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Chapter Summary: Sasuke overhears something, Naruto
apologises to Sakura and then confronts Kakashi later on.

I want to thank kayoko_chan for
taking the time to beta this chapter for me�I am not worthy!
~~

Sasuke strode purposely down the
corridors of the main building, intent on handing in his completed report. He
had been woken up in the middle of the night for a short, B-class mission. He
had not enjoyed it; the mundane mission should have been a C-rank. However, there
had been a large sum of money deposited for it which had significantly upped
the rating. The reason? A
sex-starved middle aged widow who had attempted to latch her manicured claws
onto his trousers throughout the entire thing. He had uncaringly told
her to �piss off� before delivering her safely to her destination. The result? An irritable, sleep deprived Uchiha.
He had began to believe that hitching himself up with a woman for his clan
restoration would rather be like condemning himself to death- even the most
capable kunoichis appeared to melt into puddles of goo around his presence. The Uchiha
name and his striking good looks be damned, honestly.

�Did she succeed?� asked a bored-looking Chuunin
at the �in� desk, after skimming quickly through the mission report before
stamping it.

Sasuke steadily glared at the
older man, who seemed to be virtually unaffected. Actually, the man appeared
that he could not be bothered for his own existence let alone for anything
else. Wonderful, another Shikamaru-type.

�Next time,� the youth ground out in his classic monotone
voice, �When they ask for me for something like this, tell them that I�m dead.
I really do not have time for missions like these.�

�Sure, whatever.�

He
turned on his heel and left the room. What a waste of time. Absently he
wondered what Naruto was doing. It would have been a lie to say that the blond
idiot hadn�t been on his mind �that
fucking hickey- the entire time. He didn�t know what it was really. On one
hand, getting involved in a �rival-hate� relationship would prove disastrous,
both to his sanity and the village�s expectance for him to continue the Uchiha line. On the other hand, he wasn�t drawn to anything
else. Naruto brought out irrational emotions he thought he had carefully
suppressed a long time ago. Negative, irrational emotions �where was the hate? - at that. Anger and frustration for Naruto�s loud remarks and stupid antics. Jealousy
for Naruto�s hidden power. Confusion
for Naruto�s �hush-hush� past. And lust for Naruto�s large blue eyes and flawless, lithe body. An
unmistakable urge to ��the blond begging
on his hands and knees- dominate. But if he looked deeper, it really wasn�t
about looks and gender in the end. Naruto belonged to his very own, unique
category. And he didn�t like it one bit. How could he be prepared to take on Itachi when he couldn�t even ignore that stupid dobe in the background?

The Uchiha paused and blinked. He
had been so engrossed in his musings that he had unknowingly meandered off in a
totally different direction. He was about to do a right about turn and march
straight out when muffled voices reached his ear from one of the conference
rooms nearby.

�No! Not him! I am not paying for this mission for him!�

�Taneka-san, please calm down. You
requested for one of our best available man. I can assure you that he is very
capable-�

�With all due respect, Hokage-sama,
I am insulted that you would even consider recommending that boy. I refuse!�

Sasuke tilted his head towards the
locked door to his right. He could distinguish the pompous tone of one of the
customers and the Hokage�s patient voice. He
concentrated, dropping his chakra signature to the minimum before moving
closer. Curiosity had struck him for he was interested in finding out who exactly they were referring to. Konoha�s
high-ranking ninjas were renowned for their professional skill and some
customers would jump at the chance in hiring one, let alone be picky in their
choice.

�Naruto is very precise in completing his missions. Please
reconsider and give him a chance.�

Ah, one mystery solved. He could hear it clearly now, the Hokage�s voice was straining and bordering on impatience.
But why was this Taneka so adamant in not having
Naruto take on the mission?

