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Chapter List
- 6
- 7
- 8
Disclaimer: ahahaha,
I wish. Don�t own.
Chapter Summary: During a mission, Naruto discovers that he�s subtly changing. He has a
conversation with Tsunade regarding his Hokage application and later on, participates in a training
session with Kakashi and Sasuke.
~~

�Rasengan!�
The
swirling chakra tore into the foreign shinobi�s
stomach, cracking the lower half of his ribs and spinning his innards to the
point where the skin of his back ruptured. Intestines and broken organs sprayed
widely onto the ground and surrounding tree trunks with a sickeningly wet smack.
Naruto stumbled briefly, panting hard. He let his arm drop,
tingles of chakra still numbing his palm. It was like thousands of thin needles
constantly hammering into his skin. Not painful, but not necessarily pleasant
either.
�You
okay?� he asked the young girl who was crouched upon a low-lying tree branch.
She
silently nodded and shakily pocketed her kunai. Naruto
sighed and turned back to the scene in front of him. The body�or what was left
of it, was sprawled in a tangled heap. Blood continued to drip from the
surrounding leaves. It was a grotesque sight. So much blood,
so much gore.
�Do
you know anyone who�s out to kill you?�
There
was a shift of air next to him as she dropped from the tree to stand beside
him. She was trembling slightly, he noted.
�N-No.�
Naruto tilted his head, studying her more intently. The
girl was supposedly a young ninja prodigy that had required an escort back to
her home village. Suddenly her eyes bulged and she lurched forward. The sound
of loud retching filled the dead silence of the forest.
And
in the end, it didn�t matter whether she was a genin
with superb potential. She was still an eleven year old girl who had, for the
first time, experienced a horrific death scene. It must have been a shock;
reality was truly harsh and frightening. He could clearly see it now; large
eyes darting around their surroundings like a frightened animal. Sweat clung to
the smooth brow. She was still trembling. Naruto
inwardly sighed. He sympathized with her, he really did. He had holed himself
up in his apartment for a whole week after his very first kill.
�Hey,�
he called out softly, placing a gentle hand on the kunoichi�s
narrow shoulder after she had stumbled back onto her feet. She visibly
flinched. �Why don�t you hide yourself up in the trees while I clean up here, hrm?�
�I�I��
�I
don�t sense anyone around.� He paused before smiling. �It�ll be okay. Yes?�
The
girl stopped her stammering, staring up at Naruto�s
comforting grin. She nodded, quickly wiped her mouth of the acidic liquid with
the corner of a long sleeve and propelled herself up into the dark, hiding
herself in the shadowed foliage.
The
fox-child�s upturned lips immediately thinned into a grim line. He reluctantly
pushed the corpse onto its back with the side of a sandaled foot and winced,
fighting down the sour bile that rose up in his own throat. The view was enough
to upturn even the world�s most battle-hardened shinobi�s
stomach. Never in a million years did the demon-vessel imagine that he would
perfect his technique to produce such horrifying results.
The
corpse�s own glassy eyes stared back at him, mouth frozen open in a silent
scream. There was no forehead protector, nothing to identify which village the
man had come from. Naruto scowled. No, the
unfortunate man had carried a crazed stare of one who had finally cracked and
gone insane. He had attacked them with no purpose. Truly a mangled
puppet.
Would
this be his own fate? Would he turn into a
psychopathic killer if he allowed his sorrows to finally drown out his logic?
Or worse, hand total control over to the Nine-Tails. Naruto
allowed those depressing thoughts to wash over him as he performed quick but
precise seals.
The
body crumbled, sinking into the ground. Flesh blackened, broke into chunks
before disintegrating into dust. Naruto never really
had a chance to practice this advanced jutsu before.
It had been devised by some obscure medic-nin in the
past. If man had the power to regenerate cells via healing techniques, then
surely he had the power to reverse the process. Though truthfully, it was a
forbidden skill used liberally by hunter-nins.
The
blond took one last good look, wrinkling his nose to the stench of vomit and
decay before swiping a hand across his mouth. A heavy, metallic taste coated
his tongue but he paid no heed to it. Absently, he licked the bloody splatters
off his fingers and the back of his hands as he appraised his surroundings once
again, making sure that he did not miss anything. Then the boy abruptly stopped
his simple actions and stared at his freshly cleaned hands. Pants of disbelief
and horror escaped his lips, ragged and barely audible.
~~

