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Destiny	By : KiaraNxiar Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 1393 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Chapter List
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Written by Kiara Nicoliar
Disclaimer: I don�t own Naruto or its characters!
A/n. Leave an e-mail address if you want to be added to �Destiny� mailing list for update. It�ll only be used for update notification and will not be shared with anyone else.
Reviewers: Thank you for taking the time to review, it means a lot me! While I enjoy writing, it�s feels really great to know people actually like what I write and take the time to let me know that!

Dragon: Thank you for your reviews, it�s always good to know I have such an avid reader to my stories! I�ll definitely try to update faster, sometimes it just takes awhile to decide how to portray a character on the page!

XZanayu: It�ll be awhile till you see them becoming parents. Pregnancy doesn�t usually occur within 24 hours but I�ll try to update faster so you won�t have to wait long till the fun begins! Thanks for the R&R!

Kaa-san: I had no idea how to write het! I just wrote yaoi and changed the terms to make it het! If I am not mistaken that�s why most avid yaoi readers� liked it! Glad you liked it though!

AnA La PaNa83: We�ll see (since I have vague ideas about Naruto and Sasuke�s future in �Destiny�)! Thanks for the review!

Allys: I don�t know what would have happened to all my stories, especially, �Destiny� without you! Your encouraging words really give me the confidence when I hesitate to put up my next update and the edits makes all the differences between my embarrassing mistakes and a good fiction! Thank you a million times!

Cfox: Sorry for updating so late! I am so very happy that it had that effect on at least one reader. I wasn�t sure if I could pull off a het as I am an avid yaoi fan and it was the second lemon I wrote. As for Kyuubi, nothing less than exciting havoc can occur or is justified, which I totally am planning to give to �Destiny�. So, I hope you�ll continue to stay and read and review! Thank you!

Mary: I have the same sentiment! Thanks for the review!

Arieru-chan: Thank you and I�ll try to update sooner!

Sadistickiss: I�m really happy you liked it, it means a lot to me coming from an awesome yoai writer. Reviews always inspire & encourage me to write by letting me know that readers like what I write but even if I don�t always get one I know many enjoy it. So, you don�t have to apologize, just letting me know that once in a while will make me cheerful!

Lolistar71: Thank you and I�ll try!

XZanayu: I know it�s frustrating to wait so long for an update! I�ll definitely try harder!

Sleepy: I was definitely� surprised when I reader your review. It was� intense to say the least. I didn�t know whether to be angry or flattered. Are you sure you don�t want to start writing fan fiction? That was really� dramatic and extremely enthusiastic (I would use �hot� but I don�t want you to take it in the wrong way). I really appreciate you liking my story and I�ll try to update faster and sooner! By the way, leave your e-mail and I�ll add you to the mailing list for �Destiny� that way you�ll know as soon as it�s updated. Thanks for the review!

Niiro_Yuuyake: I started to �Destiny� because there were very few fictions with convincing m-preg with Naruto/Sasuke pairing. It�s a good to know I�m writing a good one. I thought I overdid Sasuke�s angst but it�s reassuring to hear I didn�t. Thank you very much and hope will continue to R&R!

Anon: I�ll never abandon my stories unless I have a very good reason (like dropping dead). So, stick around for more to come! (If I don�t update soon, you are welcome to leave a review to mourn for me!)

Zaden: Thank you!

Caedi: I am flattered beyond words that it�s the best m-preg you have read so far! I�ll definitely compete to stay in that place!

You might want to read �Self-Reliance� by Imbrium Iridum. It�s one of the best m-preg stories out there even though it isn�t finished. It was my encouragement to start �Destiny�.
I have tried to create a deeper yet realistic relationship between Sasuke and Naruto in �Destiny�. It�s anyone�s guess whether I will be successful but it�s definitely reassuring to know that at least it�s heading in the right direction. While I have read many fictions with Kyuubi, very few I liked regarding how he was portrayed. I tried to make him different based on how I see him yet realistic to capture his essence - manipulative, cunning but smart to some extent, after all he�s a demon and has lived long.