�You�re expecting me to agree in having a demon protect
me?!� came the shrill reply, loudly filtering through the wood. �He will turn
against me!�

�Taneka-san!
Please keep your voice down!�

Demon? Why the hell would Naruto
turn against anyone? He thought that the boy didn�t even know the meaning of
the word �backstab�. With a calculative frown upon his face, Sasuke quietly walked away. The Hokage
had sounded angry and it would have been extremely bad form on his part to be
caught eavesdropping. Anyway, he needed sleep. Researching on why �demon� was
often associated in the same sentence as �Uzumaki
Naruto� can wait.

~~

Naruto leapt from one of the roofs he had hopped onto before
landing gracefully on his feet, knees bending slightly to absorb the impact.
Now on solid ground, he studied the quaint dwelling in front of him. Taking a
deep breath, he walked up to the door and knocked firmly.

�Did you forget- oh it�s you. What do you want?�

The woman standing before him evidently was expecting
someone else. She now regarded him disdainfully. Naruto noted that she wasn�t
wearing black or tearfully wailing, thank the gods.

�Good morning, Haruno-san! Is uh,
Sakura-chan in?�

Please let her be okay, please let her be okay, please let
her-

�She�s resting,� was the snappy reply.

Truly, relief was such a wonderful sensation. It had,
thankfully, overpowered the hateful disapproval reflecting in the woman�s eyes.
Momentarily.

From the confines of the house, Sakura�s voice rang out
faintly, asking who was at the door. Naruto flashed the woman with what could
be labeled as a 1000-watt smile. �May I see her, please?�

It was no secret that Sakura�s mother disliked him. Sakura
had put it down to the blond�s prankster,
troublemaking ways but Naruto knew the real reason. It was so obvious. The
mother had thrown such a hissy fit when she first
discovered that the blond was going to be her daughter�s teammate, he
remembered. Right now, the older woman merely looked annoyed and ran a hand
through her washed-out rose hued hair. It appeared that she still believed that
Naruto was going to sway Sakura with his �demon� ways. �I don�t think now is an
appropriate time. I�ll let her know that you stopped by.�

Naruto�s right eyelid twitched.
Tough cookies you bitch, he thought stubbornly. �She�s awake right now isn�t
she? And I really do have important business matters to discuss with her.� He
stopped for a moment before emphasizing strongly. �Shinobi business.�

She looked ready to
slam the door in his face but instead, reluctantly stepped back with a
muttered, �Very well. Make sure to keep it short.�

�Thank you, Haruno-san.�

The interior looked well lived in and quite homely. Out of
memory, he maneuvered himself towards the direction of Sakura�s room and
lightly knocked again on the closed door.

�Come in!�

Sakura was indeed resting comfortably on her bed with legs
spread out in front of her, dressed in a pair of pyjamas. On her thighs was an
open scroll. The girl looked up and visibly tensed when she saw who had
entered.

�N-Naruto��

The blond stood uncertainly and attempted to twist his lips
into one of his normal shit-eating grins. It came out a watery half-smile
instead.

�Hi, Sakura-chan. Am I disturbing
you?�

He could plainly see the anger flowing across her pretty
face, taking hold of her features. The carefully plucked eyebrows furrowed and
the green eyes narrowed, darkening with the emotion. Even her mouth thinned
out, pressing into a grim line.

�What are you doing here?� she enquired icily.

�I came�to apologise for
yesterday.�

With sharp, jerky movements she tightly rolled up the scroll
and slammed it down onto the mattress next to her. �Well apology not accepted, Uzumaki. Leave.�

Time to bring out the big swords, he thought wryly to
himself. An angry Sakura is a scary Sakura. At least she didn�t try to beat him
up this time and he briefly wondered why. Maybe she matured beyond the physical
violence and moved onto the cold shoulder type thing that most females seemed
to be experts in.

�B-But Sakura-chan�� Tweak that
annoying whine a bit more to the needed, effective pitch. �Sa-a-akura-chan!�

�No buts. That was a horrible thing to say yesterday.
Leave.�

Before she could protest, the youth neared her and dropped
to his knees on the floor by her side. He took her hand in his warm palms,
holding it firmly there so she couldn�t pull away. Effortlessly, Naruto widened
his blue eyes into a comic but cute �puppy-look�.