�So what�s up, old hag?�
Naruto shifted his weight from one foot to the other as he
stood impatiently in Tsunade�s office.
�And
what�s up with the perverted duo being here?�
He
was grimy, clothes covered in mud and dark patches that could only be identified
as blood. He didn�t really think of anything when she called him into her
office, having just finished scribbling out a half-assed report against one of
the walls. The warning bells went off when he saw Kakashi
and Jiraiya standing there, waiting expectantly.
Tsunade�s eyebrow twitched and Jiraiya
looked plainly un-amused. Kakashi merely appeared the
same � droopy eye trained tiredly on his student.
�Stupid
brat!� the frog sannin bellowed, his weathered face
red with frustration. Naruto always likened him to a
steaming kettle some days. �Show your elders some respect!�
�Hmph!� Naruto
turned his nose up haughtily. �Only when you stop doing your�
�a snort- �research and teach me an awesome new technique.�
�Like I would want to waste my time on you!�
�Naruto,� Kakashi abruptly cut in
before a shouting match could escalate between the two. �It�s time for your
check-up.�
�Check-up?� The teenager�s tanned visage frowned with
confusion. �My seal? Didn�t you guys check it several
weeks ago?�
Tsunade stood up and gave him a small, encouraging smile.
�I hear you�ve been feeling frustrated lately.�
�So
what does that have to do with my seal?�
�Perhaps
it affects your behaviour indirectly? Perhaps not?�
The
Hokage shrugged and Jiraiya
spoke, voice now composed. �It�s just a two minute routine check-up to calm our
concerns. Nothing serious.�
�Jeeze,� the boy grumbled, muttering to himself as he pulled
his vest and shirt off. The spiral was permanently visible now, a constant
reminder in bold black of the Fourth�s sacrifice. He strode over to Tsunade and Jiraiya but not
before throwing his other instructor a quick, seething glare. The glare was
received and ignored. What exactly had Kakashi told
them?
Tsunade�s fingers skimmed over the surface of his skin,
passing the flat, toned stomach as she traced the seal. Naruto
suppressed a giggle; the pulse of her probing chakra was ticklish.
�Your
chakra�s somewhat unstable,� she murmured, finally straightened her spine from
her crouch.
�When
is my chakra ever stable?� was the disgruntled reply.
�The
seal�s fine though,� Jiraiya commented from the
background where he had been studying it with immense scrutiny.
�Of
course it�s fine,� Naruto spat, reaching for his
garments. �Just �cause I�ve been moody doesn�t mean
that I�m going to go on some murdering rampage.�
He
didn�t know why they all looked so bloody somber. In a way, it pissed him off. Pissed off that they didn�t seem to have much faith in him.
The one time he decides to stray from his happy go-lucky self and actually snap
back and everyone goes into panic mode. Giving him the �let�s check on your
seal� bullcrap. Damn that Kakashi
for poking his nose around. Damn him for being an observant bastard.
�Right! Now that this is over and done with, I�m off,� Jiraiya piped up. He grinned at Naruto
before disappearing with a poof.
Kakashi also took his leave after the sennin�s
departure. He laid a comradely hand on Naruto�s
shoulder as he passed him with a mumbled, �Let me know if you need anything.�
�How�s
my application going?� the youth asked quickly, eager to change the subject.
Inwardly he winced at his tactlessness. From one touchy
subject to another.
�Application?� Tsunade feigned
ignorance as she reached over to a badly hidden �secret� compartment. Her desk
now sported a new addition to its cluttered surface, a sake jar.
The
teenager slipped his arms into the flak vest�s armholes. The old hag obviously
didn�t want to talk about it, but he continued to persist with his childish
whine. �You know what I�m talking about. My application to
the council.�
�The
council is still in evaluation. Sorry Naruto. You
know how things are.�
He
was happy that the blonde turned her back to him to look for something, a sake
cup most likely. The ugly, disdainful sneer that had smashed his otherwise
attractive features was meant to be missed.
�Still in evaluation? Like my jounin
rank is still in evaluation, I bet? Damn it, Tsunade-baba,
you know that those old farts are just being spiteful.�
He
blinked in surprise. She was offering him a filled sake cup. He accepted it
with little enthusiasm.
�Naruto,� she began, knocking back the alcohol down her
throat. �You know that you�re unofficially a jounin.
Unofficially, I say, because the sheer power and resources you produce is
sometimes pure insanity. It�s just not written down onto paper.�
He
waited for her to continue, emptying his own cup as he did so. The liquid burnt
a bitter path down to his stomach, giving it a few seconds worth of warmth.
�The
council is just afraid, that�s all. It�s that power that they fear. Until you
can prove to them that you are a capable leader that does not run headlong into
battle like an idiot�� At this she paused, pinning him back with a pointed
look, ��one who is also capable of making quick decisions for the safety of his
team under the heat of combat-�
The
council doesn�t trust your control over the fox�s power and thus are wary of
handing over a jounin clearance, let alone a pass for
the Hokage application. That�s what she meant to say.
Naruto�s mood soured even more. The council would
have loved to see him shackled and buried six feet under.
�Isn�t
that what being a chuunin is all about?� he
interrupted her in protest, �Being able to lead a group safely? Haven�t I
already proven that�? Goddammit, I thought you were
the all powerful Hokage!�
Tsunade glowered at him and consumed what seemed to be her
third cup. �Bureaucracy and politics, my boy. I am not
a dictator. Even the �all powerful Hokage� requires
some form of a whipping committee.� At this she sighed and rubbed her temples.
�Mind you, I�m not too happy with the arrangement myself.�
The
Kyuubi-vessel knew all to well that if he continued
this conversation, he�d become even more miserable than he already was. The
seeds of doubt regarding his long-time dream had already taken root. But he was
known for his determination, right? He�d just have to keep pushing and pushing
until his application for Hokage candidacy was
accepted. Stupid, stupid committee.
�They
just need a gentle push in the right direction.� The guttural words filtered
directly into his conscience. �To their grave.�
�Shut
up fox. You�re too ambitious for your own good.�
�No,
you are the one who is not ambitious enough. Grasp it by the neck.�
Naruto mentally snorted at that, whilst simultaneously
giving the slightly intoxicated Tsunade another
pitiful pout.

