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BITCHED!	By : modeac Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Hinata Views: 103387 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 5
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non profit-I am making no money from this.

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BITCHED CHAPTER 6: STRUGGLE
AUTHORS NOTES
AU take involving characters and concepts from the Naruto 6: Road To Ninja movie. The timeline is just before the Invasion of Pain arc as the supposed timeline of the movie makes no sense.
Reality 1 is canon Konoha, Reality 2 is alternate world. This fic is a Naruto/AU!Hinata pairing.
No sex in this chapter. Mostly battle, a huge fight I had created a long time back and didn't fit in any chapter that was about simply perversions like pegging and sexual slavery.
'This' means someone is thinking.
Italics alone means the name of something, i.e. Jinchuriki, Katon Jutsu.
Horizontal ruler (a line across the page) means a page break or timeskip. It may be a few minutes, it may be a few hours...
-X- means a scene change, i.e. we start with Sakura in a clearing, then we go to Naruto and Hinata in the street.
As usual, apologies for time between updates of this story
There is a Forum Review and discussion thread for Bitched! on the AFF Forum;
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There I will answer question raised by this chapter and maybe give insights or at least ideas on where this fic is going.
Disclaimer; I do not own Naruto or any of the characters or ideas involved. This is non profit-I am making no money from this.
Reality 1, Konoha General Hospital, today…
Namikaze Menma (or Uzumaki Naruto to the people here for some reason he hadn't figured out) stood alongside an increasingly annoyed Haruno Sakura before somehow... larger than life Senju Tsunade, the fifth Hokage and a group of ANBU including a disconcertingly depressing Hatake Kakashi.
Menma had just finished relaying his story to another universe, different versions of people he knew who reacted in varying degrees of disturbed- it was hard to believe…
Tsunade felt a pang at her heart as she imagined a world where Dan lived, that they had children. Nearby, Kakashi similarly brooded wondering about worlds with Rin and Obito… Menma noticed this and wondered why people in this universe were so gloomy.
Tsunade studied the odd pair;
The one known as Menma looked strikingly similar to Naruto, though his blond hair was of a longer and more shaggy-looking style, similar to his late father's. Her medic-nin eyes could tell his musculature was subtly different from Naruto's and his choice of clothing was different too;
He wore a dark grey shirt that fit tightly on his developed musculature, fingerless bicep-length black gloves oddly wrapped in studded red-brown leather straps of some kind, baggy black pants, and red-brown sandals. He somehow managed to look somewhere between trying to not draw attention to himself and showing off.
Other-world Sakura was a totally different story; her unusual pink hair was longer than this worlds version; running to her lower back in a plait, her front bangs, lowering to her shoulders were steaked black, her face had an alien look of arrogance and malice accentuated by black lipstick and a piercing above her left eye. Her arms, uncovered by a sleeveless, almost skin-tight dark-red top were covered in what were either decorative tattoos, functional fuuinjutsu or both, covering all skin from wrist to shoulder in stunningly intricate designs of black, red and blue. She wore skintight black spandex pants with no loincloths or combat skirts obscuring her toned posterior and thighs. Black sandals and fingerless gloves completed the outfit.
While Menma stood quietly and seemingly obediently, Sakura seemed like an hate-filled child, sending venomous looks at people.
And staring at Tsunades chest in bewilderment for some reason.
Finally, Tsunade spoke up, gesturing at Menma;
"To confirm your story, you say you're a Jinchuriki?"
"Yes, Hokage-Sama. Of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. Sealed into me by the sacrifice of the third Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen during the-"
Tsunade cut him off, noticing Mnema briefly looked more terrified than she had ever seen Naruto.
'What, is the me from his world a violent psycho or something?'
Before they could continue, a medical ninja burst in. "Lady Tsunade! We have a code Black in Ward 1! We need your expertise!"
Tsunade nodded at the life-and-death declaration.
"Nar- Menma, and Sakura. I will send an exceptionally skilled medic to ascertain your condition and ID."
She vanished in a smokeless, soundless shunshin, leaving Menma and a scowling alternate Sakura with four ANBU. The elite assassins were all uneasy. They had seen the blonde strangers power earlier;
-X-
Konoha burned and sirens and screams ripped through the dust choked air as the invaders, the creatures known as the Six Paths of Pain stared up at an angry Namikaze Menma. The newcomer to this world he summoned his weapons to the scene;
From a chakra/blood matrix sealed scroll came five gems; in fact chakra crystals not unlike the pair the Uzumaki once gifted to Senju Hashirama. The crystals innate powers were further enhanced by sealing matrices that shaped and amplified the powers within.
