thumbs up to Shizune as the raven-haired woman succeeded in getting six inches of the earth dildo inside her – a full fifty percent of the literally rock-hard phallus.
Higher consciousness suppressed, Deep, dark eyes looked over at Sakura, who had removed her shorts and underwear and was openly masturbating.
"Faster! Harder!" Sakura demanded.
In unwarranted obedience, Shizune started bouncing up and down on the fake stone cock more forcefully. She managed to cram another two inches of dildo into her stretched cunt before it hit her cervix, sending waves of pain and pleasure through the Medical ninja. Her involuntary reactions weren't suppressed and she started grinding onto and into the cock, backwards and forwards, as she approached orgasm.
At Sakura's barking order, Shizune reached down between her legs and started rubbing her clitoris. Only seconds later, the coerced kunoichi came hard, coating the stone cock and the wooden floor beneath it in her juices.
Not allowing for Shizune's orgasm to subside, Sakura ordered her sex slave to "get her ass off my property".
"Clean it off, like if that was your boyfriend's dick." Sakura plainly instructed.
Of course, the kunoichi bent down and started licking her own juices and saliva off the enormous stone shaft and mushroom head.
When the medic-nin was finished, Sakura snatched the stone dildo away and with a single handsign the dildo disintegrated into fine, damp soil that she dropped into a trash can placed in the room at her instruction.
Taking only quick glances at the submissively kneeling Shizune, Sakura reached back into the soil bag and brought out two handfuls of dirt.
Humming a strange tune, the Pink Viper took several minutes to mould (via handsigns and chakra) pieces of dirt into granite hard orbs which were grey in colour with blunted yet textured surface to create even more sensation. She measured them out to be about the size of billiard balls.
"Lie down on your back." She commanded without looking at her target. She continued focusing on the balls held within her hands like a jeweller appraising gemstones.
Moving between Shizune's legs, Sakura spread the medic's vaginal opening with her gloved fingers and pressed the surface of the first orb against her hole. The sphere end was wider than the stone dildo Shizune had just ridden, so it required some pushing to squeeze the stone inside.
Her eyes flitting back and forth from her subjects shifting sexual opening to her full, fleshy butt mere inches from her face, Sakura pushed the stone orb up inside Shizune's vagina, until the grey sphere disappeared, swallowed up by Shizune's body, aided by Sakura's hand pushing the ball in by poking it with a finger.
Sakura grinned.
"It fits! It's a miracle!"
The depraved Haruno grinned imagining how much discomfort this had be causing; she imagined the balls she had shoved up Shizune being so horribly big and round that the kunoichi would never go back to being small or tight.
She imagined Shizune legs forced wide open for the rest of her life.
She felt a flash of hear as she speculated what the surface of the ball felt like; the uneven surface acting as a severe torture, dragging over the kunoichi's inner flesh, making her already disturbed inner passage even more sensitive.
Even under suppression genjutsu, Shizune jerked on the floor and involuntarily pressed her knees together, as the first cold stone thing rolled into her body. Acutely feeling its freezing temp, weight and hardness, it was a truly alien feeling.
It was followed by a second wave of cold, hard weight, and then a third in cruel quick succession. Each new intrusion made the trapped woman buck and jerk as her body was violated.
"We're not done ye-et." Sakura sang as she moulded yet more billiard-sized balls in her palms.
One by one, Sakura shoved the newer, but seemingly getting colder, heavier spheres into Shizune's defenceless body. The wooden floor creaked as its guest writhed around on the ground at the perverse violation, as the cold, heavy, rough surfaced orbs weighed down and rubbed around inside her, knocking against each other and pushing and grating against every nerve inside her body.
The first sphere was pushing her cervix forwards into her uterus as the weight against it increased by the increasing traffic behind it. With the introduction of ball no.4, the cervix gave way, opening to allow the rock hard, heavy ball to get to her most sacred body; her womb.
The uncaring stone orbs stole the space inside her, pressing down on the bottom of her womb with inescapable weight and cold and unpleasant surface texture.
Despite the complacency genjutsu, Shizune started involuntarily bucking her hips as the heavy, disturbing, irritating balls kept rolling and grating around inside her.
Shizune had never felt bloated in a manner remotely like this- no woman ever should. Her lower belly started to bulge outwards obscenely as if she were months pregnant.