~~

Sasuke wiped the sweat off his brow. It was fucking hot.
Of
course Kakashi had called both him and Naruto out for a workout session, giving some excuse of how
ninjas should always remain in top-form. They had sparred, practiced several jutsus and now were performing a series of strenuous
stretching exercises. The raven-haired boy didn�t mind all this, he welcomed
the training. But that didn�t change the fact that it was still too hot. What a
freak heat-wave.
Flak
vests had long been discarded, tossed in one big pile at the edge of the grassy
clearing. Kakashi had even taken off his
standard-issue shirt, revealing a muscular upper body littered with faint
scars. The mask, however, still remained.
�Ah�at
least the sun�s going down,� Kakashi sighed.
�Hn.�
Both
of them sat tiredly on the grass, limbs hanging limply by their side. Opposite
them, Naruto continued with his sit-up exercises. The
blue-eyed ninja dangled upside down from a tree, legs hooked around a branch.
With hands clasped behind his head, he would bend his torso upwards
relentlessly.
Sasuke grimaced, remarking nastily and loudly. �Does that
idiot pull stamina out of his ass alongside the bullshit he spews out every
single day?�
Kakashi only grunted in response and there was a loud yell
from the tree�s direction. �I fucking heard that, you dick!�
Naruto had always doffed his t-shirt when the weather got
too hot during their younger days. But now, he�d discreetly push the material
back into the waistband of his trousers the moment the bare expanse of his
stomach was revealed. And there was more. Sasuke
noticed that the atmosphere between the blond and their sensei was a tad tense.
Perhaps more on the former�s side.
�Oi, Sasuke.� Kakashi�s
voice held a conversational tone but was low, indicating that he did not want
the third member of their group to hear. �How are things between you and Naruto?�
�He�s
a moron,� Sasuke said without hesitation.
�That�s
not what I asked.�
This
time the Uchiha tilted his head slightly, watching Kakashi from the corner of his eye. �Why do you want to
know anyway?�
The
older man shrugged and laid back. �He�s been acting a bit odd lately. I just
want to know whether it�s going to affect teamwork and future missions. You
know you guys can�t afford to mess up just because of your petty rivalry.�
Lies,
Sasuke thought. Naruto and
he, strangely enough, worked beautifully together while on duty. Instead he
countered with, �I should be asking you the same question. He is kind of stiff
around you today.�
The
copy-nin waved his hand dismissively. �He and I had a
disagreement earlier. Nothing serious but you know how
stubborn he is.�
�Hn.�
He
wondered what sort of disagreement it was and knew that Kakashi
would not bother in elaborating. He never elaborated in anything. His thoughts
were interrupted by the other man�s question.
�Well?�
�Well
what?�
�Nothing strange going between you and Naruto?�
�Nothing
stranger than usual,� he answered laconically, gaze now fixated onto the boy a
couple of feet away from them. Naruto by now was
applying chakra to keep himself glued to the branch; the backs of his knees
were slipping on the wood, material soaked in sweat. But chakra application was
rather difficult from such an obscure part of the body and every now and then, Naruto had to catch himself from falling off.
Sasuke failed to realize that his casual gaze had
transformed into something that should have been described as a hungry stare.
He didn�t realize the contemplative look his sensei was giving him in return.
Before he knew it, he heard Kakashi hoist himself
from the ground and call out, �Oi Naruto!
How much do you have left?�
�Twenty-two
more and I�m done!�
�Let
me help you then.�
Kakashi easily leapt onto the branch and straddled the
boy�s shins, placing his palms on the other�s knees. With the added weight
effectively keeping him pinned back onto the branch, Naruto
released his chakra and renewed his sit-ups with more vigor. Sasuke�s hand
clenched on the ground, ripping out blades of grass between his fingers as he
watched them. That perverted sensei had absently dragged his palms down
the blond�s legs, seemingly in some excuse to get a
better grip. It all seemed horribly wrong to him; Kakashi�s
bare body draped forwards as he looked down at Naruto,
chatting to him about something meaningless. His gloved hands on those strained
thighs.
Afraid of a little competition?
He
pushed his fingers into the soil, grass already uprooted.
Afraid of that lecher groping your little slut?
His
teeth clenched painfully behind closed lips.
He�s
a little puppy. People don�t get possessive over a little puppy, Uchiha. You don�t see yourself being like that with Sakura
do you? Control yourself.
Naruto�s embarrassed laughter in
the background didn�t even register in his mind. Instead, he felt the Cursed
Seal start to burn.
Then