The lead Pain, the body once known as Yahiko, showed slight surprise, expecting nothing from the young Jinchuriki except angry yelling and a straight on attack.
Menma flipped through all 12 handsigns of the zodiac then ended with the three secret handsigns created by the Uzumaki clan.
His mind interfaced with the crystals/ his weapons.
Fuuinjutsu weapons of the Uzumaki clan; created by Ying/Yang techniques, conceived by the by the imagination and made animate by physical energy sculpted and sustained by complex sealing matrices, they had been compared to shadow clones which made sense given that the Uzumaki invented the technique and others stole it. But this was more advanced. By merging the sealing jutsu assisted Ying/Yang abilities with the basics of the shadow clone jutsu, Menma had mastered creating animate beings that manifested not unlike shadow clones but each possessing unique powers and didn't dispel when struck (at the cost of requiring truly massive amounts of chakra, which was no problem for the jinchuriki).
He summoned five such creations to the field;
A large white tiger he called Hail and Dust.
A red bird known as Shooting Star.
A large robed figure known as Twilight Pyre.
A black tortoise known as Dark Rift.
A blue dragon known as Forest Fire.
Menma knew of Pain's powers and weaknesses as Konoha had used Akatsuki in mercenary operations and paid close attention to their abilities and potential weaknesses as they worked in case they turned on Konoha. He planned and attacked accordingly.
Menma observed the formation the Pains were using; they were positioned pointing at him like an arrow. Rather handily they looked the same as in his world so he presumed the powers were the same; the misshapen being known as Asura Path (which he recalled as being half ninja puppet, half arsenal) was front and center, further back and to his sides were the Human Path to his left (whose sole ability was to read minds would be useless in this fight unless Menma was stupid enough to get upclose) and to the right side was the infinitely more dangerous Preta Path, with the ability to absorb seemingly any ninjutsu it was going to be annoying. Behind the first three Pains and in front of the suspected lead Pain, Deva Path was the Animal Path, in a position to send waves of summons in any direction. At the back was the Naraka Path, protected due to its ability to resurrect the other Pains.
'First to break them up.'
His first beast to attack was the white tiger with black stripes known as Hail and Dust (so called because its elemental matrices allowed it to use fire, earth, wind and water affinities).
Six pairs of silver eyes widened as the floor beneath their feet, the dirt, the stone, the pipes and electrical cabling simply exploded like a hundred paper bombs were set beneath the street.
"Sorry for the damage." Menma whispered to no one in particular as he telepathically commanded the unnatural construct to use earth style to erupt the road the Pain's were using for footing. The streets, debris, pipes from underground exploded into the air blocking the enemies view with a 1000 shards and a wave of dust.
None of the Pains fell under the attack though, they leapt into the air to dodge the huge attack. And ran right into another.
'Wind Style: Great breakthrough.' Menma mentally commanded the same, golem-like beast. A hurricane exploded from the tigers mouth picking up the off balance enemies and countless shards of rubble from glass shards to chunks of concrete and hyperaccelerating them to many times their initial velocity.
Dust threatened to blind the Pains while larger chunks of debris stabbed and bashed into them causing injuries.
Each Pain reacted in their own way; the armoured Asura Path charged forth through the storm at where he thought his enemies were, the Animal Path summoned a massive Rhino beast that nearly stepped on the stumbling Human Path.
The Absorbing Pain was too too far away from the others to absorb enough of the artificial hurricane to help them (by Menma's design) leaving the head Pain, Deva Path to slap many projectiles away, some stabbed into him. A chunk of concrete in his face made him change tactics.
"Almighty push." He declared. The air seemingly became solid and pushed away the hurricane of debris sent at him.
Which was just what Menma wanted.
'Got to time this right.'
He counted in his head. His father Minato had observed Pain in action and noticed the lead Pain had a five second recharge between his unseen force attacks.
'Earth style: Earth Rock Pillar Spears!'
The very instance the barrier disappeared, giant spears of rock erupted from the ground. The lead Pain attempted to dodge it, but the attacks had left him imbalanced with no footing. A spear went through his foot, his upper body fell forward and met with a cold stone spike slamming through his reanimated heart.
'One down.'