�Sakura-chan I�m really really sorry! I was having a really bad day yesterday and��
� a well placed pause and a convincing sniffle- ��I just snapped. I really
didn�t mean everything I said. That pervo Kaka-sensei
was picking on me and with Sasuke acting like a
bastard as usual, I just lost my cool. You know I didn�t mean to call you a
bitch, you�re not! You�re a beautiful goddess to me!�

The young woman just stared at him skeptically. He could
almost hear her thought process; she was contemplating whether to kick him out
or believe his words and forgive him. For an added effect, he allowed his lower
lip to quiver dramatically.

�You really mean that?� she asked after a long moment.

Naruto nodded enthusiastically and beamed at her. If he had
a tail, he�d make sure to wag it eagerly. �I was acting like a real jerk
yesterday. Please forgive me Sakura-chan! I�ll do
anything you want!�

She pursed her lips together before relaxing. �Fine. But you owe me one.�

The demon-vessel kept the smug smirk that threatened to
overtake the imploring look on his face. Winning people over was too easy
sometimes. Instead, he jumped from the floor and hugged her tightly with a loud:
�Thank you, Sakura-chan!�

The girl flailed her arms and pushed him off. �Hey hey, Naruto, stop that!�

He gave her another charming smile before standing up
properly to dust invisible dirt off his trousers. �I should go; I promised your
mother that I wouldn�t stay too long.�

�Sure Naruto. Uh, by the way, I�m not allowed to partake in
any missions for about a week so let Sasuke-kun know
okay? And tell him to come visit me, will you please?�

Naruto�s blood promptly froze in
his veins at her statement.

�Why? Did anything happen, Sakura-chan?�

She sighed and tucked stray strands of hair behind her ears.
�I was running a few errands early this morning at the hospital. It was really
busy though and I guess my mind was somewhere else �cause
I slipped on that one winding staircase and broke my leg.� She chuckled,
sounding slightly embarrassed. �It�s stupid how I wasn�t able to catch myself
eh? Some ninja I am!�

He continued to stare at her as she was talking. Images of
that rag-doll flashed continuously into his mind. It was the toy�s left leg
where the main stitches had been pulled out, revealing some of the downy
stuffing from inside. He remembered it clearly now. Sakura�s hand was resting
protectively on her left leg.

��anyways, I managed to heal it myself but the main doctor
told me to take it easy for a week since it was such a nasty break. It was
really painful too but I blocked it out��

�Fucking Kyuubi�what the hell were
you thinking!� Naruto kept screaming in his mind, trying to rouse the demon fox
into saying something but to no avail. �How could you trick
me into doing something like that, you asshole!�

��That�s the problem y�see, with
direct chakra healing on bones�you don�t need a cast but the area is still
tender so it�s best to rest for a couple of days till the bones harden properly
and- oi, Naruto are you listening?�

He immediately snapped out of his daze and scratched the
back of his head. �Heh heh, sorry about that. I was just thinking how awful
it must have been for you. I guess you�re stuck here for a couple of days right?�

She nodded.

�Well, I guess I should go now and let you rest up some
more. I�ll come visit and let me know if you need
anything, okay Sakura-chan? The great Uzumaki Naruto will always be there when you�re in need!
That�s my ninja way!�

�Hah. Right then, see you Naruto and thanks for apologizing.
Oh and don�t forget to tell Sasuke-kun okay?�

�Bah, like that bastard ever thinks of anyone but himself,�
he grumbled automatically.

�Naruto!�

It was after he had left her house, after aimlessly walking
around the streets of Konoha did he realize just how
much influence the fox really did have. And that rag-doll
technique�what a potential for power. Naruto whistled tunelessly to
himself as he passed one of the neighbourhoods, attempting
to distract his thoughts away from the present. He should have been hungry, but
he wasn�t. What had happened to Sakura and the fact that it had been somewhat
his doing, made him lose his appetite. It�troubled him.