again, you�ve never wanted to see Sakura whimper at you for attention. Naruto makes a much more appealing puppy.
�Sasuke? Stop thinking whatever
you�re thinking. Your Sharingan�s spinning all over
the place.�
The
prodigy blinked, eyes reverting back their original black. He glanced up, only
to see that Kakashi had already pulled on his shirt. Naruto was standing near the tree trunk, one leg braced
against it. He appeared oblivious to the world as he continued stretching.
�Whatever
is going on between you and Naruto, fix it.� It was
amazing how a man, who was obsessed with reading porn and would probably be
late for his own funeral, could sound so serious. �It�s affecting the both of
you.�
Kakashi turned around, bidding Naruto
a cheery goodbye and Sasuke just scowled at his back.
�Dobe,� Sasuke called out after Kakashi had left.
�Don�t
call me that!�
The
dark-haired boy heaved himself up and walked over to his teammate who was
looking at him curiously. Beyond them was the blood red sky as the sun departed
into the horizon.
�Have
fun with Kakashi?� Sasuke
asked, a smirk skewing his aristocratic features,
Naruto frowned and cocked his head to one side. He leaned
back against the tree, crossing both arms across his chest. �What are you
saying?�
�You
must have been thrilled to have him pay some attention to you�� the other
teenager continued.
�Wow,
Sasuke,� Naruto said after
a long moment. �You must be jealous that I�m receiving some attention for a
change.� He then added slyly. �Are you jealous that your beloved sensei might
start favouring me? Think he�s getting bored of you
in bed?�
Naruto didn�t even bother to dodge the punch that knocked
his head back. Blood trickled down his cut lip, curving around his chin and yet
his look still remained victorious as if he had uncovered an important secret. Sasuke stared at the blond wildly, pale skin stretched over
his face tightly in a barely concealed look of fury.
�I
am not sleeping with him or with anyone,� the teenager snarled vehemently.
�But
you�ll only sleep with me, right? I mean, that�s why you jerked me off a couple
of days ago, right?�
It
was backfiring against him badly. He had originally wanted to rile Naruto up. Ridicule him like he usually did. But Naruto had surprisingly not taken the bait and if anything,
he was being ridiculed instead. He opened his mouth to demand another spar, just
so he could triumph at the final outcome. He nearly always won.
�Sasuke-kun,� the blond said softly, suddenly throwing his
arms around the taller boy�s neck. �I�m sorry. How about I treat you out for
food?�
The
Uchiha froze. Naruto
pressing the length of his burning-hot body against his own was the last thing
he expected. Quickly and with amazing resolve, he suppressed his anger and the
urge to push the other ninja against the tree. He just stood there, arms
hanging by his sides. Briefly, he hoped that no one would walk in on them.
�Dammit Uzumaki,
not so close. Stop being a parasite, clinging to everything.� He inhaled
deeply. �And you fucking stink.�
�Of
course I stink. I�ve been training the entire day, unlike some people.� A loud sniff. �Then again, you stink too.� Much to Sasuke�s chagrin, this was said as the other boy tightened
his hold, almost refusing to let go.
Up-close,
Naruto�s eyes appeared luminous, glittering sapphire
boring into his own. He tipped his chin at an angle, the sun�s dying rays
catching one high cheek-bone and lighting it as if it was on fire. Light
continued to filter through the spiky strands of hair, covering the blond and
giving him an illusion of false sainthood, the trail of drying blood appearing
crystallized. Sasuke squinted as Naruto
tipped his head again to the other side, causing the metal of his forehead
protector to flash. At the same time, the blue eyes momentarily flared up a
crimson red. If he had not seen the confusing changes in Naruto�s
appearance that fateful day years ago, he would have sworn it was merely a
trick of the light.
�For
fuck�s sake, get a hold of yourself. Stop being so clingy.
How many times does that thick skull of yours need to understand that you�re
worthless to me?�
Naruto�s eyes narrowed at that statement, an unmistakable
look of hurt flashing across his face. He took a step backwards and his words
were accusing, laced with some incredulity.
�I
don�t understand you. You�re selfish. Ungrateful.
You�re a jerk and everyone loves you. You know I�d kill for just one fucking
ounce of the attention you get? Why can�t you accept me?�
�Hn. Do you really need a why?�
The
soft chuckle caused Sasuke to turn his gaze back to Naruto. The other ninja was smirking.
�It�s okay, Uchiha. You know why?
Because you call me worthless and you act like you hate me and all but we both
know you�re probably in denial.�
How�how
dare him!
�What
did you say?� the dark-haired boy growled.
Naruto looked smug. �Everyone knows it. I�m the only one