-X-
The battle hadn't stopped or paused though,
The Asura Path escaped the hurricane by using chakra jets from its feet to boost through the maelstrom and over the devastation. An arsenal of bladed weaponry erupted from its unnatural body with the clear intention to skewer the also unnatural roaring tiger. A blur of colour erupted from somewhere and a huge robed figure (named by Menma as Twilight Pyre) grabbed the grotesque parody of a human by one of its arms. Menma had trained himself over years to see through the eyes of all of his Elemental Beasts and fight multiple enemies in multiple different ways simultaneously. It did give him a headache.
Before the trapped, pierced mechanoid could do anything a surge of electricity shot from the robed beings hands short circuiting the Pain. The robed giant brought its other hand (now encased in a chakra enfused rock glove weighing hundreds of pounds) down and smashed the spasming creature into the ground in a show of strength worthy of Lady Tsunade. Not taking any chances, Menma mentally ordered the Twilight Pyre to set the fallen Pain on fire, flash frying its skin, then bury it in the newly revealed mud in Earth style: Dark Swamp jutsu for good measure after its eyeballs popped from heat.
'Two down.' Menma noted seeing through the eyes of the five beasts.
-X-
Menma knew that despite killing two Pains did not mean he was winning, the Pain at the back could resurrect them; which is why at the moment the tiger hurricane hit he also sent up the Vermillion Bird Shooting Star into the air. Even through the storm it tracked the Human Path via chakra sensing.
With a boost of speed via plasma eruption from two openings on the creatures back, the demonic bird divebombed into its prey skewering the mind reading Pain on its beak taking off then skewering it a second time Shrike-like onto several metal fence poles. Menma nearly threw up observing the spectacle, but steeled himself to eliminating the rest of the enemy after thinking what Hinata did to him after he nearly freaked out after his first kill all those years ago.
'Three down.'
The Black Tortoise form known as Dark Rift leapt with a crash in front of the Preta Path, the stocky Pain (suffering a partial whiteout due to its avian enemies strobe) attempted to grab the unnatural beast to drain the chakra out of it. With speed that shouldn't have been possible for a tortoise the reptilian beast backhanded the Pain with one of its tree-thick legs, the force shattered the Pains left arm and bent it unnaturally, rupturing organs and sending the large male figure hurtling into the side of a building. Not content with the enemy being splattered like a fly, Menma sent commands to Dark Rift to utilise an earth swamp attack on the buildings foundations. The two-storey building keeled over giving the Preta Path time for its silver eyes to widen in disbelief as he was sandwiched between brick building and stone street.
'Four down.'
-X-
Forest fire, an almost glowing blue dragon possessing a mix of lightning, fire and wind summoned a scene of hell; it unleashed a storm of fire/wind fusion attacks wiping out the Animal Paths slower, corrupted summons.
The female Pain was unafraid, convinced that the bizarre creatures and their master would run out of chakra before the Pains would.
'After all he is-' The Pain was cut off when a spear of wind erupted from its chest.
'How? There's no way those things could have got behind me…'
The dying Pain turned around and saw a black and pink haired girl smiling predator-like at it.
"Hmm… I don't usually go for body-mutilation but you're pretty hot…" She winked lewdly at her.
"What… the f-ugghhh…." The Pain crumpled to the floor, its spine severed by a peach sized entry wound and its heart, lungs and sternum ravaged by a pumpkin sized exit wound.
Above, Menma started flailing wildly.
"Sakura! Why'd you jump in like that?! My beasts could have killed you?!"
"Oh, Me-chan, I know from experience that you're very precise, and delicate and so considerate of girls in the area…." She sang sultry.
Menma went red, knowing what she was talking about, then feeling saddened and a little sick.
"By the way I killed another pierced goon, he seemed to touch people and then they went 'Aaaah'- opening their mouths, like they were sucking off a ghost or something, and then they died for some reason."
"Why are you so blasé about people dying?!" Menma shrieked, waving his fist at Sakura comically.
He stopped freaking out and saw that the enemy was indeed dead and they were both surrounded by ANBU in technically a foreign village.
Sakura looked at the masked killers surroundings them. "Geez, Me-chan, show some restraint." She taunted at the steaming blond.
-X-
Back in the Present...
Menma and Sakura saw the sealing jutsu-covered door reopen.
In stepped two attractive females; Shizune, the Hokages personal assistant, high ranking medical ninja and training officer of companion and aspiring medical Hyuga Hinata.