As for Sasuke I agree with what you wrote to the last word. That was the basis why I wrote it the way I did. However, characters always vary in fan fictions from original magna/anime to some extents. After all, it is fan fiction where the writer�s imagination is allowed to run free.

Since, I don�t have Japanese background I have little to no idea about naming someone in Japanese. However, I am going to use Japanese name for their kid otherwise it�ll be just weird. Thanks for the suggestions, I�ll definitely consider them and I don�t mind long reviews at all!

Thank you so much for taking the time to provide constructive criticism and flatter me! It means a lot to me and makes me happy to know I have such a reader for �Destiny�!

Zaden: Well, here�s your update!

Summary: Sasuke runs away from Orochimaru & meets Naruto in disguise. Fearing of Naruto�s reaction to his true identity, he embarks on a new life and tries to forget his past.

Warning: This is a yaoi pairing, will include lemons and m-preg! If you can�t handle these, leave. Also, it includes slight character mental disorder further in the story.

Beta: Allys

Pairings: Naruto/Sasuke and a surprise pairing!

Destiny

Part 6: Darkness & Nightmare

The harsh silvery light of the full moon showered the clearing in the forest, sucking in every bit of color and turning it into its own shades of silver and grey leaving the rest in shades of black. The forest was forebodingly dark and silent, and the night seemed to hold its breath for even the breeze had taken its leave and without the flutter of its wings to dance along the leaves and twigs stayed still.

Small nighttime creatures with their acute hearing were unusually quiet as they listened to the vibrancy and humming of the energy particles in a frequency beyond the hearing range of any humans. They cowered in their hidden abode in fear of disturbing the unnatural power emitting from the center of the clearing.

The still air of the night was charged with invisible electricity as raw, ancient energy hung in the atmosphere like water droplets mixed with sheer malice and lust. The very feeling of it was so primal in nature that even nature itself seemed helpless in comparison. As if recognizing the origin of this strength and conceding, the silvery-black mass of jungle stood like an ever vigilant guard surrounding, concealing the happenings in its very heart from prying, unwanted eyes, while watching apathetically, silently an act of violence too powerful to be countered by any lesser beings.

In that stark sea of white, silver, grey and black, a pair of gleaming scarlet orbs stood out like beacons. A naked figure bathed in the moonlight silhouetted half crouching, half lying on another with its head tilted back to view the vast sky harboring silver droplets of stars and moons.

In the secrecy and isolation of the night, the huge silver orb almost dropping on earth due to its unbearable weight as the only companion in conversation a deep, rough age-old voice suddenly broke through the silent night like the cracking sound of a whip. In an imitation of a whisper the voice growled with ragged breath�

�Nine months� either way it will still take a long nine months. To interfere further to hurry it along by pouring more chakra will only make it deformed,� scarlet eyes with split pupils mused, �Human cells. It�ll have human cells. I cannot deny even I�m intrigued at the end result� Exposed to such raw, undiluted power long before its existence came into question� even before it was conceived and the spark of life ignited in those cells� I wonder what it will be like��

Ruby eyes previously contained only within the pupils now occupied the entirety of the eyes with gold specks in the center in the shape of a circle to form pupils. The accursed creature looked down at the unconscious boy underneath him. With a finger adorning a claw so long and gnarly unseen to any other carnivore or beast for that matter the demon traced a silver cheek and neck almost lovingly, as if fascinated by the sheer beauty radiating off the being.

��Its inside should have been burned, mangled, damaged beyond repair and bleeding but� it resisted and� survived� Mixing my deadly chakra with its own� manipulating them to create a unique one� Maybe� this disgrace of nature will have this pathetic creature�s resistance and brain, the fool�s determination and strength, and my bloodlust to live long enough to glimpse this world after all��

Swollen lips glistening with scarlet saliva, caressed by the fiend, parted letting a small whimper escape as sparking navy eyes opened blearily to look up at the nine tailed beast. With a sudden gust of wind and reddish-orange flash, a heavy, sweet scent of orange and fire filled the clearing making the boy moan, arch his back off the ground to tilt his head back, exposing a long, slender, silvery-white neck as an offering to the warmth hovering over him.