you pay attention to. Who do you spar with? Me. Who do you even bother to talk
to, even if it�s only to make fun of? Me. Uzumaki the
idiot. I�m the only one you bother with. What does that tell you?�
The
Sharingan was back and he was clenching his fists
again. Everything Naruto was saying was right. It was
true.
�Woah, woah Sasuke,
calm down!� Naruto circled him once with a purposeful
gait in his steps before placing both hands on the Uchiha�s
shoulders in a comforting gesture. He leaned in close with a grin. �Well I
guess I�m not the only one you pay attention to? You�re obsessed over your
brother. I�d be a tad jealous�if didn�t know that all you want to do is kill
him, y�know? Though�it�s too bad that he puts you on
the back burner for someone else�who�s that poor
unfortunate sap that your brother wants�hrm�what was
his name��
The
blond youth lifted one hand and waved his fingers slightly, seemingly in deep
thought. To complete the effect, he inclined his head to the left and scratched
his chin. A slow, gloating smile then spread across his face as he gazed
unwavering at Sasuke.
�Oh
yes. Me.�
At
first Sasuke didn�t even react. He couldn�t bring
himself to. The very thought of it was too much to bear; irony piercing his
pride like a silver needle. A few seconds too late and then did he lash out,
movements faster than a striking rattlesnake.
Everything
blurred into red. Soothing, blinding, burning red. He
was yelling something, slamming something against something else but nothing
registered. Just the pure colour of
red. Even when he felt two new presences, he did not stop
�Uchiha calm down!�
�Shikamaru, do something!�
Sasuke�s limbs strained and he tried to move, he really did
try. But he couldn�t. Then he was moving again, sluggishly but it was not to
his mind�s will. He turned, coming face to face to the nonchalant features of Shikamaru. Shit, he must have been caught in the Nara�s Shadow Binding Jutsu.
�Sasuke,� the recently-promoted jounin
calmly started. �Get a hold of yourself. Promise me you won�t do anything
stupid and I�ll release you. Yeah?�
The
anger quickly drained away from his aching body like water through a sieve.
Darkness engulfed him as he closed his eyes, and when he opened them again
moments later, the Sharingan was gone.
�Yes,�
he said finally, voice leveled in that indifferent, dead tone of his.
�You sure?�
�Yes.�
The
alien feeling left and he slumped forward, exhausted. At the edge of his
vision, he saw the willowy form of Ino come into
view. In front of him, was Naruto.
�Sasuke-kun?� The girl sounded
unsure, maybe a little frightened. �Naruto?
What happened?�
�Bah,
don�t worry, Ino. This is probably their version of
foreplay. You two done by the way? We need this field
for training.�
Naruto was screaming bloody blue murder at him. Calling him a cold bastard. Telling him
that he was going to kick his �sorry ass all the way to the Wind Country�.
Sasuke routinely tuned him out and glanced at his
throbbing knuckles. Blood was smeared all over them. He snapped his gaze back
at Naruto and noticed that the other boy�s already
swollen face was literally covered in it.
�Sasuke you asshole, can�t you take a fucking joke!?�
�Geeze, how troublesome�Naruto
shut up, you�re giving me a headache.�
�You�re
scolding ME?! He�s the one who nearly smashed my face in! All because I made a
one little joke at him! Prissy stuck-up fucked-up bitch!�
Sasuke ruthlessly squelched the guilt that was starting to
seep into his conscience. He didn�t feel sorry. He couldn�t! Naruto had brought it onto himself. He�d probably heal by
tomorrow; that fast healing ability of his was admittedly impressive. But the blond�s near screeching was starting to get on his nerves.
�Okay,
okay I get it!� the Uchiha finally snapped. He dug
stained fingers into his back pocket and pulled out a leather wallet. He
forcefully grabbed his bemused teammate�s arm and slammed a couple of money
notes into the open palm. �Go do us all a favour and
go buy yourself a bowl of ramen. Just fucking leave my
sight.�
With
a sudden change of moods that only Naruto was capable
of, he suddenly grinned � torn lips, bloodied teeth and all- happily squealing
out �Ramen!� as if it was his life�s saviour. Sasuke scoffed. It wouldn�t be surprising if it was.
Naruto darted over to his discarded clothing and before he
left, he glanced over his shoulder and straight into Sasuke�s
obsidian orbs. And it was that brief, fleeting second that he knew. Naruto�s wails were fabricated. It was all part of his
mask. He wasn�t even affected by Sasuke�s physical
blows. The blue eyes had shone with triumph and blatant satisfaction. No, no,
it was no joke. It was a planned jeer. The previous words were very much
deliberate for the sole purpose of sparking more envy within him. He knew that Sasuke was going lose sleep over this.
Sasuke�s lips pressed into a trembling, white line.
That
little, scheming whore!