The younger kunoichi didn't know why she was being sent. She didn't consider herself a good judge of character or an exceptionally skilled medical ninja.
Then again she had the Byakugan which would be invaluable in examining the… alternate Naruto and Sakura with her vision; bones and known injuries, chakra coil shape and size and chakra frequency and 'flavour'. She just hoped she didn't freak out.
Turns out it was the patients who freaked out; upon seeing the Hyuga enter, both doppelgangers shrieked and went on a terrified defensive; Sakura hid inside a super-fast materialised chakra barrier and began babbling; "IDIDN'TTOUCHHIMISWEAR!" Or some variation over and over.
Menma leapt in front of the frantic encapsuled Sakura and babbled also- so fast Hinata couldn't make out what he was saying.
-X-
A few minutes later…
Hinata had frantically identified that she was not the Hinata of their world, that she was a simple medic sent to verify their identities with her Byakugan and medical diagnostics.
After both stared at her for a long while with more fear than she could ever remember even in mirrors. They took deep, terror-relieving breaths and allowed her to get on with her job.
Or Menma did, Sakura struggled to stop laughing and cruelly sneering. "So the Hinata in this universe is a wallflower nurse?" She elbowed Menma crudely. "Hey Me-chan! You gonna get her to take your temperature?"
"Is there another Hyuga Hinata in your world?" Shizune asked, hoping to stop the taunting.
"Yes…"
Sakura piped in; "He's saying little because they were fucking."
The pink (mostly) haired girl leaned towards Shizune who was examining her with a diagnostic technique. And trying to figure out why the pinkette was looking at her chest and smirking.
"Or more specifically Hinata was fucking him and he lay and took it like some virginal Rinne festival date."
Hinata's byakugan shut off in shock. She went red and felt dizzy.
Menma scowled, then yelled out; "That's not true. We first met as children and became friends…"
"Yes… very close friends doing your mistress-slave thing during your spars- her beating you down then groping you…" She beamed at Shizune who looked somewhere between scandalized and embarrassed over the conversation.
"Scandalous."
Menma growled out; "We went through the academy together…"
Hinata turned her byakugan back on and scanned Menma's chakra network.
"While we weren't on the same Genin team, we trained together all the time… and we were supportive of each other."
Grinning smugly, Sakura crudely butted in; "He means that when one of them would have a bad day, your psycho twin would fuck him near to the point of death."
Menma scowled at the crude Haruno, knowing scolding her was pointless.
Hinata hurried to complete her task to escape this horrifying conversation. She soon confirmed they were indeed physically identical to their counterparts.
After verifying that they were not imposters or clones, Hinata and Shizune left. Tsunade had already declared that since they helped defeat the invading Akatsuki, they were not prisoners or enemies. Sakura followed, as did Menma. He was worried Sakura might try something given her… dislike of his Hinata.
The blonde caught up with Hinata- he couldn't detect Sakura around- he didn't know if that was good or bad.
"Do you mind if I accompany you? I can help you on your rounds."
Hinata nervously accepted.
-X-
Elsewhere...
Haruno Sakura, the bloody cherry blossom of Konoha stalked her prey.
Concealed under a cloaking genjutsu, keen green eyes studied her target. Or her ass anyway. Even under Shizune's unflattering robe she could tell the raven-haired woman was shapely and Sakura had long dreamt of fucking the bitchy assistant of the Hokage in her universe.
So fatigued from a day of her duties, including draining medical jutsu procedures to separating lightly wounded from life-or-death injuries, Shizune didn't notice the form behind her decloak and tap her on the back of the head trapping her in a delirium-inducing genjutsu.
A voice, like venom, soaked in oil, shrouded by rainbows whispered out;
"The Pink Viper strikes again... now.. introduce me to... your customs..."
END CHAPTER 6
AUTHORS NOTES
Originally there was going to be sex in this chapter but I wanted to put at least one huge battle in this story and a sex scene afterwards just didn't work
Have written several drafts of sex scenes that didn't work after such a huge battle and deserved their own chapter;
(a) Sakura genjutsu mindfucks Shizune leaving no evidence of the crime.
(b) Sakura has mindcontrolled f/f sex with Shizune (seemed to similar to recent Anabel/Serena in Domination).
(c) Sakura goes to Konoha's "Red Lantern district" and "Opens a tab" in the name of the Hokage's apprentice.
(d) Menma and Hinata have sex (couldn't figure out how that would work so quickly and make it plausible).
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