Sakura pressed one last sphere (no.6) inside her. Holding it inside her with her fingers embedded inside Shizune's sexual channel, she leaned over the Hokage's assistant and spoke down to her sweat covered, pain taut face;
"I'm going to remove my hand, but I don't want the balls to come out until I say so, so clench your sex hole closed. If any come out, we start aaaall over again."
When Sakura removed her hand, her victim clenched specific internal muscles hard, struggling to keep the heavy stone spheres from rolling out from her defiled body.
Sakura patted and kneaded Shizune's newly reflattened stomach with her knuckles. Taunting and testing her ball-carrying abilities.
"Get down on all fours." Sakura ordered.
Shizune had no capacity to refuse, getting down on her hands and knees.
Sakura squeezed some lubricant onto his finger and started rubbing it up and down Shizune's backside causing the raven-haired woman to tense her body at the strange sensation. Then her jet-black eyes shot wide open, as she felt her abductor's gloved finger enter her asshole.
"Just relax." Sakura hissed in a darkly sexual voice, as she slid a second lubricated finger inside her anus.
Shizune groaned as Sakura slowly pistoned her fingers in and out of her, adding more lubricant to them as he went.
Finally, when she was satisfied, she pressed the tube of lubricant to her sphincter and squirted a small puddle of lube directly up her anus
After hmm-humming, Sakura knelt down behind her.
Trying her best to imagine this was the bossy, busty, bitch from her world- easier done when looking at her from the rear, and what a delicious rear it was; smooth, fair skinned, round, meaty, she could have thought of other adjectives but she just wanted to fuck this bitch.
Sakura assembled an item she had orders from the establishment; a bright pink, strap on dildo.
She squeezed it and flopped it about a bit as she gyrated her hips getting a feel for the thing.
'At least fuck toys are the same in both universes…'
Sakura pressed her well lubricated plastic cock head against Shizune's tight sphincter. Even under genjutsu, Shizune's eyes widened and her teeth squeezed together as her virgin asshole slowly opened up to admit the intrusion. Sakura looked up and down her body intently.
She stood behind Shizune, pressing her front to the raven-haired beauties back. As she looked forwards she could see their reflection in a full body mirror. She grinned noticing that as she shoved her strap-on cock deeper into Shizune's asshole, the bulges on Shizune's grotesquely inflated and misshaped belly became more extreme. She wished she could have sensations through her attached dick substitute- she gasped and imagined the feel of Shizune's tight anal walls squeezing down on her shaft, her cocks underside rubbing against the painful shaped on the near-game-of-pool worth of balls inside her bitches vagina and womb…
Out of nowhere, a thought occurred to Sakura, removing her from her warped fantasy musings.
"Have you ever been fucked in the ass before?" She whispered into Shizune's ear.
"N-no" Shizune gasped out.
"Have you ever been fucked by another woman before?"
The kunoichi replied in the negative.
"The personal assistant of the Hokage, such an important, and dignified title… do you think you're doing the Hokage's office proud by taking it up the ass in a brothel?"
Under genjutsu, Shizune's clouded mind struggled for an answer.
"Do you think the Hokage and/or the village, would be proud of their little anal slut upper class ninja?"
"Answer me!"
"No Sakura-sama.," Shizune grunted, as The pinkette shoved another two inches of thick plastic cock inside her.
"Tell me! Tell me you're a dirty anal slut!" Sakura demanded, seemingly suddenly deranged.
"I'm a dirty anal slut." Shizune grunted out as she felt plastic stab into her cervix and dangerously increase the already frightening pressure inside her womb and vagina.
Sakura reached around, placing both hands on Shizune's grossly misshapen belly, rubbing in circles across the unnatural shaped pressing out from within the enslaved kunoichi as she slowly sodomised her.
Running her sharpened nails all over her enlarged stomach, Sakura slowly pulled out until just the plastic head was inside her butt, and then dove forth, thrusting in the proverbial balls deep again, causing her captive to shudder in pain.
"Tell me your name is Kato Shizune and you're a dirty anal slut! Say it!" Sakura nearly yelled right into Shizune's ear.
"My name is Kato… Ahh!… Shizune and I'm… nnn! ...a dirty anal slut!" Shizune panted.
Sakura directed her tattoed arms lower to her entangled partners body, getting her limbs under Shizune's legs. Effortlessly, she lifted Shizune off the ground. The raven-haired woman hadn't been told to move so she didn't react in any serious way. The result was the teenaged girl lifting the older woman off the floor, holding her aloft with chakra enhanced strength, cock up her ass, with Shizune bent near in two as she dangled like a stuck pig.