TBC.

~~

Ahhh, here are the review
responses for chapter 6 and 7. If I
missed any reviews, it�s because my laptop�s battery went flat some point
during the middle of it (Christ, you�d think the battery would last a little
bit longer than an hour and a half)

Harukakatana: woot!
You�re so good to me! Bah I still have to install stupid aim on this PC. Still
got those X episodes to send over!

Juli: Yar, Kakashi
and Naruto *fans herself * I just HAD to add that bit there.
Thank you for reviewing *grin*

Celticfx: Aw, well writing out individual responses shows how much I
appreciate people reviewing this fic. It�s only
fitting right considering you take the time to write out your thoughts on a
certain person�s story. You�re right, it�s all Kyuubi�s
fault for Naruto acting like that but hey, who�s
complaining? I mean, it�s about time he takes a stand. And since he�s gone sexy
*drools over latest manga chapter* who can resist a
seductive blond fox boy? Certainly not me! (okay, he�s
kinda young but who cares)

Ayonoi: Well you know�any hot guy backing another hot guy against any
wall is droolworthy *wipes said drool* errr� okay, maybe I need a drool bucket here. But anyways!
And yes, it�s all fine and dandy for others to ask Naruto
what�s going on since it�s easier for them (no doubt talking to Sasuke would be like pulling teeth) but what about poor Naru-chan�s feelings? *sniff* Well he showed Kakashi a thing or two .. er.. maybe
offered would be a better word here. Thanks for liking the chapter!

Jamie: Cause you know Kakashi and Naruto are hawt together in that
sinful teacher student way *wink*

Akuma_river: err.. thanks!

Devious Lil Devil: Yes! It is my EVIL
plan to make you review *rubs hands manically* Give in to your temptation and
review!! Heh heh, yeah I
was sniggering myself when I typed out that infamous �I promise to swallow�
line. I mean, how can you NOT resist that. Sorry there
was no Kyuubi/Naru scenes in this chapter but there
will be more, don�t worry. Though Kyuubi is
really�difficult at times to work with, he can be a good fox�when he wants to. Sometimes. *shifty eye look*

Ayako: I was pondering abt that one to be
honest. It�s like: Dude. You know so many techniques. Teach them some of them
for god�s sake. The only jutsu he taught them was the
freakin� chidori to Sasuke and ignored all the others. Especially
Naruto who needed help too. You know how
pissed off I was at that? Too bad Naruto didn�t give Kakashi the cold shoulder in the anime. Ah well. But yah� I like Naruto as a slutty foxboy too. Especially when he�s slutty to Sasuke. *rubs hands together* Thank you ever so much
for the review!

Just me: Well�*gives you fic addiction
repressing pills* *chuckles*

Hitomi No Ryu: Yah seriously, would be a hell of a lot easier
to do a voodoo doll of Orochi-pervert. I like Naruto being all angsty and uke-ish but the sinful demon sometimes is even more fun.
*grins* And his condition will �deteriorate�. Muahaha.

Kayoko: thanks for the review hun.
Hopefully I�ll see you on aim sometime �when I get it working on this PC
*grumbles*

TenshiKaitou: *giggles* I�d love to but with Kakashi
in the way, it�ll be too complicated. Don�t worry, I�ll write up a Kaka/Naru porn sidefic. Hell it�s
already in the makings *smile* Mmmm evil scheming Naruto.. my
favourite! *gnaws*

Puchu: *laughs*
Nah, I don�t mind impatient annoying fangirls. Except
if they�re zealous SasuSaku fangirls
throwing grenades at me *grimaces*. Thanks tones for the loving the fic!