Suddenly, the youth�s sensitive senses caught a marginal
change of air pressure and the faint whistling sound which accompanied it. He
threw his arm up, catching the small projectile that was aimed at his head. It
was a stone.

With a questioning look upon his tanned features, he turned
around to see who had thrown him the missile. He hadn�t expected it to be a
bunch of kids, staring at him with childish frowns and pouts on their faces.
They all barely looked over six years of age. Oh he definitely was not pleased.
Already his mood had gone to the shits and this was not helping at all. The
ninja sauntered over to them, making sure to corner them against a tall fence.

�Which one of you threw this at me?� he demanded, holding
the smooth stone up between a thumb and index finger as evidence.

The children�s large eyes flitted across each other before
settling on one of the taller boys, silently daring him to answer the ninja�s
question. He pouted defiantly and stepped forward as if rising up to a
challenge. How admirable. The gang�s cute little leader.

�It was me.�

Naruto raised one fair eyebrow as he scrutinized the boy in
front of him. �Why? Don�t you know that it�s wrong to throw things at innocent
people walking by?�

�I heard that you�re a bad man!� the snotty-nosed brat
accused loudly while the others around him nodded, spurred on by their leader�s
brave proclamation.

�Who told you that?�

�I heard my mum tell papa that�so�s-so�� the boy�s strong
voice faltered from Naruto�s hardened gaze, ��so I
wanted to protect them!�

The blond�s jaw tightened at that.
They were young and understandably, would think like that if it came from their
mother. Damn prejudiced villagers! Normally, he would have scolded them gently
or flashed them a grin but today he honestly didn�t feel like it. He
entertained an idea of telling the kids to go fuck themselves� if they knew
what the swear word meant. The children in the meantime, fidgeted; eager to
escape.

�I don�t know what exactly you heard�� the teenager said
calmly with a dangerously soft voice, ��But I am not bad. I would never, ever
hurt your parents. I work just as hard as everyone else to protect this village
from enemies. Please don�t throw things at people you don�t know anything
about.� To illustrate his point, he clenched the stone in his hand. It crumbled
instantly. �Am I understood?�

If the children�s eyes were wide before, they were the size
of saucers now. They watched transfixed, expressions mixed with awe and fear as
dust trickled from the fox-boy�s closed palm to be swept away by the slight
breeze.

�You may go now. And remember what I said.�

They needn�t be told twice. Now alone, Naruto rubbed his
temples and resumed his stroll. He would have thought that being an outcast for
nearly eighteen years would have softened their hateful gossip. No, it still
hurt like a bitch. He was so sick of it all. It�s a wonder that he hadn�t left
or worse, told Konoha a big fat �fuck you� and joined
the ranks of Akatsuki. He had shamelessly wanted to,
many times. But the ties to his birthplace and the few friends that he had�even
that stupid Hokage dream,
were too strong; unlike Sasuke who left without
thinking twice. Naruto inwardly scowled. The painful burn of the Uchiha�s actions and words over the past couple of days had
faded away. He had forgiven him and amazingly still loved the boy with all his
heart. But he was angry. His love wasn�t wrong and damn it, he was going to
prove it to his teammate even if it killed him. If love was going to drag him
into some form of hellish oblivion then he was going to be sure to drag Sasuke down with him. Kyuubi was
right. He needed to change. From now on, Uzumaki
Naruto gets what he wants.