The illusion of sparkling blue eyes and a soul shattering smile flashed through a mind otherwise hell bent on self-destruction. Each image enhanced by pheromones, sharpened and altered by a consciousness desperate for reprieve from extinction played in his imagination.

Scarlet droplets glimmering like liquid silver trailed down the young boy�s naked body on the forest floor in the wake of Kyuubi�s claws carving his prey�s neck tenderly.

Kyuubi smirked down at his prey, �Does not matter� because in the end it will die to grant my wish��

Sasuke moaned, his eyes reflecting scarlet pupils along the vast night sky above him.

��And this pitiful, disgusting creature will be the first one to die by these claws upon my freedom��

Hands trembling, Sasuke pulled the demon down on him.

XxXxX

Far away as the moon reigned on the night sky, in the flickering light of a torch in a dungeon a snake�s voice hissed, �Find him! Find him and bring him to me!�

�Orochimaru-sama, please be a little more patient. He won�t escape us,� round silver glasses glinted in the fire light as the speaker lifted his head to look at his master and spoke in a voice far too calm and melodious, �Besides, I don�t know why you did not take his body as you intended��

The statement sounding half like a question trailed off as at once golden eyes snapped from the dancing shadows of the torch fire to look at his apprentice. The narrowed eyes and ill suppressed anger contained in them was enough to let the silvered haired jounin know the other had comprehended the hidden meaning behind his words.

�Kabuto�� in imitation of being well composed the snake master�s words hissed out, �have we not discussed this already? I will not be confined within a weak body even for a short while! It would have been a burden to inhabit such a body if I could not fight to defend myself.�

As the young doctor opened his mouth to counter the sanin�s voice broke through the momentary silence, each word dripped with suspicion, �Or is it that you don�t believe my words anymore, Kabuto?�

�You know me better, Orochimaru-sama.�

Not showing even the slightest unease at his master�s ill content he continued, �I do not contend your decision or� wish. However, Sasuke-kun won�t get away from us. After all, he doesn�t have any place to go. His brother-�

�He did,� golden eyes darkened as it returned to gaze at the dancing shadows of the dimming fire in the brazier hanging on the wall once more.

�Exactly, he knows if he dares to set foot in that village he will be killed on sight. Besides, as long as Itachi lives-�

�He does,� malevolence dripped with the snake sannin�s words.

�He will seek power and will not set foot in that village. To do so would be to commit suicide by their hunter nins � he knows that.�

The apprentice paused and pushed his spectacles up his nostrils with his index, waiting for a response from his companion. But it proved to be in vain since the serpent master chose to remain silent listening to the words his mind already knew were of no significance despite how much he wanted for them to be.

Realizing his master wasn�t going to answer anytime soon he picked up his thread, �With Akatsuki�s rising threat and us to deal with none of the other shinobi villages will take him in either. They won�t create a conflict of interest with the Leaf, especially with the Sand as its ally. With their increased border patrols, guards and our spies he�ll be seen by someone soon enough. We will wait and get to him first. Sasuke-kun is as good as yours.�

The torch light flickered at the sheer envy, malice and bloodlust that spiked in the room with Kabuto�s each word and finally spilled forth in the form of a tabooed name�

��Naruto-kun.�

A suffocating silence followed, accompanied by a feeling much like the air thickening with the germs of a deadly plague spreading, contaminating everything in its reach.

�He did get away,� dripping with the bitter poison of envy his words fell from lips twisted in a sneer, �� and he does have a place to go. He left to go to him.�

�� Kabuto was silent, finally comprehending the meaning of the short answers earlier.