Ezj: Bah, I usually don�t have anything intelligent to say. EVER. My brain�s empty *chuckles* You
taking the time to review is enough. Thanks!

MidnightMoon: Kyuubi is�. Mmmmm,
well, in my fantasies he�s all sex, bondage chains and whips. As for Kakashi�well, that�s just Naruto
speculating and mocking him. Whether Kakashi was
turned on or not, we�ll never know because it was from Naru�s
POV *chuckle* Though personally, Naruto
was just making jibes at him. Thanks for reading! *bows*

Kirsch: You have
no idea of the different mental images that run through my head when I write
each chapter. Threeway with Kakashi and his students?
Wow, there goes my nose *stifles nosebleed* and yes yuk,
packing bags is boring as hell. Thank you for taking the time from packing bags
to reviewing this story!

MultifacetedTune: No�.no chocolate! I�m gonna get fat! But mmmm
chocolate�who can resist the power of chocolate.. yum. Well dunno abt him being realistic but I know I wouldn�t be able to put
up with half the shit he puts up with. Dunno abt sneakiness but that�s what we have the Kyuubi for! And you must tell me the story behind your
screen-name. Hope you liked this chapter *smile*

YaoiloverS: Woot, the
famous yaoilovers gave me a review! I�m really glad
you like this story and yes, Naruto is Sasuke�s cum slut *happy thoughts at that* or maybe Sasuke is Naruto�s cum slut. Hee hee heee

Michirukoshi: Would you like a book titled �101
ways to retain a nosebleed�? I can assure you that it works! *discreetly stuffs
tissues up her nostrils* Uhm�. Yes. Anyways! I do
highly enjoy writing the interaction between Naruto
and the fox and hopefully there�s going to be even more interaction *looks
smug*

Gitona: Ah you say that you usually can
predict the endings of stories? Truthfully, I don�t know what the ending of
this piece is going to be. Each chapter comes from the top of my head. I deeply
apologise for forgetting to email you for this
chapter since I was running around like a headless chicken towards the airport
when I posted this but I promise the next one I�ll definitely let you know.
Thank you for being a perverted fangirl and liking
this story *smile*

Gothic_marshmallow: buahahaha
must resist the subliminal messages! Hah to be honest, I was all geared up to
writing some sasunaru smut in the end of this chapter
but for some odd reason it all geared up into Sasuke
beating the shit out of Naruto instead. Ahh, doesn�t matter, created some tension right? And as for
Kakashi being able to hold of Naru-chan�s
advances �well, he�s supposed to be a responsible adult right? *snort snort* yeah right. Thanks muchly for the great review!

Rainbird: Plot? What plot? If you see a plot
tell me where it�s hiding!! I�m hopeless at creating plots! I appreciate your
review!

Hogo-chan: wooo! *gets
smothered down* No I should be thanking you for loving this story and taking
the time to review!

Jadetiger: Well, by the time you answer this
review, you probably found a way to download Naruto.
If not, then you can probably get it off the main fansites
or do a google search for Tokyo rizon (forgot
the actual webpage�s name). And yes, expect a bit more changes in Naruto�s personality�it�s all Kyuubi�s
fault! Blame him! *points at the fox and gets mauled in the process* ouch. Hrm� I do hope you feel better soon though. *comfort*

SnyperKat: lol you
were relieved? Don�t worry I don�t really like character deaths, not even
Sakura�s � it doesn�t suit this story if she were to die and I don�t want Naruto suffering from some guilt trip anyways. Thanks!

Suicidal Skies: Yar you think I�m improving? Yay!
And yarrr an evil Naruto! I
like it when Naruto is evil! It�s so much more better than him being all innocent and na�ve.
Appreciate your review, as always!

Kenshinjunkie: muahahaha I
like it when I play mindgames on people, hell we all
do it. It�s about time that Naruto did a bit of
playing himself, it all depends whether Sasuke�s
going to nip at the bait (and hopefully do a bit more than just a little
nipping) *wink*

Sugahlei: Yes! Sasuke
you hear this? You�re in denial!! Deep down you WANT Naruto!
Fufufufu.
And thank you, I like Kyuubi�s portrayal too. Then
again, I always think, the more twisted the better. Thanks for reviewing!

Ryuukotsusei: I�m happy I made your day! And
of course happy that you like my story so much. Rabid Sakura lovers you
say? *shudder* how awful. Well I have no death threats so far so everything
should be okay. And yeah I know what you mean with wanting Kakashi
to accept that offer, but hey, I�m writing a side story of those two so keep an
eye open. I should be posting it sometime soon *grin* Again, thank you!