�I thought you liked children.�

Naruto stopped at his tracks, cocking his head to one side.
�Not always, Kakashi-sensei.�

The older man had almost magically appeared, casually
leaning against the wall with that dumb �Icha Icha Paradise� book opened in front of his masked face.
�It�s a good thing you told them off.�

�I want to apologise for
yesterday. I snapped. You know how things are.�

�I understand. However, think of others before you snap. Did
you apologise to Sakura? She was devastated and
especially since she broke her leg today��

�Yes, yes I did. I really hope she gets better soon! It�ll
suck if I have to do missions with that stupid bastard Sasuke
without Sakura-chan! Now if you excuse me�I�m going
to see Tsunade-baba. I wonder if there are any new
missions for me...� The blond�s tone had lightened,
giving emphasis to the misconception that he had the attention span of a
goldfish. Worrying Kakashi was the last thing he
needed�especially when the jounin had a bothersome
talent of reading him as plainly as that smutty book he always carried around.

�So how are relations between you and Sasuke?�

Naruto gritted his teeth behind closed lips. His instructor
was following him, easily keeping up pace. The youth entered a narrow alley so
he could cut through the streets and reach the Tower faster. �He�s still an
A-class asshole if that�s what you�re asking.�

�Oh, �cause I was thinking that
there was something more going between you two.�

The younger man abruptly stopped next to a buzzing
air-condition compressor unit and folded his arms across his chuunin vest. �What are you insinuating?�

�Oh�I don�t know. I was hoping you could tell me,� Kakashi pleasantly drawled.

�Why don�t you ask your precious Sasuke?
He�s your star student, isn�t he?� Naruto snapped nastily. He didn�t regret his
words this time.

�I�m not asking him. I�m asking you. What�s
up with you two lately hmm? Naruto, I do worry about your well-being, you
know.�

�Why the hell do you even care?!
You never cared before about me, why should you start now?�

Kakashi�s visible eye narrowed at
his student�s heated words but he remained silent. Now looking quite enraged,
Naruto stepped towards his once-teacher. Fisted hands remained rigid at his
sides. He was trembling; frustration, anger, neglect, oppression over the years
rising up in torrents and threatening to take over. A voice at the back of his
mind whispered that there�s only so much a human being can take and the
teenager wasn�t sure whether it was the fox who said that or some inner conscience.
But it was just unfair! Everything was so goddamned unfair!

�Always doting on him! Sasuke that, Sasuke this, you�re
so perfect. Let�s ignore Sakura �cause she�s weak.
Let�s ignore Naruto �cause he�s an idiot. Let�s go disappear with Sasuke and teach him chidori
during the first Chuunin exams and dump that useless
Naruto with the closet-pervert Ebisu. Let�s continue
picking on Naruto and praise Sasuke. Remember? Huh? Huh?!�

�You know why I did what I did, Naruto. Sasuke
had the effects of Orochimaru�s seal still lingering
on him and his opponent at the time was Gaara of the
Desert. He needed help. Besides, chidori isn�t
something a non-sharingan user can use effectively.�
If Kakashi was hoping that his calm, soothing voice
was going to pacify the blond, he was wrong.

�You�re allegedly the famous copy-nin!
You�re supposed to be a user of a thousand-fucking-techniques!
There must have been something else that you could have taught me!�

With that, Naruto pivoted his body and began move the
opposite direction. He didn�t have the energy for another confrontation. Behind
him, Kakashi�s voice rang out.

�Sasuke isn�t as strong as you,
Naruto. You know as well as I do how he keeps chasing a ghost. He was
weak-willed enough to seek power from Orochimaru
after all. Please don�t question my decisions on the matter; they were for the
best.�

The boy�s feet stopped their movements. He rolled his head
once on each side, feeling the satisfying cracks of tense bones popping. Then,
he turned to look back at his teacher with a bitter smile gracing his
attractive face.

�So what makes Sasuke so damn
special, huh?� He murmured with a low voice but Kakashi
could pick it up all the same. This time, he swaggered back to the older man as
he continued to talk. �It can�t be his insane good looks, I know that. Maybe
it�s because he�s the last available Uchiha eh. You
like the prospect of teaching a genius like yourself, right? Or did he offer
you a wicked blowjob every now and then in compensation? I mean, he�ll do anything for power, right?�

It was a miracle that the alley was empty, save for the sun
shining brightly and the distant chirping of birds. People probably would have
questioned the sight of the shorter Naruto backing Kakashi
up against an unyielding wall. Though the demon-vessel knew that Kakashi was allowing himself be cornered like that if only
to find out what the hell he was getting at.