Uncharacteristic softness belied his voice when at long last he broke the relative quietness of the room, �The jinchuuriki won�t disobey a direct order, especially, pertaining to the Leaf�s safety. And to be known as one to never go back on his words he won�t break his oath as Konoha�s ninja and the head of hunter nins. Sasuke-kun�s aware of his position.�

�And he will still go to him,� the poisonous hiss flared like lava to match the white-hot fury boiling in his veins ready to erupt. He stood up angrily and glided like one of his summoned reptiles towards the table containing glass jars with a hand adorning a bloody red ring in their midst. The same shade as those bloodied eyes of Uchiha�

�He should have known� How could he have been so foolish as to assume otherwise� given that this time he knew of the weakness�

�That loud mouth, brainless clown seems to always be in the way. It seems Sasuke-kun can�t let him go even at the prospect of power. He�ll willingly belittle himself for such a weakness. � The sentence gritted out through grinding teeth couldn�t suppress the sheer jealousy, anger, resentment and most of all possessiveness that lay in his heart, while his treacherous mind supplied the ending, �for him�. Sasuke by all rights should be his. A most prized possession, incomparable in power and belonging to only him. To be conquered by him alone in all ways� to achieve greater power. He taught the boy everything he knew, gave him power that no one else could, spend time training to be what the prodigy was and could be. The one who brought out the potential and prepared the last of the Uchiha to be greater than Itachi, Madara and the rest of that formidable clan, and still � he lost Sasuke to an idiotic moron.

That sting in his spiteful heart was worse than a dozen bites from black mambas.

Yet with that power, those cursed eyes that could conquer the world, Sasuke harbors weakness that will be his ultimate demise. Just like him, his mind couldn�t help the snide comparison, a traitor and a fool. After all who else would break their resolve despite the promise of all consuming power? The very reason for their existences?

Malice, hatred, and determination were slowly replacing anger, jealousy and the black void that Sasuke�s betrayal and departure left in his heart. His fists curled to the point that drops of crimson liquid fell to the floor, trailing him as he turned around and strode to the cold fireplace. Forming seals, igniting fire, drawing the bloody line on the summoning circle, his resolve hardened. This time he wouldn�t hesitate. He wouldn�t stray from his path to gain what he strived to conquer � knowledge, jutsu, immortality and the power to crush all and everything in his path at his whim or desire. He�d take the young Uchiha�s body, his eyes, his everything that he should have taken long ago.

The fire blazed in fireplace as if it had been burning for hours like the jumbled thoughts running through his minds.

Despite having done everything to tear the last thread of their �friendship�, he had obviously failed to poison Sasuke�s mind against Naruto. After putting two and two together and understanding how Itachi had gained the mangekyo sharingan, he shouldn�t have obviously underestimated the strength and stubbornness of their connection to persist. Or ignored the blond nuisance that had more influence on Sasuke than he did even after six years�

Snatching an adder from the floor and almost crushing its neck in his hand, Orochimaru could almost feel the blond�s blood on his hands when he reached the moronic prot�g� of Jiraiya.

He�d make the younger Uchiha suffer for crossing him and betraying him, make him regret his foolish rebellion after all he had done for the sharingan wielder�s sake and punish him for discarding him as if he was worth nothing�

The fire in the brazier shimmered and went out. At the sudden spike of uncontrollable killing intent emitting from their master, all the occupants of the hidden lair stood frozen in place in fear of drawing that insane rage on them�

�He would tear the jinchuuriki apart and feed him to Manda while making his prodigy watch. Sasuke would learn what it meant to cross him�

Snakes hissed at their master, uncoiling in displeasure from being mistreated by their deranged summoner before having to depart from the warmth of the crackling fire.

�Go and find the idiotic blond frog summoner, tail him till you find the Uchiha. Inform me at once when Sasuke-kun is found and don�t lose sight of him.�

Knowing the instructions were as much to the departing cold-blooded reptilians as to him, the silver haired jounin bowed to his bad tempered master before leaving the room to send off hunter nins after the jinchuuriki.

XxXxX

A/n. ��he lost Sasuke to an idiotic moron.� I think it would sting anybody if they had one of the two Uchihas in their hand and lost them to anybody including Naruto. I sympathize with Orochimaru.
Leave a comment if you sympathize with poor Orochi-chan! Cheers!
A/a/n. If anyone wants to suggest any names for mini Naruto + Sasuke, leave a review with a brief explanation. It has to be Japanese by the way.
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