Yami-Hikari: Yep, I did start it off as a one shot
initially but everyone wanted more and I decided that I wanted Naruto to lash back and �conquer� what he wanted. So,
therefore, you have this story. Well seal or not weakening, Kyuubi
is definitely attempting to influence his vessel. After all, I love that fox so
I really want him to have a big part in Naruto�s
change. Thanks for the review!

KyuTails: Mah� you�re
flattering me! Stop it, you�re giving me a big ego!
*beams happily* I do try hard on the characterizations, thinking �if I was he,
what would I say to that?�. Hah, I read out your
recent review to my boyfriend and he just looked at me and walked off muttering
something about �yaoi delusional fangirls�.
*sniff* he will never understand us! Ah well. Not sure on the book though, I
think my attention span is too short to create anything long lasting,
especially anything with a plot. Nevertheless, I appreciate your kind words!

Scottishfae: *giggles* You
say that you keep your reviews short but lol, they�re
really long! But I love it cause I love long reviews!
They make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. *huggles
her foxdemon teddy bear� and gets bitten* Well I
answered most of your queries on aim, hopefully I�ll
see you on it soon too. And yes, Kakashi is such a snitch.
But hey, you know he isn�t exactly the most considerate of instructors either.
Can�t thank you enough for your gorgeous reviews!

Azamaria-chain: hee hee, well this story is initially SasuNaru
so yeah, gonna have plenty of that in the end! And as
for Naruto�s head�well, foxy demon is messing with it
*laughs evilly* thanks for taking the time to review this story!

Tachibana, Yumiko: Yeah
you are right, he could have snapped more and in a way, I wanted him to do so.
But hey he caught himself in time and besides, he�s snapping in other somewhat
different ways (ie. Kakashi
incident) Personally, I don�t think Sasuke is strong
at all. I think he�s a weak sniveling little boy doing exactly what his brother
tells him too. Don�t get me wrong, I like him and all but hey, he really REALLY has to grow up. Still, even though Kakashi trained him for that reason, he could have been a
little more considerate to his other students you know? Thanks for enjoying
this piece!

Gaah!: lol your
review made me smirk (in a nice way). Thanks!

Nicole: ahahaha yeah you�re right. I like sap but sometimes it gets
too much. I like the twisted types even better *evil grin* As for whom breaking
whom� well I guess we�ll have to wait and see (even myself cause I�m not sure
on the ending yet, like I said earlier, I just think these things up) Yar, thanks for reviewing!

Kai: Glad you
find it interesting! *beams*

Naino: Ahhh sorry hun,
can�t cater to everyone�s taste on how they like to see Naruto
and Sasuke act out. But hey, what I�m happy about is
that you like this story! And yes, I quite liked that eye quote too (must have
been my favourite if I remember correctly in that
chapter). Ahhhh Kyuubi�.I
think I have fallen in love� *dreamy sigh* Mmm
vampires� like I mentioned previously, I used to write about vampires before so
yah, it bled into the demon *chuckle*

Animegirl: woot, glad
you like my characterization of Naruto and Kyuubi. I like Naruto standing up
for himself, so expect more of that in the future!
Thanks for reviewing *grin*

Vermillion: hehe makes you giddy huh. Mmmm twisty twisty
stories. I don�t think I�ve *ever* written anything that�s not twisted.
Ah well, people seem to like my twistiness. Thanks
for liking it!

Kawaii_kitsune_thief: hee hee, I think next time though it�s
gonna be Naruto�s turn to
call Sasuke a whore. Thank you for reviewing so much.

Deathwalker: *laughs* I actually grinned at your
comment. And as for homework�well�.homework sucks *grimaces* Then again I�m the
type to leave it last minute and then panic and then work at it till 7am. Go
me. Yar! Go Naruto! Thank
you for reviewing!

Maya: true, but
it all depends who has the last laugh. Glad you liked the chapter!

Darkangel: *giggle* yes I do agree with you, Naruto is somewhat OOC, but since they are supposed to be
close to 18 years of age here, I�m taking a lot of liberties. *shifty eye look* haha,
daily nosebleeds huh. *hands you a year�s supply of tissue to stifle those
nosebleeds* Thank you for reviewing!

Kurisupi: Man, everyone loves my Kyuubi! I�m so happy *grin* and I�m also flabbergasted that
my fanfiction is living up to your expectations.
Though I never read that book you mentioned. I�m rather behind in my reading,
simply because I spend too much reading fanfiction � argh, my brain�s turning to mush because of it. Ah who cares. *bows* glad to keep you entertained
with my writing.
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