�You�re overstepping your boundaries,� the jounin hissed.

�Am I? You�re not my teacher anymore.�

�I�m still your superior.�

Naruto was grinning, showing off perfect white teeth and
abnormally sharp canines. The blue orbs had contracted, shining brightly
against their white backdrop. He could see clearly the shadows forming on the
dark cloth covering Kakashi�s face as other�s mouth
moved. The noticeable disapproval was reflecting strongly from the one eye. It
caused lines to appear around it as the barely exposed skin creased.

�Please, sensei� if I suck you off like a good boy will you
be nice to me like you are to Sasuke? Will you train
me like you train him?� Naruto pleaded mockingly, deliberately pressing his
smaller body against the copy-nin�s.
He rocked his hips suggestively, tongue licking leisurely across his pink lips
before pursing them together in an irresistible pout. �I promise I�ll swallow.�

He could acutely feel Kakashi�s
carefully masked chakra flaring at the contact. Gently, the jounin
placed his large hands on the youth�s shoulders before pushing him away. After
swallowing audibly, he finally asked. �Naruto, is your seal weakening? You�ve
been acting strangely.�

The blond�s frighteningly
seductive mood had suddenly vanished, leaving behind a somber look on the young
visage. �No. The fox is not getting out any time soon if that�s what you�re
scared of, so don�t worry. Konoha is safe from this
demon at least.� He then waved his hand dismissively, turning away from the
man�s piercing gaze. �I�m bored, I�m going to see if
there are any missions available. Thanks for the talk, Kakashi-sensei!�

He jumped high in the air, performing a perfect somersault
and landed on one of the roofs. Giving the jounin one
last, disturbingly cheerful wave, he hopped from house to house towards his
destination.

TBC
~~

There! Done! If you guys are wondering why Naruto seems so
OOC in this one, it�ll be explained later on. Here�s the review
responses! *sulks regarding the recent
tragedy*

Scottishfae: Ick, I
really hope you managed to get your paper done on time. I�ve had a lot of
fiascos like that myself so I can relate *shakes fist at university*. Yah, it�s
supposed to be voodoo but I�m I labeled as something a bit more �ancient�
seeing that the fox is god knows how many eons old *shifty eye look*. I�m so
happy you�re enjoying my chapters and hopefully you�ll enjoy this one too!
*hugs* thank you for the review!

Random ghost: Well
he didn�t do *too* much as you can see in this chapter�just enough to keep her
out of the way for a bit. Thank you for reading my story!

Gothic_marshmallow: hee hee, you know what they say� with age comes
experience *pets Kyuubi* �sorry there�s no sasunaru action in this chapter, but there will be soon I
promise! Hopefully you�re satisfied with
the slight NaruKaka implications here *smile*

Celticfx: Well the main reason he�s helping
Naruto, as Kyuubi mentioned before, was that he
doesn�t want to be stuck in a weak vessel. He also says that he�s bored and the
whole thing amuses him � you know how demons are! There�s no SasuNaru action in this chapter, unfortunately but
hey�there might be some next time! Thank you for thinking so highly abt my story and thank you for the review!

Devious Lil Devil: oh my seems that my
Kyuubi is acquiring a steady fanbase!
He really is manipulative isn�t he? I love it! And as for Sakura, I didn�t want
to kill her off because it�ll make the story too complicated but hopefully this
will satisfy. *gives the fox a passionate French kiss but ends up getting her
lips literally bitten off* there you go, a kiss for you!

Jadetiger: here you go, an update! Hope you
weren�t waiting too long!