Sakura began walking around the room, with an impaled Shizune on her crotch. She began fucking her in this absurdly awkward position at full force, sending Shizune flying into the air with each push forwards, dragging her back down as she thrust her hips back and pulled the strap on and its hooked victim with it, crashing together with a loud thump of flesh and plastic, only to repeat the bruising pace again and again. She swore she could hear the stone balls embedded in Shizune's belly clacking together as she bounced in Sakura's psychotic tempo.
"Shizune! Finger yourself! Get yourself off! I'm. Not doing all the fucking work here!"
Shizune obeyed and reached between her legs. Connecting with her clit wasn't easy as her body was being bounced up and down with bone-jarring force. Somehow she managed it.
Sakura watched in amusement as Shizune clumsily masturbated while practically harpooned on her.
"You've done this before obviously!" She mocked. She loved stepping on people.
Shizune climaxed, spraying her juice onto the floor as Sakura began swinging her round and round in a deranged fashion.
Suddenly, Shizune felt herself being inverted, her head touched the floor, she found herself staring into Sakura's black painted toenails attached to feet that spread apart placing increasing weight on her head, then her shoulders as Shizuoka folded up, the large cock still up her ass causing extreme pain as it twisted her insides.
Holding onto The now upside down and slightly compacted Shizune, Sakura recommenced fucking the older woman, this time in a brutal and dangerous piledriver position.
She brought her body weight and vast physical strength down onto Shizune's rump, sending compressive waves of pain down through her spine and torso, through her chest into her neck and shoulders, driving up and down into the painfully bent woman.
She took one hand off Shizune's waist to finger herself to bring her off- she knew from experience with that Tayuya girl a woman couldn't be ridden like this for long without suffering injury.
She came, spattering her fluids onto Shizune's upside down belly, she released her grip around the agonised woman's waist and her legs sprang up causing her to flop to the floor in a heap of panting pain and lust.
-X-
She had lowered Shizune to the floor and carefully detached her- she wasn't a medic and didn't want to deal with the internal injuries of just shoving the harpooned woman onto the floor.
"Get up to your knees." She commanded.
Shizune complied, getting to her knees what would have been a dignified position if it weren't for the fact that she was naked, covered in sexual juice (here and another woman's), red-faced and panting.
"Lick my cock." Sakura said, clutching the defiled instrument in her palm and waving the stained object around slapping Shizune across the face with it.
Sakura remembered making others do this, the first loser she demanded it of, refused, begging with tears in their eyes not to make her do it.
The second person had tried it, they vomited the phallus up, then emptied their stomach contents on her apartments brand new rug. And then Sakura further stained her new rug with blood and teeth from the dick who couldn't handle ass to mouth.
Under genjutsu, Shizune did none of things; no tears, no look of disgust or horror, no complaints about how sick this was. The raven haired beauty leaned forwards, stuck out her tongue and started licking along the length of Sakura's stained fake cock. The genjutsu concealed her utter disgust at the indescribably foul taste that struck her tongue as it glided across the still warm plastic.
Sakura watched in smug appreciation for several seconds, before she began to gyrate her hips like she was some asshole male smugly enjoying a blowjob.
"Pick up the pace, Hokage's assistant. Have you ever given a blowjob before Shizune-chan."
"Yes." She mumbled around the false dick in her mouth.
Sakura went budgeyed. She thought the woman was a prude. She wasn't often wrong.
"Wh-when?!"
"Several years ago when I accidentally ingested some of Lady Tsunade's private sake. I still don't know who I had private relations with."
"Well… show those skills you gave to your mystery man."
Shizune started bobbing her head up and down on Sakura's fake cock until the pink and black haired kunoichi nodded in satisfaction. The tattooed girl pulled out of her mouth, went around behind Shizune and slid the now spitstained phallus back inside her still stretched out asshole.
Sakura was amused when it went in without any resistance and gleefully resumed her fucking.
"Say you're Sato Shizune and you love ass to mouth!" Sakura ordered, clearly getting off on the situation.
"I'm… aah! …Sato Shizune… ahh! and I…agh!… love ass to mouth!" Shizune forced out somewhat tonelessly.
Sakura recommenced masturbating as she ploughed Shizune though she soon pulled out again of the besieged medics body again and moved around to Shizune's face, commanding her to once again lick her ass juices off her cock. Grinning maniacally, she fucked her face for a good minute or so and then went back to fucking her ass.