Ruby Lee: hah, Kyuubi is super fun to write with his eloquent I�m-better-than-you speech patterns. I also find him so easy
to write! Thank you for reviewing *smile*

Ayonoi: I�d love the fox to be with
Naruto�unfortunately it�s all in his head and somehow, his body will need some
real life physical pleasure. Which is where our beloved Sasuke-chan comes in! And I can�t believe that you
recommended my fic to your friends� I�m blushing damnit�*starts acting like Hinata*.
Thank you ever so much for reviewing! I feel all warm inside now *grin*

Sansty_san: hee hee, calm down! Here�s another chapter. Thank you for your
enthusiastic response!

Ryu: Yesssss
give in to those haaaappy yaoi
thoughts! *wiggles fingers* Happy you like my chapters!

Kenshinjunkie03: Ohhh don�t worry! I think Sakura is pretty cool (when she�s
not acting all fangirly that is). I would never kill
her off (unless it suited the plot, but in this fic,
it doesn�t). Thank you for reviewing!

Juli: *squeals* if you do draw Kyuubi/Naruto smex art, email
them over my way! And there�s nothing wrong with liking the Kyuubi
parts more�after all, that sexy demon is hella fun to
write

Tenohikari: Yes�.Naruto needs a Sasuke doll�.so when he rubs the Sasuke
doll�s crotch, our favourite angsty
Uchiha will come begging for his horniness to be
relieved! Buahahahahaha!

Akuma_river: Well�this is what happens *grin*
thank you for taking the time to read my story!

Darkangel: Haha, I was
amusing myself on the �art of fellatio� bit. I was imagining a class scenario
throughout the entire thing. I am so happy you�re enjoying my story *hugs*

Azamaria-chan: mmm as you
can see in this chapter, nothing *too* serious happened to her but at least
she�s out of the picture for a bit! Thank you ever so much for the review
*smile*

Hogo-chan: As my wonderful beta mentioned, this
chapter is lighter compared to the previous one (cause I don�t want to
over-play the angst too much) but next one will be more serious *grin* Hope you
enjoyed this chapter!

Washi: Trust me�I like my interpretation of Kyuubi too! To be honest, I have NO idea where I�m taking
this fic. The only thing I�m sure about is the
hardcore smut scene in the end! *laughs* this is so typical of me. Anyways,
thank you for reviewing!

MultifacetedTune: yah�the first chapter was sad but
then I realized, no! I didn�t want to leave Naru-chan
like that! Unfortunately, or fortunately for you, my mind is on smut constantly
so whatever relationship there is out there�I will write it as a sexual thing *thwaps herself*. Glad you like my writing style and
chapter! (and I love your nickname)

TenshiKaitou: Here�s some more for you *chuckles*

Ryuukotsusei: Believe me�I nearly got a nosebleed myself
when I was imagining Naruto sucking Sasuke off�and vice
versa. And don�t worry, Kyuubi�s going to be lurking in
the background there too *giggles* �Not sure on Kakashi,
but there�s a bit of a teaser in this chapter. (loves the
slutty!Naruto type). I haven�t written or published any
yaoi fics before, since I was
an avid het fic writer�But I
did some yaoi roleplaying and
*cough* watched a lot of gay porn so I guess you can call me a bit �experienced�
in the field. Thanks for the encouragement!

Kirsch: No no, it isn�t cruel to torture characters!
I do it all the time! I love it! �did you say Naruto orgy�?
*dabs at her nose bleed* ahem. Well in all honesty, I like being sadistic so yeah�the
final lemon�s gonna be really�hard core *grin* thanks
for the review!

Suicidal Skies: *bows*
thank you ever so much for your kind words. And I�m overjoyed that you added this
fic to your recommended section! Again, thank you!

SnyperKat: Yah! Kyuubi
makes things a hell of a lot more interesting! Hopefully the next chapter will have
some more SasuNaru going on�well probably will knowing
my pervo mind. Heh heh heh

Yami-hikari: Weee my fox
is getting to be ever so popular! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
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