She repeated the sickening pattern several times before, finally. She pulled out. Spent. She ordered Shizune to lay on her back as she fumbled with the rubber straps of the strapon cock she wore.
Removing the strapon and tossing it carelessly over her shoulder, she mounted Shizune's face. Without instructions, orders or warnings, she rode the raven-haired medic, holding her head, trapped between her thighs.
She had little energy left though, and, yelling various curse words, she tensed and came, coating the smothered woman's tongue and filling her mouth with her otherworldly release.
After nearly choking (due to the suppressed consciousness jutsu) Shizune obeyed Sakura's growl to swallow all of her release and spastically swallowed overflowed mouthfuls of the sexual river flowing into her. As Shizune swallowed, Sakura ground down her thighs on her face, preventing the trapped medic from breathing through her nostrils and threatening asphyxiation. Seeming oblivious to this, Shizune orgasmed herself, having never stopped rubbing her clit.
Finally, Sakura pushed herself up off the near suffocating medic and stood up.
She towelled the soggy area between her thighs dry using Shizune's hair like a rag.
She placed her palms on Shizune's belly, pausing for a moment to be amazed that the woman had kept the freaky things inside her all this time.
Inside the kunoichi's womb and vaginal canal, the doton balls turned to mud, their effect immediately apparent as Shizune's grotesquely inflated and misshapen belly compacted down almost to its original size.
Gently placing a gloved hand inside Shizune's body, just past her clitoris, Sakura activated a light suiton Jutsu to wash the exhausted woman out. She huffed as she watched a river of mud flow freely from her bitches now gaping wide vagina.
"Clean-up is a bitch…" She griped.
"I wonder what that insatiable party beast Menma's up to right now?"
-X-
Elsewhere in Reality 1...
In the aftermath of the attack of Pain, Menma had looked around Konoha briefly, his heart broke as he saw lots of death, crushed and shredded children. While this was not his Konoha it still wounded him to see the town and its people (strange though they were) so hurt. His eyes, barely holding back tears, turned to watch Hinata tend to the wounded, trying to ignore the looks of awe and fear on peoples faces aimed his way.
This wasn't his Hinata, his… former girlfriend…
His Hinata could be very tender; after beatings and humiliation in spars, she'd take him to the nurse and even heal him herself and when he was tired or hurt she'd escort him home protecting him from bad weather and even carrying him. Which made a lot of people laugh at him- when Hinata was not around to defend his honour.
Finally, when all wounded were tended to, Hinata went to the hospital cafeteria. They sat down to cups of tea.
The quiet medic finally swallowed her fear and asked; "Who… is Hinata to you?"
After a long pause Menma answered.
"Someone very special… our worlds Hinata is… not like you… she was… wounded, angry, quick to anger…"
Hinata frowned as she saw what looked like actual fear on the strangers face. From someone he loved?
"She was the strongest in my class… she's very powerful and determined… but fragile in someways… she doesn't let many people get close to her… me and Tayuya and one or two others… I wonder what Tayuya is like here…"
Hinata looked glum.
"You… were… together?"
Menma nodded. "But… we're on a break…" He shivered as he remembered the events that caused it.
"How… did you… tell her you… cared for her…"
Hinata again saw disturbing emotions on the blonde's face, settling on sad. "I… never told her… things just happened… anyway we're on a break at the moment… we…both need to sort things out…"
"Was it her strength and confidence that attracted you to her?"
Menma jerked her out of her reverie; "You're stronger than me… you heal people, support the sick in their weakest moments… I couldn't do that – I'd start crying or throwing up… my sister broke her leg once and I burst into tears in the hospital."
Hinata blinked. "You have a sister?"
END CHAPTER 7
AUTHORS NOTES
Shizune's name; I decided to refer to her as Kato Shizune- because why not? She has more of a role in the series than Dan who got a family name despite only showing up as a ghost after he was a zombie.
Akasen; One of the many terms used for a red-light district in Japanese is akasen, literally meaning "red-line". (This has independent origins from the same term in English.) Japanese police drew a red line on maps to indicate the boundaries of legal red-light districts. In Japanese, the term aosen, literally meaning "blue-line", also exists, indicating an illegal district.
Bird of paradise; An exotic flower named due to its shape. It is also known as crane flower and belongs to Strelitiaceae family. With its unique shape and vibrant colors, the Bird of Paradise is considered one of the most beautiful flowers present in the world. This multicolored flower has no scent.
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